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Roopa

@roops82

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Beautiful!!! well written!! i had a lump in my throat when Arnav was sharing abt khushi to aashu!!! such a sweet gesture and the ending was fab!!!!

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..MorningStar..

@..MorningStar..

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#112

omg...its so beautiful..i m at a loss of words...its absolutely heart wrenching...cant stop the flow of tears...

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#113

wow! a heart-wrenching but beautiful update. the phrases and expressions used were most apt. do commiserate with arnav in his pain but also feel that he brought it all upon himself... loved the ending where he is united with his khushi in heaven... they both deserve that happiness and love

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arhifandebi

@arhifandebi

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

EXTRAORDINARY...!!!!! Flawless piece of writing...👏... you so wonderfully brought up the idea that love is that feeling which continues beyond life...still shedding tears.😭... Please do continue with more of such beautiful work...⭐️

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angellovergirl

@angellovergirl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#115

oh, it was so beautiful! but so sad to

poor arnav! It must've hurt so much to know he was the reason she died and live with that truth everyday

thanks fr the pm :)

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lastdesire

@lastdesire

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#116

omg its horrible.dy both died man!!! m not ready 4 it.but it was awsum keep it up

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1DAlice

@1DAlice

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Very well written!!!

Emotional ending!!!😊

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#118

really beautifully put and written.

xxx

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jpatel

@jpatel

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#119

omg i'm welling up! this is an AMAZING OS! So sweet yet so sad! Well done, I really loved it! 👏😃

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#120

Well written and Arnav's pain is very palpable but I should tell you that I am pretending that a miracle did happen and ArHi are happily living together with the rest. :p

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