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Hii guys i'm back with another OS. The idea of this OS struck me yesterday when i was watching D3. I'm not sure hw would this one turn out. Hope I get good response for this also like the previous one. Those who haven't read my first OS here's the link.
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2963242/celebrations-of-love-a-kriyansh-os
Here you go with update. Hope you all like it. I'm continuing it from the new VP's entry.
The fight was going on until wen the new VP enters the BB court. Along wid him enters a beautiful girl who was very much tensed and concerned. She had seen boys fighting wid each other through the window of the car wen she was coming to the colg wid her uncle. She was tensed to see her love getting hurt and fighting wid some other boy. No one had noticed them until the VP shouted.
VP:stop it every one. Stop this fight rite now.
Every one at once left each other and turned around to see and they were hell shocked not bcoz the new VP had entered but coz they saw the girl who was standing beside him. The VP said
VP: i want every one in my cabin rite now. Saying dis he left leaving behind the gang and the girl. After the VP left every exclaimed
Gang:tum!!! Tum yahan kaise aur kab aayi.
Neha was about to hug her wen nil reminded every one dat they were supposed to be in the VP's cabin. With out wasting more time they proceeded towards the office. The girl also went along with them coz even she was a part of that colg now. Only boys were inside the cabin and girls stayed out.
In VP's cabin:
The VP starts scolding every one and pointed out their behavior today n told the dazzlers about their re entry into footloose.
Soon every one left the cabin and came out. As soon as they came out they noticed the girl waiting for them. And at once neha and vishakha gave her a bone crashing hug followed by swayam, amar n bharat.
Ne:kriya kahan chali gayi thi tum hume chod kar.
Vish:ya dude wer were u we missed u sooo much.
Sw: im gald ki tum ab aagayi ho n agar iss baar tum hume chod kar gayi toh dekhlena.
Thw dazzlers were happy coz kriya had returned and den rey would be back to normal.
Sh:im soo happy kriya tum vaapis aa gayi. Ab rey kabhi bhi upset nhi rahega n trust me u guys r meant to be together, u look perfect wid each other. As soon as sharon said this kriya looked at rey who was already staring at her wid his eyes full of happiness and pain. Their eye lock was broken due to some sounds coming from nearby class room. Rey immediately left dat place coz he wanted to be alone for sometime, n while he was going no one dared to stop him. Finally kriya spoke
Kr:guys in sorry i had to leave u all. Trust me mujhe bahut dukh hua jab mai tum logo bina bataye chali gayi. Actually meri mom ko mere dance ke baare mai aur...she paused looking at rey who had gone frm der.
Sw:aur kya
Kr:aur rey ke saath mere relation ke baare mai pata chal gaya. N den she narrates the whole incident regarding the elims n dat condition. At the end her voice was almost choking. The girls immediately went to console her.
Ne: toh fir kriya tumhari mom maan kaise gayi n hw do u know the VP. Tum unke saath hi aayi thi rite??
Kr: guys actually yeh jo hamare new VP hai vo mere mom ke brother hai aur unhone hi mom ko convince kiya.
It was den sharon realised dat swayam and the guys had not bandaged their wounds n sharon immediately asked the guys.
Sh:guys tum logo ne abhi tak apni chot ko bandage nhi kiya jaldi medical room mai chalo. Every one went to the medical aid room n the girls started cleaning up the boys wounds.Kriya then asked every one reagarding the fight then nil and vicky narated the whole incident. It den struck kriya dat rey's hand was bleeding. She immediately took a first aid box and left the room in search of rey. Every one had seen kriya taking a first aid box n leave the room n they guessed dat she had gone to rey. Every one smiled on seeing kriya's concern for rey n hoped dat they become one soon.
Precap: Kriya and rey in fire exit and the light goes off...
So, hwz it?I know thoda boring tha but i promise i'll make sure the next part will be interesting. Acha laga toh plzz hit the like button and do comment. Agar acha nhi laga toh mention it in ur comments. Suggestions and Criticisms are welcomed. Those who want pms for next part plzz make sure u r in my buddy list.
