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luvsakshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: asheema_sharma
superb...
plz update soon...😃

thank you

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taashu11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: Oneandall

I love how you did this. What a way to express yourself and definitely made me laugh! 😆😊
😊

its mine first attempt to comment like this but i cant help myself as all luvsakshi's ff make me crazy to do such stuff...

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: tasshuu

its mine first attempt to comment like this but i cant help myself as all luvsakshi's ff make me crazy to do such stuff...

Awww thank you very much 😳

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Etika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#234

Neel di
this all parts are awesome .
Thanku for updating this ff here.

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: SWEETETIKA
Neel di
this all parts are awesome .
Thanku for updating this ff here.

thank you dear ,its my plesure

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#236

priya: whispers slowly .. bless with me a kid as soon as possible ...i want to give the happiness of paternity to my hubby ..sooo plzzz
santa ram: smiles loudly ...
seeing his beautiful wife pretty face ...with annoyed look..pulls her closely
im thinking to make a CRICKET TEAM.. :whistling:u want only one kid ...sirf ek...
priya:broke the hug ..pulls the beard ...shocked &surprised to see ram as santa...

PART-13

ram: smiles ...
duljeet: hits his head ...bhai you should act for some more time ...
priya: YE -ye kya hai??

making fun of me ?fizzle out from there...
ram: gave a stern look at daljeet ...
ab tho madam naraj hai !!!!
slowly walks to her ...
scratching his head ...to start conversation with priya...
priya...he calls out ...
...
priyaa..[talking to himself go ahead ram cooldown her ]
sorry i ..i was just ...place his hands on her shoulders turns her to his side...
ram: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
kamaal hai...i thought you were angry ...seeing her delighted face ...
priya:keeping her hands on her hips[usual way]
observing him ..top to bottom ...thinking how cute my golu is ...
i dont want to create a embarassing scene infront of everyone...[remind his words]
ram:with a cute smile ...
did i told anything wrong ...
or any WORD...
her cheeks are turning to crimson red..
not able to meet up with his dark eyes...
ram:leaning to her ...
can i say something ...
priya:pushing him back with all her force...
haaa...
ram:as of my knowledge ...you wont be pregnant with in a night ...you have to impress your hubby...
you have to work very hard for that ...
priya...plzz ..mr.kapoor ..
ram:enjoying her discomfort ..her blushing . ...her way of talk...everything ..
areee really priya ...
i dont know you were this much eager to ...
priya:stops him ...ab chaliye ...i think they are waiting for us ...about to turn...
ram:entangled her wrist and pulled towards him...
priya:slumps in rams strong arms...embraced her in his tight grip...
gazing into his eyes...seeing her own reflection in his eyes ...small eyelock seccion..
ram:about to place a kiss...
priya:pushes him ...struggles to free from his grip...
ram:he tightens his grip ...
priya: she knows he is stronger than her ...she wont win and gave up ...
pleaded him with making a puppy face ...
ram: ...
priya: mr.kapoor...leave me plzzz...if anybody sees us...it wont be good...
ram:ohhh if anybody hears your wish ...is it good???and ...
priya:plzz let me go ...
ram:getting more closer to her..
she closed her eyes ...expecting a kiss...
whispers in her ear ...if i leave you ..how you are gonna make
priya:closes his lips by placing her hand ...
ram:gave a subtle kiss on her hand...
priya:removes her hand ...buried her head in his chest ...
ram: wipes sweating from her forehead and asks someone is very hot in this cold breeze also ...
priya:hits him on his chest ...
after some time ...
aap bahut accha lagate hai...
you are very cute in this outfit ...
love you GOLU SANTA... .
pulls his cheeks affectionately and gave a warm kiss on his cheeks ...
lost in their thoughts...
came to this world by hearing a click sound ...flash on their faces...

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Edited by luvsakshi - 13 years ago