(FF)Devil Wears Armani IMP NOTE PG. 245!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hi Everyone I'm gonna start a new ff!!!
Jai Walia
Age 37. Shrewd businessman. Doesn't believe in love. very arrogant and totally egoistic. Thinks men are more superior than women.
Bani Dixit
Age 22. Lovable. Innocent looking. One younger sister named Rano. she believes in love and knows that one day her prince charming will come and sweep her off her feet.
Pushkar Shukla
Age 24. Jai's confident in business but very close friend in life. He is married to Pia and he loves her to a great extent.
Pia Shukla
Age 22. Jai's 1st personal assistant. she is not happy being married to Pushkar because she married him for his money and position. REcently she is trying her best to get Mr. Walia to look at her in THAT way
Sahil Walia
Age 21. Jai's fav nephew. Knows how to woo girls. Has so many girlfriends but doesn't love any of them. Very sweet and charming
Rano Dixit
Age 20. Adores her elder sister Bani. Very intelligent and very moody. she thinks that love doesn't exist in this world.

Pt. 1................pg. 1
pt. 2................pg.2
pt. 3................pg. 6
pt. 4................pg. 8
pt. 5................pg. 11
pt. 6................will be posted soon on pg. 13
pt.7.................pg. 15
pt. 8................pg. 17
pt. 9................pg. 19
pt. 10..............pg. 24
pt. 11..............pg.25
pt. 12..............pg. 27
pt. 13..............pg. 29
pt. 14..............pg. 31
pt. 15..............pg. 34

pt. 16..............pg.36
pt. 17..............pg.38
pt.18..............pg.39

pt. 19..............pg.42

pt. 20 ..............pg. 45

pt. 21.............. pg. 46

pt. 22.............. pg.50
pt.23.............. pg. 52
pt. 24.............. pg. 54
pt. 25.............. pg. 57
pt. 26.............. pg. 59
pt. 27.............. pg. 59
pt. 28.............. pg.63

Edited by indiandoll89 - 18 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
#2
its good but i think u got the ages of the sister pia and bani wrong bani shld be abit okder probs by 3 or 4 years don't u think and didn't she say to sahil that they are probably abot the same age 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sounhds good!! pls continue it...soon! i cant wait! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sound too good please count soon 😊 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 1

We hear the birds chirping and we zoom in to a big mansion type house and we see a heavy kind of well built man sprawled across the bed. All of a sudden this peaceful atmosphere is ruined by the "beep- beep" of an alarm. The man wakes up with a jolt and we see that he is Mr. Jai Walia.

Jai: Arre Massi !!!! Yeh alarm kisne set kiya hain??

The woman Jai calls masi appears

Masi: Munna, yeh maine Tony se ke kar tumhare liya lag waya hain

Jai: (under his breath) Iss Tony ki to main…woh meri salary lete hain ya masi ki?? (To Masi) Kis liya lag vaya alarm??

Masi: aaj tumhara office mein phele din hai to…

Jai: Phele din?? Par masi main to roz jata hoon na??

Masi: Haan lekin jab se main aayi hoon tab se tu office nahin gaya na? Isiliye! Aacha aab jaldi se tayaar hoke neeche aja. Aur haan Pushkar ka phone aaya that isne kaha kae tum jo wo nayi doosri wali personal assistant hire karnewala hain na, aaj un sabka interview hain to tum jaldi aana.

Jai: Ji Masi

So we will leave Jai to get dresses in private and we will shift to Mumbai Central Station

G: Girl ( We don't see her face just her back, she is wearing a pink and black salwaar kameez)

G: Bhaiyya aapke paas chutta hain?

She show him a 1000 rupee note

B: Boy

B: ji nahin.

P: BANI!!!!????

We see the girl turn around so fast that her hair all flips in front of her face. She is Miss. Bani Dixit.

Bani: Pushkar??

P: Wow…tum Yahaan kya kar rahi hon?? Aur Rano aur uncle kaise hain??

Bani looks depressed at hearing Pushkar talk about her papa

B: Rano theek hain aur papa to….

P: Kya hua uncle ko?

B: Woh ek mahine phele guzargaye

P: OMG Bani yeh kaise hua? Are you all right?

Bani: Haan…Rano ko sambhalte sambhalte main khud bhi sambhalgayi

Pushkar gives her a nice tight friendly hug

Bani: Aur tum….tum Yahaan kaise aaye?? College ke baad??

