New AarYa FF; K@$hm@k@$h IMP NOTE pg 79 - Page 23

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update keep the good work dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ansh gets up and snatches the packet from MAANS hand'..he opens the packet and is really happy'.its his favorite chocolates'..

I WAS LAUGHING WHEN I SAW MAAN LOL UR LIKE ME I ALWAYS CALL YASH MAAN WHEN I WATCH PUNAR VIVAH
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Originally posted by: Maneet13

Ansh gets up and snatches the packet from MAANS hand'..he opens the packet and is really happy'.its his favorite chocolates'..

I WAS LAUGHING WHEN I SAW MAAN LOL UR LIKE ME I ALWAYS CALL YASH MAAN WHEN I WATCH PUNAR VIVAH




well this is GC's impact maan ho ya yash...hai to GC hi..keeps drooling over mind...well its you who noticed that...i changed that now...thanks a ton
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Posted: 13 years ago


The English translations of the update are in the brackets...sorry for the mistakes if committed'..But a request if you are comfortable with Hindi please read the update in Hindi only...''

Part 9


Yash: ye maine kya keh dia'mujse kitni badi galati ho gayi'muje aarti se maafi maangni hi hogi'.[Why did I say that to Aarti'I made a big mistake'I will have to apologise to aarti]

Aarti ran back to her home'.the past she was avoiding from yash was now in front of him'here yash even wanted to meet aarti and apologise for what all he did'.

At Sindhiya Mansion

Yash went along with ansh directly to his room'this was the first time he never spoke to anyone after return from his office'

Gayatri: ye yash ko aaj kya hua'bina baat kiye seedhe hi apne room mein.. [what has happened to yash without even talking he went to his rrom..]

Vidhi: pata nahin mummy ji shayad office ka koi tension hoga [don't know mom may be he is tensed because of some office work]

Gayatri: job hi bhagwan karein jaldi thik ho jaye [whatever it is I hope it gets solved soon..]

Ansh: papa vo aunty kitni achi thin a muje milna hai unse dubara' [papa that aunty was really nice I wanted to meet her again..]

Yash kept silent dint speak up'

Ansh: papa muje vo aunty se milna hai aap milwaoge na? [papa I wanted to meet her'will you do that na..?]

Yash: haan beta milwaunga kyuki milna to muje bhi hai'or'[yes son of course because even I want to meet her and']

Here at Aarti's place'payal and palak went busy with their school work'and aarti was lost in her own thoughts'

Aarti(self-thought): aarti ye sach kabhi na kabhi to saamne aana hi tha'kitne din chupta'.mujse aise wha se bhaag kar nahin aana chahiye tha'.pata nahi yash ko kaise lag raha hoga'? [Aarti the truth had to come in front one day'I shudnt have ran and come'don't know how will yash feel with my reaction?]

She takes Prashant's frame in her hand'.

Aarti: Prashant ye mere saath hi hamesha kyu hota hai'.jab bhi main aage badhna chahti hu hamesha kuch na kuch aise ho jaata hai'.pata nahin bhagwan kya chahta hai mujse'[Prashant why does it always happen with me'whenever I try to move ahead in my life something happens'.dont know what god wants from me']

Aarti: yash ki zindagi se aage badhi to tumne mera haath thama'.jab socha ab zindagi ekdum thik chal rahi hai ussi waqt tumne bhi mera saath chod dia'.[After geeting out of yash's life you were the one who held my hand'.i too oved ahead'.and when I thought that life is going on smoothly now'u even left me'.]

She wipes her tears'.

Aarti: par prashant ek waada karti hu tumse hamari bachiyon ko kabhi kisi cheez ki kami nahin hone dungi'jaanti hu ye sab mushkil hai par tumhari aarti saari cheezo ka datkar saamna karegi 'ye mera waada hai tumse'[but prashant I promise you one thing'.i wont let my daughters suffer for anything'I know it is difficult but your aarti will face every difficulty bravely'and that is my promise']

In the evening payal and palak asked aarti to take them for an outing so did ansh forced yash'and indeed both of them agreed'Aarti took her daughters to a children park'.while they were croosing ansh notices Aarti..

Ansh: papa vo dekho vo wali aunty..[papa see there'aunty is going']

Yash noticed aarti who was also desperately waiting to meet her'

Ansh: apko aunty se milna than a'.chalo usi park mein hi chalte hai'.[ansh you wanted to meet her na'lets go to the same park..]

Payal and palak were busy playing and aarti was admiring them'.here ansh comes and holds aarti from her back..

