My First FF- YEH VAADA RAHA(chp 19 pg147) - Page 54

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

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oh..i missd commenting in dis update! Didnt knew u wil update d nxt part so quickly! :((
a/w..der aye durust aye! 😉 So am cmenting nw!
Awesum update! 👏 thank u so much dear your are always welcomed🤗...dont worry abt late comment...u commented that matters more...actually i'll be very busy in coming days so thought of giving quick updates till i am free.

uh..chand is so calculatd! Evn wth hs son he is counting duratin and askng for interest n profit han?!! Too sad! Hope sumday hs eyes open! you have to wait a little longer for that😆

On the other hand abhay was so understandng and seemed even mre mature than hs father! oh..he has beared so much! So it ws the death of hs sistr tht made thm apart! Felt bad abt her! Want to knw wat happnd tht hs mom blamd chand fr hs sister's death.. you will know it in the chapter where i'll give haseena or chand's pov

i knw i hav said u many times bt want to say once mre tht i love dis abhay yar! The way u hv shaped hs character i just love love love it! Mayb mre cz he nevr left hope n is a fighter! And i love dis fighting attitude!😊 thank u once again for liking my version of abhay raichand this much🤗...but i m afraid now...his character has other shades too...he'll be completely diff abhay then...i m worried now u'll like that abhay or not😔

great tht he acceptd the deal bt am bit worried nw..cz wat wud happn if he lose?? 😕 thats another tension...filhaal toh enjoy abhiya moments 😉
lovd the way u brough out both their feelings!😳
the beach moment was awesum once again..👍🏼 awww glad u liked it😳

lovd their heart to heart talk and they kissd sealing the promise! Tht was really beautiful..⭐️
and pia said ye vada raha..perfctly matchng the title! Excellent!👍🏼 yes when i was writing it i get this idea to to put the title in her dialogues😆...after all its all about their commitment n love for each other
the last lines were lovely!😊 thanks🤗
hope they stay togthr like dis forevr..😊 i also hope for that😆😉

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

anji dnt worry ,aftrall every human has diffrnt shades bt the important aspect of charactr myt get shadowd bt never really leaves.isnt it?
And i hope the same fr abhay here! 😊 yes offcourse...sometimes somethings happen in life which leave their marks on us...no matter how strong we are, how optimistic we are...we all feel the pain, we all get disappointed n depressed ...after all we all are human...but with the support of our friends n family we can definitely come out of it if we have strong will...n abhay ...you know he is a head strong character...he do everything with passion whether it is love or hatred or any other feeling

b/w..in cuming days u said u wil b busy bt plzz dnt quit writting n dis ff.. tak hwevr much tym u need bt do continue. dont worry i wont quit this ff without completing it...i was just saying that i'll become little busy...but i'll continue it in any circumstances...once i'll adjust to my new routine..i will not take much time...as now i m free for few days so i thought of giving some quick updates.

Originally posted by: anjali0111