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sharme

@sparklystarstud

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

wow sai...

u brought out his inner turmoil in a splendid play of words...completely passive...

beautiful...

he's scared atlast... he's fearing the consequences of his unmindful actions... he better be... for making khushi suffer like that and pushing her to the brink of suicide... he should suffer a bit...

i loved it alot sai...

~~~ sam

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Jessica

@jessicad

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Woaah! really nice! love the intensity! superb!
and your writing just took me in a trance. :)

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anodaksgfan

@anodaksgfan

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

awesome...

intense and i like it...!!

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Addie07

@Addie07

Inactive

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

i read before but didnt comment cz i wasnt commenting in those days ni thought it was unfair to comment on one when m not catching up on the rest but i had thought of getting back to this one n y not-- i love ur stuff... cz thats my kinda stuff.. anything for emo heart touching lines and this was just that... awesome... beautifully written.. the biggest fear is losing the one we love... distance or no distance...amazing