Ansh: hello aunty'apko pata hai main aaj hi papa ko bol raha tha ki mujse apse milna hai or bhagwan ji ne aaj hi muje apse milwa dia..[hello aunty'I was asking dad that I wanted to meet you and god aaranged the meeting for us']

Aarti hugs ansh and yash's heart felt as if ansh has got someone whom he always missed in his life'

Aarti: jaante hai ansh aap bilkul apni mom per gaye hai vo bhi ekdum aapke jaisi thi'.apko dekhar muje arpita ki yaad aa gayi'[u know ansh..u are same as your mom...i could see arpita in you']

Yash had tears in his eyes but somehow he controlled himself'.

Ansh: par aunty maine to apni mom ko dekha hi nahin kabhi'.aap unko jaanti thi..?...vo kaha hai'.papa kehte hai ki vo door aasman mein hai [but aunty I have never seen my mom..do u know her?...where is she'paya says she is there in the sky]

She hugs him as she herself didn't have any answer to his innocent question'..

Aarti: aisa karo ansh vo waha payal or palak kehle rahi hai aap bhi jakar unke saath khelo'[ansh payal and palak are playing there you even go and join them..]

Aarti: ansh ki masumiyat'..khoob miss karta hai na arpita ko'[ansh is so innocent'he misses arpita very much na..]

Yash: haan kisi na kisi tarah to usko taal deta hu'.[yes'even I try and divert him with some way or another..]

Aarti: pata nahin bhagwan ache logon ke saath hi aisa kyu karte hai'[don't know why god always do with sweet people..]

Yash: aarti tum thik to ho na..? [aarti u okay na..?]

Aarti : haan main thik hu'[yes I am perfectly fine..]

Yash: aarti vo din ki baat ke liye I am really sorry'.ho sake to muje maaf kar dena'muje pata nahin tha'.[aarti I am really sorry'.please forgive me'I dint knew about all that']

Aarti: its okay yash waise bhi taqdeer mein likha kaun badal sakta hai'[its okay yash'and who can change the destiny..?]

Yash: agar bura na mano to kya muje ye jaane ka haq hai ki ye sab kaise hua aarti? [if you don't mind'do I have the right that how did that happen?]

Aarti: aisa mat kaho yash'aage hi aisa bahut kuch ho gaya hai jikse liye main sharminda hu'.[please don't say like that yash'I am already guilty for many things]

Aarti: maine jab college choda tha to main apne mummy papa ke pass chali gayi thi'.kuch time baad unhone mere liye prashant ko dekh lia'maine kafi mana kia par unki zidd ke aage muje manna padha'Prashant ke roop mein muje ek acha dost mila'or uske baad payal or palak muje bhagwan ne tofhe ke roop mein diye'lekin'.[when I left the college I went to my parents'after sometime they found prashant for me'I hesitated but they were quite keen in getting me married'.I got a good friend as prashant and later I was gifted with my two angels- payal and palak'.but'.

Yash: to aarti prashant??

Aarti: yash tumne vo Mumbai attacks to sune hi honge na jo aj se do saal pehle hue the'.unn dino prashant bhi Mumbai mein the apne kaam ke silsile mein'or waha par unn terrorist ne mere prashant ko mujse hamesha ke liye door kar dia'.[yash you might have heard about the Mumbai attacks two years back'in those days prasahnt too had gone to Mumbai for his official work'..those terrorist attack took my prashant away from me forever']

Aarti bursted into tears'..and yash supported her and tried consoling her'..

Aarti: bas ab mere jeeven ka ek lakshya hai meri bachiyon ki har khawahish ko pura karna or main pure dil se ab wahi karna chahti hu'[and now I have just one aim in life to fulfill all the dreams of my daughters'.and I want to do that perfectly..]

Yash: aarti sach kahu to hum dono ek daur se guzar rahein hai'.tum apni bachiyon ke jee rahi ho or main apne ansh ke liye'[honestly aarti both of us going through the same phase you doing for your daughters and I am doing for my ansh..]

Both of them see their children palying and enjoying together'

Precap: Aarti meets yash's family'.😛😃


Sorry for the small flashback of Aarti guys...actually i want to focus more on Yash and Aarti and their life story will start pretty soon now...i hope the way i wrote was okay with you all...please do share...😳😳


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Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful part dear...!Thanks for update...!Nxt part update it soon...!
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Posted: 13 years ago
The Flashback Was Wonderful And So Was Ansh's Innocence...Can't Wait For The Next Part !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update dear!! ❤️👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was really a lovely update...

i completely loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
cute and lovely update !!! 👏

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