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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi guys my first OS..please comment

ok so it starts with

akshara is in the kitchen with g3 and after getting done with the work she goes in her room to get something from her cupboard
as soon as she opens it pops out a monster she screams
but it turns out it was naitik hiding in the cupboard with a mask on to scare her
naitik: hahahah app tou sach mei dar gaye 😃
akshara makes a face and gets naraz and sits on the bed facing the other side .. naitik
realizes she really freaked out goes and sits next to her
and starts tickling her😃,😆 she tries to act angry but she cant resist and starts laughing
then naitik tells her to wear that pink dress (9th nov)😳
akshara wears it and then she feels like doing some masti so
she goes in, naitik is stunned to see her looking beautiful
he goes and hugs her while he's so busy hugging her.. she quickly opens her hands and tells naitik to close his eyes.. he does then she puts a plastic fake cockroach on his shoulder and when he opens his eyes he gets terrified and gets angry cuz he was in aromantic mood
akshara realized so she goes behind him and tries to pick naitik up ; just the way he picks her up
but they both fall on each other
naitik also starts smiling
then he comes close and kisses her face and cheeks
she blushes then
akshara:chodiya na
naitik:nahi
akshara:please😳
naitik comes even closer
and says: waise ap ke andar to jaan hi nahi hai app mujhe utha nahi paye
akshara: mere andar jaan hai liken ap bohot mote aur bhari hain
naitik: acha ☺️
akshara hugs him
then naitik picks her up and takes her to the bed
and then you all can imagine.. scene blursss





thank u hope u guys loved it!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Renice mayo hope u cont.. Wth ur writing 😊
Edited by sush4frndz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nyc os..cont ur writing..
Edited by -Naksh4ever- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice OS... Do write more... :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome 1 liked it :)))

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Posted: 13 years ago
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😊thank you so much you guys love you all😃
but i was expecting much more comments and the thread to be pink i guess it wasnt that good
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice OS..!!
keep writing 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks u so much guyss 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice os yaar...keep writing more...😃

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