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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi Aaliya!😊

So, I thought it was long, so res'd before going to eat lunch! But I come back and found a prologue! I want more!!!!!

So from what I can figure out, Arnav is Payal's boyfriend, Khushi feels something for him when they first meet, Arnav breaks Payal's heart (because of Khushi?) and Khushi yells at him that he's heartelss, to which he questions id that is why she want him!

Now, I am sure I am wayyy off mark. But I can't wait to see exatly how off I am, so update soon!!😊

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Shar.

@infinity_

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Posted: 13 years ago

Okay.. I'm still reading your other FF.. lemme comment on this first! 😆

Aliya! 🤗

The prologue. . .😲 The only person I can imagine with a husky voice is Arnav. . . and he's Payal's boyfriend?? 😲

That seems very very interesting! <3 And poor Khushi ; Arnav is again high and mighty here! 🤣

I'm really eager to read more! 😳

Love

Sharmi

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Posted: 13 years ago

Eee!! I loved it man!
He was with both :0
i m not sure if its arnav or not but i loved it!

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey!

great start to your ff, but i'm already trying to catch up with loads of FF's due to exams. so i might pop in like every 2-3 updates to catch up on yours. i always comment on every update but exams are getting the better of me. i'll still be commenting on every update of your other works cuz i'm up to date on them, lol. just maybe not this one.

i hope thats ok and you dont mind.

love you loads.

xxx

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Zaynah

@Zaya.Beintehaa

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

Aliya

Wow

I just love it

please continue soon

and pm

and have to

say

this is very well writen

Love

Zaynah

Oh And I like your name

Aliya

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•Jessie/Jessica•

@.Enchanted_Soul

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Posted: 13 years ago

This seems interesting, continue soon :)

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YOUR FACE

@PersieV

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: BlueMystique
Hi Aaliya!😊

So, I thought it was long, so res'd before going to eat lunch! But I come back and found a prologue! I want more!!!!!

So from what I can figure out, Arnav is Payal's boyfriend, Khushi feels something for him when they first meet, Arnav breaks Payal's heart (because of Khushi?) and Khushi yells at him that he's heartelss, to which he questions id that is why she want him!

Now, I am sure I am wayyy off mark. But I can't wait to see exatly how off I am, so update soon!!😊

Ohhh my!! I added abit more to the prologue!

Hahaha! Let's wait and see and why do you think it's Arnav??

;)