NEW FF 'RANG'

Rang means color but here it means different colors of life sometime it show our favourite color sometime out of our choice and sometime it is white without colors and sometime even blank and dark...

PROLOUGE

Maan seeing condition of his wife hold her hand and made her sit on his lap, asked '' what happened geetu to look tensed with his concern she cocooned in him and between her sobs she told '' maan , iam pregnant '' with this most soothing news of his life, his happiness knew no bound he kissed her whole face leaving no space after he calmed himself , said'' pagal yeh rone ki nahi khush hone ki baat hai''. Seeing his happiness new trail of tears formed in her eye with sore throat she somehow she tried to put in word '' i cant keep this child'' all color of his face was gone now still holding her he asked her'' but , why geetu u love kids a lot'', geet in continuous trail of tear said '' for mannu ,MAAN... for her'' to suppress his inner turmoil he closed his eye , carefully lay her on bed '' dont cry geetu hum next time mummy papa ban jayege, u take rest v ill see docter tomorrow''

Part 1

Daadi was already waiting for her grandsons and granddaughter in law, geet to appear at breakfast , maan was first to appear with no manan (in ghsp dev committed many sin here is manan but abhinav, twin of maan completely opposite of him, they r not identical twins maan is 4 minute elder to him) and geet (maan ki geet i.e his wife) with only him at breakfast daadi get worriedly asked '' maan , bete geet abhi tak aayi nahi, she always first to appear even b4 me''

maan: daadi maa , kal raat ko , she was not feeling well but isliye shayad abhi tak sorahi hai maine docter se appointment le hai,

daadi: where is manan, is he still in gym?

maan : there was an urgent cal from hospital at night he should b here by now .

daadi: maan bete , u need not to pretend u can have ur breakfast with geet hum nakal se nasta beja dete hai.

All embarrassed maan slowly slipped from dinning table then strode toward his room,as he entered the room he found geet still sleeping he slowly neared her gentle caressing he asked , geetu r u still feeling weak ?

half consciously she answered ''baas thoda headache thodi der mein theek ho jayega, u dont worry".

maan: kal bhi tum ne yeh kah ke tal diya tha , ab chalo dr k paas

realizing her is not going to let it go she excused," wo kya hai kal thoda pizza kha liya u know iam allergic to it,'' full rage in his eyes he almost shouted but composed himself and said,'' how can u this careless geet anpe bare main nahi to kam se hamare bare mein soch liya karo while trying to sit she assured him ,'' iam fine maan'' but he furiously turned his face now geet was on her foot cupping his face , ''ok Mr, khurana i'll b careful see to dr today but apne dr sahab hai and he replied hospital mein

geet :still

maan : when he returned, just half an hour later there was some urgent case so he had to rush.

geet : how is mannu?

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geet : how is mannu?

to advoid her question he picked up the plate took a small piece of aloo ka paratha and justure her to eat , she turned her face while trying to hold salty water in eye, " nahi , maan mujhe bhook nahi hai" he cupped her face n with his thump gently wipe her tears ,'' geetu, mannu bilkul theek hai , u don't worry"

geet: "no maan its just, meri aakho mein kuch chala gaya tha", at her lame excuse he thought, is she stil think she can lie to me, he was just about to say his heart out, then there was knock on door , which break his tranceand forward his step to door, it was manan , after whole night spending in hospital tiredness could be clearly visible on his face but when he heard about geets not well being he was here to see ,and seeing his bro tensed he worriedly asked, "bro bhabhi, theek to hai na"

maan : haan mannan bas mannu ko leke thoda tense hai

mannan : bro , she is fine now

maan :ok , mannan u take rest, must b tired

taking leave mannan went to daadi and maan to see his misty but she is was is wash room , he wrote a note for her& went to office.

Geet was leaving the room when she notice his note

geet smiled weakly only slight thin become crept on her face ,she then head toward hospital through out way she just kept her head seat rest and went back to her memory lane...

Geetu, geetu... uth ja beta, dekh 10 baj gaye hai , but here geet was in her dreamland , n there was no effect of Ranjana(geet's mums)'s continuous chanting n her daughter didn't even budge, and ranjana started her pet daulogue," itni baar purane pe sakschhat bhagvan mujhe darshan de dete"(wel , its my mums favorite daulogue)

" toh kya hamari geetu , tumhe isnan laggati hai, rano" mahendra entered holding his another princes"

ranjana:toh aapko kya laggi hai, n mannu is still sleeping apne toh kaha mujhese jaldi utha lage ?

mahendra: madam ji , dekhiye to mene uthaya hi hua, lisensing to him , she felt like bang her head, but mahendra love to tease his wiffy n smirked ,singal her to b quite put adjacent ti geet mentioned loudly , "yeh , dono toh mujhe billiya lagti"

knowing the reaction he took step back &both his girl said in unison "HUM BILLIYAA NAHI HUM TO PARI HAI NA PAPA"

mahendra: but pari toh jaldi jagjati

geetu & mannu : but aaj to sunday hai na papa, r funday

ranjana: funday toh hai lekin aap dono uthogi tabhi toh fun day start hoga. aur fun day k bad aapke school bhi khul jayege so beta , try to b puntual.

mahendra while trying to hold his paries said , "aaj hum aap dono pari banata hoon"

sudden break bring her back to realily and she was in front of hospital...

PLz comment how it going, my exam r over now so i'll give daily update if comment or likes keep on increasing

Geet tried to compose herself and plastered a cheerful mask to cover her grief, fast moved to hospital, she was about to enter ward, familiar fingers tapped her soldier, she turn to greet grey hair women, " she is discharged, u dunno?.

Geet:woh actually, dr madhu(family friend and docter of khurana), i came to collect something,geet lied & made her way inside& was fuming , "they didn't even bother to mention it once, babaji aap dekh rahe hai naa saab ne mere khilaf team bana lee hai ,mannu aur maan always team up but daadi aur mannan bhi" after completeling her today kota of shikayat she rushed to KM and site before her was beyond her her imagination, here everyone was relishing their lunch and maan in chef coat serving them and time to time bow to accept their compliment ,poor geet pouted looks up to babajiand again started," babaji dekha apne ne, these merciless people sara mere palle bandh ne the apko" and marched to them and poked to todays chef, maan ,"mishty tum aagayi batho maine tum dono behno k liye aloo chat banaya hai "Geets eyes full of tear she pointed toward everyone &complained ," no one care for me" on ohter hand; daadi , mannu ,and mannan was trying hard to control their laughter, geet gave one dreadful look to all and marched to her room.

maan: geet... geet... aloo chat to kha lo , she turned " jaroor maan , would like to see u in room"

daadi: maan bete hamara ashirwad sada aap k sath hai she said dramatically

maan :yeah daadi i need it most

mannu immitate goddess durga: vijayibav jiju

mannan: all the best , bro

maan: thanx guys now let me go " he turned " pray for me"

but b4 he could proceed mannu shouted "jiijuuu... aloo chat" he nodded took it and strode to his room as he tried to peep in a cushion collided to his head , he thanx his star it could b ANYTHING..& carefully trying hard to find space to stepped in & find his wify cornered in room holding her knee and head down, he slowly approached her settle beside her & said , "it was mannu idea geetu"

geet : aloo chat ka

maan :aloo chat ka bhi aur tumhe kuch na batane ka bhi

geet : but u could hav told me , pata i was hell worried

maan:achcha mishty, aap is bafadar ko gaddari sikha rahi hain, geet with her tiny fist started to hit him and both burst in heartful laughter.

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