Barsaat Ke Din Aaye... A-Y fic!!!

Guys it's been so humid here in the U.S. Yesterday night it rained so much ke aisa laga jaise 2 weeks ki kami poori hogayi. I was dancing in the rain and I realized that Ashi-Yuvi par koi bhi rain scene shoot nahi kiya. So I wrote this strange storyline. hope you like it. Saya babes don't be angry. Main start kar rahi hoon. See!

Part 1

(Ashi, Yuvi , Tia and Ranveer are at Ashi's house for vacations.)

Yuvi , Ranveer, and Tia are discussng something when all of a sudden they hear a thunderclap. The they see lightening and finally they realize that Ashi is missing.

Ranveer- Guys, Ashi kahaan hain. Bahar toofan aane wala hai.

Tia- Oh Tia's god! Tia to bohat scared hai.

Yuvi- Seriously bro. Yeh wacko kahaan hain???

All of a sudden he sees Ashi standing in her balcony and he freaks because it starts raining really hard and the wind is really strong, so he goes after her.

Yuvi- O god! Guys this wacko has finally lost it!

He goes out into the balcony.

Yuvi- ANVESHA!!! Tum paagal hogayi ho kya??? Tumhe dikh nahi raha ke yahaan weather kitna kharab hai. Aur tum yahaankhari ho ke enjoy kar rahi ho! WACKO COME INSIDE RIGHT NOW!!!

Ashi- Hey Bhaggu!!! Psycho tum itna yell kyun kar rahe ho. I'm standing right here loser. Apni aankhon ka check-up karaao. Tumhe samne khadi ladki nazar nahi aa rahi. Aise yell karna band karo. I'm coming! (Makes face ) Pain!😡

tell me what you think. I have to go right now. Sorry it's so short. Plz comment!!!

luv u hamesha,

Komal😳

hey sweety di it's nice.but small part.frm d next part u will write longer parts.alright.
waise abhi india mein bhi bohot barish ho rahi hain.
so i think all will enjoy it.

titli

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sweety di ur little sis is d first one to reply.

titli

kewl komal....but wirte longer parts.

i like d idea of AY in rain 😉

hey komal

nice opening yaar 😳


do rite longer parts next time ,ok 😛

nice part komal please continue soon in longer parts 👏

awwwwwww,komal,so u started it,dekha i hv told u naa,u r geting scared 4 nothing. 😃 😳

yaar I'm going to write the next part ok

its awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 👏
pls post the next part fast. 😳 😳
luv-saya

hey komal i dotn read too much of ashi yuvi ficks but ur one is realy nice and it is quite interesting also
plzzzzzzz cont it fast
👏