HELP! swaron SS!(update page 18)

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nish22

@nish22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Cheeekkooo Tere maut mere haath main hi Hoga!! How Dare you End it there?!?! And Sharon Awww How Awesome of her!!

BTW I Loovedd it to Bits :D Wonderfully described!

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manasi

@manasie23

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

cheeku tune muje pm acc se nikal dia kya??? n itt was awesome... swayam ne khud ka fikar chodke sharon ko dhakka dia wow n the last para was awesome...

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Snowey

@Snowey

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Nicely done, specially the accident and the aftermath.

Sharon shaken but still being strong for Swayam is exactly how i would picture her in a situation like this. she sure is confident and a very strong girl after all.

Hoping there morning is pleasant and all is well.

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Ye kya ho gaya ? Abhi to tak we were enjoying SwaRon silly fight aur yahn accident. This was really awesome update. Could literally fill the helplessness of Sharon. Waiting for next part.

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Awesome...loved it...
awww loved the way sharon was taking care of swayam

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Awesome update.swayam ne sharon ko bachaya n then sharon take care of him.waiting for next update

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Divya

@dvmishra

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Simple gr8 felt lyk seein evrythng live. Plz update soon

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Lovely update kritz.

Itna katharanah accident ki kya jarut thi.

I was helll shocked.

update next part soon.

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Cheeku that was cheeky of u to end it where u did - it was simply awsum ... how he saved her life & now how she was desperately tryig to do the same - this update is literally a cliffhanger - now pls pls pls update soon aur hope Swayam ko hosh aajaye 😕

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

Whoa! The story just took quite an unexpected turn. Awesome twist. I am really dying to know what happens next. Please update soon!!

P.S. I totally support you if you are planning on killing either one of them. 😉

P.P.S. I STILL love Swaron!

Edited by Sawyer_Tom - 13 years ago