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Posted: 13 years ago
nice story dear..
loved all the updates...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: valli22

nice ..but when i say meera..muje us meera ki picture yaad aathi hai..u have posted her as sam..



di i changed it acoording to ur wish have a look..😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww such a cute confession⭐️. Loved the update a lot. Nw whole college knws whos Maan's Jaan😳. Waiting for their love to blossom.😉 Continue soon. Tnx for PM.😃
-LUV Anyaa😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 15


Hi friends!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ok so as per ur request

maaneet start talking , hehehehehe now bear

ur crazy lovers in chatter box avatar...

hehehehehe😆😆


Maan is run for his life and geet is behind him

in college garden...


Geet – maan aaj mein tumhe nahi chodungi

samjhte kya ho tum aapne aapko

hann???????????? While panting heavily


Maan suddenly stop and geet collide with him

both loose there balance and thunddd

on ground geet on maan and maan beneath

geet... both lost in each other eyes ... mahi

mahi...


Maan remove her curls from her face and put

behind her ear... geet moaned maan...


Maan - geet i cant live without u plz never ever

leave me...


Geet – never maan... and hugs him...


Both lost in their own world forget that they

were entertaining whole college... all start

giggling and maaneet come back to reality...

their gang get new topic to tease poor love

birds...


Karan – dev abhi abhi tumne kuch dekha kya

and winked on dev😉


Dev – (with smirk) na meine to kuch nahi

dekha kyu kuch special tha kya????????????


Maan shook his head and try to stand on his

feet but his all try go in drain because geet's

dupatta stack beneath him... same with geet

she become sharam se paani paani types☺️ and her dupatta also against her... 😆


Maan some how take out dupatta and stand

up with geet geet all the while looking down

and blushing hard... get red redder...


Sam – waise agar tum dono ka filmy romance

hogaya ho to chale


Maan – leave it guys it just geet angle get twist

and we both fall nothing elas...


Adi – (laugh in his typical style) he he he he

we can see that maan..


Maan(shout) – adiii (me miss this line so much)



Geet held maan wrist and he look her she

nodded for no don't shout and maan smile

...


All unison – ohhh ahhh



Geet – wo maan chale late ho rahe hain ghar

par sab pareshan ho rahe honge...


Maan – hann geet chalo... they all bid bye and

leave for their houses...


On the way back while driving...


Maan – geet thank u so much tumne aaj mere

pyar ko galat sabit nahi hone diya...


Geet pout her lips and look out of the

window... maan get confuse with her

behaviour and mumered ab isko kya

hua??????????


Maan – geet


Geet - ...


Maan – geetu plz batao to ab kyu naraj

ho?????????


Geet - ...


Maan suddenly put breaks and held geets arm

and pull her to him look in to her eyes and


Maan – geet kya hua???????????


Geet (with teary eyes) – maan aap mujhe

aapna nahi mante na?????????


Maan – nahi geet aisa nahi hain tum mein to

meri jaan basti hain fir mein tumhe aapne se

alag kaise samjh sakta hu??????????


Geet – fir aap mujhe thank u kyu bol rahe ho ,

aapka mujhe par pura haq hain...aur mein

waha humare pyar k liye aayi thi na ki sirf

aapke pyar k liye aur hann ye humara pyar

hain samjhe aap... (with baby tone)


Maan – (smiling) ok princess as u wish ab

chalo rona band karo '' i hate tears in ur eyes''

and rub her tears with thumb and peck on her

forehead...



Geet smile to him and maan start car to leave

for home...


They reach home geet come out of the car but

maan hold her wrist and pull her to him and


Maan – geet tum jitna chaho naraj ho jao jo

chahe saja dedo par plz aise chup mat hoya

karo kyuki tum chup chup bilkul aachi nahi

lagti aur agar ab kabhi tumne mujhe baat

karna band ki to mein tumhe saja dunga


Geet (innocently) – kaisi saja???????????