P: Woh tumhe yaad hoga…Mr. Walia Mt. Abu aaye the…aur unhone mujhe woh scholarship di thi…

Bani: Haan yadd hai mujhe….woh tab kitne cute the…tumhe yaad hain maine tumse kaha tha ke I wish mujhe tumhari scholarship milli hoti to woh mujhe bhi flowers dete…

P: Aab tum drool karne band karo aur suno…to who mujhse bahot impress hogaye the aur college ke baad unhone ne mujhe Mumbai bulaya unki company ko run karne ke liye….

Bani: OH WOW!!!! Congratualtions!!!

P: Ya…aur maine yahaan ake shaadi bhi kkarle!

Bani: What…U JERK!! (Punches him) Tumne to mujhse Vaada kiya tha ke jab tak main tumhare liya larki pasand nahin karti…tab tak tum shaadi nahin karoge??

P: haan…lekin Bani main nahin jaanta tha ke tum mujhe inti jaldi mil jaongi..

Bani: Ok ok bahana banana chor do. Aab tum mujhe yeh batao ke yahaan rehne ke liye koi jaaga milegi? Aur nokri kahaan mil sakthi hain??

P: BANI!!! Mere hote hue tumhe kahin aur ghar dekhne ki kya zarooraat hain?

Bani: Aur nokri?? Who bhi tum hi doge??

P: bhale main nahin doonge nokri par Mr. Walia denge.

Bani: Aacha woh kyun denge??

P: Kyun ki unh eek personal assistant ki zarooraat hain aur aaj hi interviews hain..to agar tum chaho to

Bani: To???

P: to main tumhe nokri dila saktha hoon..

Bani: ok to main tumhere ghar aka appne kapre (clothes) badal du??

P: uska time nahin hain. Aur waise bhi Mr. Walia ko Hindustani capre (clothes) zyaada pasand hain.

Bani: ok…lekin agar unhone asa kuch poocha to main kya karo?

P: asa kuch?? Kaisa kuch?

Bani: Agar woh mujhe nokri kisi shart par denge to??

P: Bani saaf saaf kaho

Bani: Agar woh mere advantage le to??

P: OMG BANI!!! Mr. Walia asse aadmi nahin hain…woh bahot hi aache insaan hain.

Bani: ok to phir chalo

P: Aur haan meri biwi Pia unki ek personal assistant hain..(interrupted)

Bani: Unke paas already ek personal assistant hain?? To e kaur ki kya zarooraat hain??

P: Unko zarooraat hain!! Anyways if u have any problems just ask Pia!

Bani: Ok

So they reached the Walia Business House and Pushkar leads Bani to Pia and to Mr. Walia's cabin.

P: Pia, yeh hain Bani, meri college ki friend

Pia: (smugly) Hello, I'm pushkar's wife.

Bani: Hai! Nice to meet you

P: Ok Pia, have all the interviews finished??

Pia: Haan, kyun??

P: Mujhe Bani ko ek interview dilana tha, aur haan thore din ke liye yeh humare saath rehagi. Aab tum khari khari mere mu (face) kyun dekh rahi ho?? Connect me to Mr. Walia

Pia: Ya of course. (she presses a few numbers on the phone) Hello Mr. Walia

Jai: (snappy) Bolo Pia kya hain??

Pia: Mr. Pushkar Shukla aapse baat karma chate hain

Jai: Tum sheedi taraa se Kabhi Pushkar nahin ke sakhti? Usse Phone do?

Pia: Ji Sir

She hands the phone to her husband.

P: Hello, Mr. Walia

Jai: (normal sweet voice): Haan pushkar bolo

P: who meri ek dost aayi hain aur usse nokri ko zarooraat hain. Main jaanta hoon ke saare interview khatam ho gaye hain…lekin jis taraa aapne mujhe opportunity di to ussi taraa agar aap meri dost ko bhi ek maku (opportunity) de to I'll be eternally grategul sir.

Jai: (touched by his words) Send her in

So now what will happen?? Will Bani get Hired or will they have their first showdown??

See what happens in Part 2!!!


Edited by indiandoll89 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sweetie.. loved the character sketch!!

and please do continue!!

Thanks to u.. pia and bani arent sisters!! good for us!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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i think its good (cept i dont like that roshni is good....u need evil!! and shes it!) lol neway im sure u have some sort of plan in ure head that ure not willin to share (not even with me!!) just cuz its u.... anyway start it soon!

luv, frosty
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I think it should be mostly in English with some Hindi. I am a punjabi girl raised in America that knows very little Punjabi and almost no hindi, so it takes me forever to read ff in Hindi. So Please write in English
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Posted: 19 years ago
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k dunno wut im supposed to say this time cept for (it better work!!)
i knew ud luv it (potc i mean....) and....please come!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm....character sketch seems nice cant wait till u continue...

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