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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi sweety…

Loving the Prologue…

Hmm since my brain is working over time, due to my exams…😆

Me giving a hard thought… Who is Mannu…

Okies me guessing Mannu is Geet's sister…😕

Now the big Question why can't she keep the baby and what happened to her baby…

Me thinking…

Umm is it like Mannu is having something like cancer and all and Geet can save her but since she has to be operated upon, she can't keep the baby..😕

Just a total wild guess…😳

hope me didn't blabber too much, Your Prologue intrigued me so much that couldn't help myself…😆

Spent good 1 hour thinking…😆

Eagerly waiting for you to start the story dear…
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Awsome plz add me in ur pms
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi dear,
jus read all parts.
Really interesting.
Bt can u plz giv character-sketch of all in short.atleast tell age n wat dey do.
N plz do continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely ff dear, pls add me in the pm list 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it

thnx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 4

after long time, maan appeared with geet scooped in his arm decending the stairs without breaking his eye contact with his adorable wife, so to gain their attention daadi cleared her throat ," ahem ahem , maan bete , i think we all r here, maan who was still lost in his wife wasbrought back to his senses by geet,
" maan , mujhe niche utariye"
"ummm.." while still lost in her
"MAAN , maine kaha mujhe niche utariye"
" woh actually , dadi maa she hurt her foot see, its stil bleeding"geet still in his arm
daadi maa " kya hua geet bete kaise lag gayi ... before she complete mannu was there with first aid
"no mannu u dont need do this i had already bandaged it we were going to see dr coz i thought mannan must b tired after whole night shift" while making her relax on sofa
" no bro not at all, waise bhi badda aapki aur bhabhi ki khidmat mein hardam hazir hai "manan began his docterly process when mannu was about to hold geet's feet to help mannan
"mannu... u r not suppose to touch my feet"geet shouted holding her hand
kyu dee ? aap mujhe se nazar ho ...
"pagal u r my little darling sis thats why aur chhoti behne badi behen ka pair nahi chhuti"
"toh aap mujhe se naraz nahi ho na , i jus wanna suprise u ,mujhe nahi pata tha ki aap aapne aap ko hurt kar lo gi"
geet cupped her face" nahi thoda toh hoon r should had informed mepata hai meim kitni worried thi "
but y geetu dee it was jus fever n u r behaving like jasse mujhe koi...before she could complete geet she stopped her to say further" aage kuch bhi bola toh ek khich k doogi"
kya geetu dee , r u going to give me stretched chewing gum," geet hit her play fully
meanwhile mannan completed his job " bhabhi ,now u dont have to walk otherwise it will get worse,"
" u dont worry mannan i'll take care of her " and maan scooped her again to their room and rush of blood made her cheeks pink
"daadi maa i have to go hospital there is a case need my especial attention"
daadi: but ...
"please daadi"
"mannan mainbhi chalu tumhare sath" said keeping her head on daadi's lap
"have u gone mad, tum thodi dar pehle hospital se aayi ho aur phir and it is not a picnic spot"
"tab toh main waha as a patient thi and u know how boring to b a "patient waise she paused ek a mairiz ka dard tum kya jano dr babusaid immitating deepika
"but u r not well enough..."
"kya hua hai mujhe bas fever tha n now iam completely fine "she saidwhile doing moving her hand to show she fine
"mannan bete take her"
he wasn't left with any choice but he tried last time"NO..."
"please waise bhi meri kisi se baat bhi nahi ho payi not even to that jungali dr se"
"but promise u will not roam here n there just stay in my cabin n stop calling dr sid jungali"
"promise ab chalu"
"chalo..."
In hospital mannan got busy with his patient and mannu with his docterly machine when one of dr was in his cabin to concern on some case
"mannan , r u impoten mannu " she said while flipping some medical report such that she happen to catch his secret report
mannan was sipping juice which he threw on dr meera in front of him who was discussing on some case" sorry dr meera for all mess, but will u "plz excuse us for some minute" he said apolozeitically . "yeah sure "and she left.
"now who told u this?"
"woh kal ek aunty aayi thi aur daadi se kah rahi thi tum bel( bull) ki tarah bhole ho aur bail toh impotent hota"
aur tumne soch iam also" she nodded innocently
"dr meera kya soch rahi hongi"
"mannan u r still thinking of her tumhe aapne bare maim sochna chahiye "
for her such a wonderful concern he banged his head on table
In maneet room
maan brushed her cheek ,took salty water which was about to falloff of her beautiful eyes "what happen mishty is it paining"
"no maan i was thinking of mannu"
"dont worry it was just viral fever"
"no maan symptom r saying something else"
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnx for the pm
amazing update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update.
Loved it.
Thanks for PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH
MAAN SINGH KHURANA

Gurmeet Choudhary as MSKD 25 25 yrs , MD of KHURANA GROUP OF INDUSTRIES ,hot dashing business tycoon of india, smile and msk was something like inversely proportional to each other but now one can see his teeth often yes for his beloved wife geet ...

GEET SINGH KHURANA
Drashti Dhami aka Geet in white sari
22 yrs, sweet bubbly girl, wife of great msk ,but lost her smile for some reason...
MANNAN SINGH KHURANA
Abhinav Shukla
25 yrs serving as docter,famous cardiologist, hot but benovelent, twin of msk but 4minutes younger...
MAHATVA HANDA
Aashika Bhatia
well her name means importance but was declared typical to be pronounce so geet awarded new name mannu, 16 yrs , geet' s sis ,smart yet cute , love his jiju & dee ...
SAVITRI KHURANA
Drashti Dhami ,Gurmeet Choudhary & Anju Mahendroo
Maan and mannan's daadi , elegant lady ,kind at heart
sekhonpuneet asked me to give character sketch so here itis n hope u like it n one thing more prolougue is yet included geet is not expecting till now...
if you like it dont forget to comment
Edited by swarnakanak - 13 years ago

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