Index
Part 1-pg 1
Part 2-pg 9
part 3-pg20
Epilogue-pg25
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2963242/celebrations-of-love-a-kriyansh-os
Here you go with update. Hope you all like it. I'm continuing it from the new VP's entry.
The fight was going on until wen the new VP enters the BB court. Along wid him enters a beautiful girl who was very much tensed and concerned. She had seen boys fighting wid each other through the window of the car wen she was coming to the colg wid her uncle. She was tensed to see her love getting hurt and fighting wid some other boy. No one had noticed them until the VP shouted.
VP:stop it every one. Stop this fight rite now.
Every one at once left each other and turned around to see and they were hell shocked not bcoz the new VP had entered but coz they saw the girl who was standing beside him. The VP said
VP: i want every one in my cabin rite now. Saying dis he left leaving behind the gang and the girl. After the VP left every exclaimed
Gang:tum!!! Tum yahan kaise aur kab aayi.
Neha was about to hug her wen nil reminded every one dat they were supposed to be in the VP's cabin. With out wasting more time they proceeded towards the office. The girl also went along with them coz even she was a part of that colg now. Only boys were inside the cabin and girls stayed out.
In VP's cabin:
The VP starts scolding every one and pointed out their behavior today n told the dazzlers about their re entry into footloose.
Soon every one left the cabin and came out. As soon as they came out they noticed the girl waiting for them. And at once neha and vishakha gave her a bone crashing hug followed by swayam, amar n bharat.
Ne:kriya kahan chali gayi thi tum hume chod kar.
Vish:ya dude wer were u we missed u sooo much.
Sw: im gald ki tum ab aagayi ho n agar iss baar tum hume chod kar gayi toh dekhlena.
Thw dazzlers were happy coz kriya had returned and den rey would be back to normal.
Sh:im soo happy kriya tum vaapis aa gayi. Ab rey kabhi bhi upset nhi rahega n trust me u guys r meant to be together, u look perfect wid each other. As soon as sharon said this kriya looked at rey who was already staring at her wid his eyes full of happiness and pain. Their eye lock was broken due to some sounds coming from nearby class room. Rey immediately left dat place coz he wanted to be alone for sometime, n while he was going no one dared to stop him. Finally kriya spoke
Kr:guys in sorry i had to leave u all. Trust me mujhe bahut dukh hua jab mai tum logo bina bataye chali gayi. Actually meri mom ko mere dance ke baare mai aur...she paused looking at rey who had gone frm der.
Sw:aur kya
Kr:aur rey ke saath mere relation ke baare mai pata chal gaya. N den she narrates the whole incident regarding the elims n dat condition. At the end her voice was almost choking. The girls immediately went to console her.
Ne: toh fir kriya tumhari mom maan kaise gayi n hw do u know the VP. Tum unke saath hi aayi thi rite??
Kr: guys actually yeh jo hamare new VP hai vo mere mom ke brother hai aur unhone hi mom ko convince kiya.
It was den sharon realised dat swayam and the guys had not bandaged their wounds n sharon immediately asked the guys.
Sh:guys tum logo ne abhi tak apni chot ko bandage nhi kiya jaldi medical room mai chalo. Every one went to the medical aid room n the girls started cleaning up the boys wounds.Kriya then asked every one reagarding the fight then nil and vicky narated the whole incident. It den struck kriya dat rey's hand was bleeding. She immediately took a first aid box and left the room in search of rey. Every one had seen kriya taking a first aid box n leave the room n they guessed dat she had gone to rey. Every one smiled on seeing kriya's concern for rey n hoped dat they become one soon.
Precap: Kriya and rey in fire exit and the light goes off...
So, hwz it?I know thoda boring tha but i promise i'll make sure the next part will be interesting. Acha laga toh plzz hit the like button and do comment. Agar acha nhi laga toh mention it in ur comments. Suggestions and Criticisms are welcomed. Those who want pms for next part plzz make sure u r in my buddy list.
Index
Part 1-pg 1
Part 2-pg 9
part 3-pg20
Epilogue-pg25
Avatar and Signatures Shop
Ye Hai Mohabbatein
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
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