OS : Pyaar ki Pehli Barsaat

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello ABians 🤗 , Was getting bored , So thought to write a random scene on Prishna . I hope you all will like it 😊

It's night . Prishna are in their Bedroom . Krishna is sleeping where as Pintu is trying his best to sleep as he was not at all feeling sleepy . He was again and again turning his side so that he could sleep but nothing was working . After trying his best He just comes out and stands beside his window where he always stands and talks to himself whenever he feels restless. he didn't know why he was feeling restless but he knew one thing and realized it that it was coz his mom was still angry with him regarding his marrige with Krishna . Suddenly He feels one touch on his shoulder , and without turning he identifies the touch . he smiles and turns to find krishna behind him .
Pintu " Krishna !! U are Awake ? Why u didn't sleep till now ? It's too late
" .Krishna holds his hand and tells " U too didn't sleep till now . Why ?" Pintu " No !!Actually I slept but got up 2 drink water , You go to sleep . I will also sleep after some time " . Pintu turns his face wiping his tears .Krishna holds his face and makes him look at her . She says " Pintuji !! I Love you ..you may not show me ur tears but I can read ur each and every expression of ur face and can see ur pain in ur eyes eventhough u try ur best 2 hide it from me " , " U say U love me But Truth is that U don't trust me " Pintu tries 2 refuse it but Krishna continues " Because if u would have trust on me then u would have never ever tried 2 hide ur tears from me . it's Ok if u don't want 2 share anything with me , it's perfectly alright , I will not interfere in it " ,Krishna after speaking is about 2 go when Pintu holds her hand and hugs her . He brokesdown and while crying tells her that how much he is feeling hurt that his mom is angry with him and doesn't want 2 accept his marrige with krishna . Krishna makes him sit on bed , she gives him some water . Pintu drinks it . Krishna " Pintuji ..I know that Situations are difficult for both of us , But If u will breakdown like dis then who will be my strength ? , I need u , I need ur support . And Don't Worry .. We both 2gther again will win every1's heart and they all will accept us and our marrige ..U have to be little bit patient . hmm ." Pintu nods his head in yes and gives a slight smile .

Krishna " aacha Pintuji See U 2 are awake and U don't have any mood to sleep . right ? And me2 now woke up and not at all feeling sleepy anymore .So why not to use this time " Pintu looks at krishna in confused manner . Krishna" Arrey Pintuji COMEON Letzz go out for a night walk " Pintu bursts out in laugh , then controlling himself he asks " Krishna !! Am i right or for not reading books from longg time , U became crazy " ,Krishna in anger " What ? What do you mean ? " Pintu " I mean , u know how to watch time , right ? then look at ur watch and tell me the time " Krishna little embarassed " So..So what ... ?It's only 12 am " . Pintu " 12 AM and not PM , I hope you understands the difference b/w AM and PM , And If U don't understand then Look out from our Window and see that it's Dark night " . Krishna " Pintuji Please Lets go naa , I promise We will come soon " Pintu " No Ways Krishna !! I am not going anywhere " . Krishna " Ok then I am going , U Enjoy ur Sleep.." Pintu "RAAJDHAANI EXPRESS Fine I am coming , no need to blackmail me " . Krishna gives a victory smile . Pintu accepting his defeat walks out and krishna follws him .

Prishna on road walking alone in night . Pintu " Wowww If Some1 will see us like this naa , toh surely they gonna declare us TWO MAD PARTNERS " . Suddenly Krishna screams " PINTUJII..." . Pintu getting scared holds Krishna from Shoulders and asks " Krishna !! What happen ? Why u shouted like dis ? " Krishna " ICE-CREAM !!" . Pintu sees the Icecream Corner , he keeps his hand on his forhead and tells " This Girl is Crazyyy " . Krishna runs to icecream corner . Pintu asks to icecreamwaala " Are you doing any night Shift ? I mean It's 12.10 AM now and U r on road sellign Ice-cream ? Wowww What a passion 2wds Job " 😆 . Krishna shows him eyes toh Pintu looks otherwise . Suddenly Rain starts heavily . Prishna runs to see some shelter and to protect themselves from getting wet But It was too late ..They already drenched fully in water . They look at each other and some staring session goes on and then they start laughing .

SONG STARTS ON PRISHNA (Play it and imagine Prishna in this song 😳)


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hgATY0zThNY[/YOUTUBE]

Rain stops and they buys the Ice-cream . Krishna Pointing behind him " Pintuji !! BABLOO SIR " . Pintu turns to see , Krishna snatches the Ice-cream and runs . Pintu runs behind her . While Running Krishna looses her balance and she falls in mud , Pintu too falls on her . krishna still was holding the icecream . While falling She had part of that ice-cream on her face .Pintu who was on Krishna first holds her hand and takes a bite from the Ice-cream and then comes closer 2 her and wipes the whole icecream from her cheeks with his mouth . Then they both 2gther takes the bite from the same icecream as the other one fall in mud . After taking a bite They hug each other still lying down . Icecream waala and some counted people starts laughing on them . Prishna realizing it stands up . Both of their faces were blushing like a red tomato . They look at each other with embarassment and then leaves the place 2 return to their house .




Edited by moniluvskinshuk - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful fantabulous fanstastic OS. Wow you did awesome jo from pintu being sad to Krishna supporting him and then forcefully taking him for a walk.

Wow krishna ji is very naughty and crazy for icecream and Pintu ji asked vender that he love his job too much. I just love love love the song Dekho. It is really beautiful scene
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow this OS is beautiful , I culd truely imagine the entire scene
its just awesome
really love your OS
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Another Awesome OS from you Moni I love it please do keep writing more. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow truly beautiful I was so imagining the whole scene was even hearing the music. Thanks well done.
Please write more
Love, love it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank u so much Guyzz . U guyzz are so sweet 2 love my OS . Thank u sooo sooo much . 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@moni - This is a very cute OS. Loved it! Keep it coming 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh what a sweet OS moni😳...could picturize it😍...also an apt song choice for prishna in the rain👍🏼😳...keep wiriting more dear😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Priya , Kaveri Thanks a lot for ur lovely kind comments 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Monica that was just fantastic i just loved reading both your OS and they just keep on getting better hope we get more from u.

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