(FF)Devil Wears Armani IMP NOTE PG. 245!! - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
#11
hey nice job on the characters. me also punjabi and even though i can read hindi but it takes agesssss, cud u please have majority of ur ff in english.

much apprieciated
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
very very interesting
so far grreat
cant wait 4 the next part
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13

Part 2

So we ended with Bani and Pushkar at the entrance of Mr. Walia's cabin

Bani knocks

Jai: Come in (his voice boomed across the hallway)

P: Good Luck Bani

Bani: Thanx I really need it!

She slowly opens the door. The chair is facing the big beautiful window over showing the Gateway of India. Mr. Walia is in his chair so he is not facing her.

Jai: u may sit down

B: thank you (her voice squeaked)

Bani reached for the glass of water on the table when suddenly….Mr. Walia spins his chair around

Jai: (thinking) WOW….what simplicity but she seems so fragile to my personal assistant. I need someone with confidence and ….. Arre jai yeh to kya keh raha hain?? Tumne si usse kuch baat bhi nahin ki hain.

Jai: To aapke naam kya hain?

Bani is afraid to look into his eyes, she read somewhere that his eyes were so deep you could drown in them.

Bani: Ji, mere naam Bani hain

Jai: Zaara zor se bolo maine suna nahin

Bani: Bani

Jai: Kya, Vani??

Bani: Ji Nahin Bani!!

Jai: Bani?

Bani: Ji!

Jai: tum aapne saath aapne certificates layi ho?

Bani: Ji…yeh lijiye.

She hands him her certificated and he is very impressed

Jai: Tumhe yah nokri kyun chaiyye?? Mere matlab hain ke tum to kafi educated ho to tumhe meri compant main kyun kaam karma hain??

Bani: I want to work in your company Mr. Walia, because I have heard that your work ethic and the dedication that you give to your work is the same as mine…so I would like to work with someone who has the same concentration that I do.

Jai: yeh tumne kaha suna??

Bani: Pushkar has told me most of this. Aur jab aab Mt. Abt aaye the Pushkar ko scholarship dene tab maine hi aapke haar pheneaya tha aur uss waqt jo aapne speech di thi woh mere maan ki baaath thi

Jai: (thinking) Wow she remembers me since then?? Mujhe me kuch to aisi baat hogi to sab larikyon par bhari par jaati hain. (To Bani) aacha to tum tumhare bare mein mujhe kuch batao

Bani: Ji, Mere baara mein kyun?

Jai: kyun ki I need to see whether or not u are right fotr this job.

Bani: Ji, Meri ek behen hain aur who iss waqt Mt. Aby mein hain. Jab main appna ghar loongi tab usse bhi bulaongi yahaan.

Jai: To iss wqat tum kahan rehti ho?

Bani: well I came here only today…so Pushakr has offered me to stay at his house until I get a place.

Jai: That's not possible!!! (what am I saying???)

Bani: Why not??

Jai: two employees are not allowed to live with each other!

Bani: does that mean I'm hired??

Jai: yes but then u cannot live with Pushkar

Bani: then where would I live??

Jai: U can temporarily live in my guesthouse.

Edited by indiandoll89 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
Very interesting can't wait for Part 2!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#15
yhe .. its nice .. keep posting
waiting for 2nd part
cheers
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16
👏 !!
awesome first part!!
pls cont.soon!!
😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
im glad its a new perspective on the show since its like soo depressing right now..!!!...LOVE THE FAN FIC. 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
👏 👏 awsome fanfic
please continue soon
thanx 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#19
omg mera its so good......i love it....its very different from others..hope jai fell in love wid bani soon 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
arre yaar, y do u guyz always leave it at the good parts???
anyway plz make ur updates longer....i sooo njoy readin em.

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