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Shreya

@-MKB-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

:'(..

after a long OS i cried...it was just so emotional...:'(

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Aarti

@aartipartyy

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#102

ok just read both updates. i know i'm a little late but forgive me :)

this was amazing. i can really see arnav doing this is the actual show. you really made it amazing showing their feelings. and the last line, omg you KILLED me! i love love loveeed it! 😊

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Edited by BellaMasen - 13 years ago

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#104

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Res

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Beautiful! I cried!

I am so deeply touched that I can't even dance around saying yay I am first!

I am happy that you showed Anjali to have a strength and a backbone! And abhi sounds good! I am sad that both Arnav and khushi died. But I am happy they met after! So many contrasting feelings... You write beautifully!

Thank you for the PM!

Edited by Sjm15 - 13 years ago

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Nazibah

@nazibah

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#106

there are no words to describe how AMAZING this was(wait I just wrote one)!!!! LOVED IT!!!!!

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#107

Girl, you choked me up with this one!

And no don't give her a miracle (I know Rae asked for one!)

But some stories are beautiful in sadness. This is one of them.

She was slipping away yet I could feel the peace she found finally

I am not one for suicide. No one or nothing is worth killing yourself over, even if you feel that way at that time.

But this is the beauty about art. You can enjoy it without judging

And that's what this piece was. Art!

Edit:

And I just read the last part. He was home, indeed.

Beautiful and the last part completed the journey. Overwhelming!

Edited by meera30 - 13 years ago

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yongshin

@yongshin

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#108

God this was so sad and I had tears flowing ... It was written so well

Thx for PM

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Shreya

@-MKB-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#109

its so damn beautiful!

i just dont have words for it!

eeep...they finally reunited in the end..and that too in heaven!

lucky he did not go to hell...:P

but just an amazing writer you are...

i cried a lot after reading the three parts!

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#110

Beautiful.. Have no words to express.. They met at last..

I cant help but remember these lines...

"Jaane na kahan woh duniya hai, jaane naa woh hai bhi yaa nahi.. Jahan meri zindagi mujhse itni khafa nahi.. "

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