Maan (grin naughtily ) – ye saja and come

close to her geet close her eyes and maan

smile looking her close eyes come closer and

bit her cheeks and run from their giggling...


Geet open her eyes with sudden bit and looks

his retaring figure and come into her sherni

mode and run after him screaming

maannn


Their tom and jerry fight begain both enter in

hall running and screaming...


Geet – maan now ur gone , tum na sach mein

dust danav ho aur sadu bhi...


Maan – oye chatter box don't call me dust

danav...


All elders giggling seeing their fight... mr.love

also start running with them...


Mr.love – bhaw bhaw mere sath bhi to khelo u

to humesha mujhe irritate karte ho ek dusre k

bare mein bol bol ke...


Geet pout her lips and went to dadi and beeji

who were sitting in sofa in hall


Geet (with baby face) – dekho na dadi ye sadu

mujhe kitna pareshan karta hain aur mujhe

chatter box bolte hain mein chatter box nahi

hu na ...


Maan pick mr.love in his arm and ruffle his

hairs and sit opposite on opposite sofa


Maan (smirkingly) – waise geet meine kya kiya

jo tum mujhe marne k liye mere piche bhag

rahi thi ye bhi to dadi ko batao...


Geet make o shape face and looks maan how

is sitting opposite to her with mr.love in his lap

and smirk...


Dadi – hann geet bte batayiye maan ne kya

kiya hum abhi inki khabar lete hain...


Geet – wo... dadi... wo


Beeji – are bolna kya hua


Maan – hann geet batao mein kya kiya aacha

rehne do mein hi bata deta hu wo

dadi...before he start


Geet – hann dadi wo maan ne kaha mr.love

uska hain aur mujhe tease bhi kiya bas isliye...


Maan grin on his lie , all look her with not

convinced face and geet give them a weak

smile , she stand up and went to maan take

mr.love from his hand but maan winked on her

without anyone notice...


Maan – waise geet meine tumhe sataya na


All look toward them and geet also look him

and see some mischief in his eyes.. and

continue


Maan – chalo now its ur turn chalo mujhe saja

do yaha sabke samne...


Geet get shock is he asking me to kiss him no

no bit him in front of whole family...


Dadu - hann geet puttar maan ko to saja milni

hi chaiye


Geet get another shock


Geet – nahi dadu meine inhe maaf kar diya


Maan – are geet aise kaise mein tumhe itna

satata hu saja to banti hain...


Geet (gritting her teeth and looks maan ) – its

ok maan i forgive u...


Maan grin more and geet irritate more


Darji – are par abhi to


Geet – koina darji isko bacha samjhke maaf

kiya... and smirk on maan as she know now

its maan time to get irritate


Maan (st) – what the hell she just call me kid...

and give geet a fake angery glare.. and say

through eyes ab mein tumhe batata hu ki

bache kya karte hain..


Geet get scared seeing his glare and mumered

Geet –( mumered) plz babaji bacha lena is dd

se pata nahi ab in ke dimag mein kya chal

raha hain...


Both silent conversation break with mom's

voice.


Mom – are bahut hui tum dono ki masti chalo

fresh ho jao aur maan dad ka call aaya tha

tumhe office bulaya hain..


Maaneet – ok mom


After freshen up maan leave for office and

geet as usual with family chatting...

NEXT - ?????????????


here is my fb accout Ruby Katariya ...

thanks for ur likes and comments..


meettu thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsome update
bit kr diya lolzzz
good family
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Posted: 13 years ago
bless them they are so cuteee
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Posted: 13 years ago
tom n jerry fight...its really amazing...

awesome update...


loved it...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

n thank u very much fr dis wonderful update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks 4 d pm...nice update
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 15
cute part...
these 2 are so adorable...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago



ME TOO BECAME CRAZY FOR UR CRAZY IN LOVE... LOVELY FF

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