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Posted: 19 years ago
#1
There r no fanfics 4 Armaan-Jassy.so I'm writing an emotional omne 4 them.Plz don't move it 2 fanfic forum as there r no active Armaan-jassy fans.plz read this.Plz others also start sending fanfics 4 them 2 make our forum active


Part-1...Armaan is looking at the photo of Jassy A:I
can't 4get my 1st meeting with
u.
A recalls.Jassy cums 2 A's
office 4 interview.A cud'nt
take eyes ff her.It was luv at
1st site.A goes & asks
her dad Mr.Walia:I wud like 2
marry Jassy?will u plz conduct our
wedding?
Dad was surprised.
A:finally that day has
cum.2day we'll get married.
A smiles.
Jassy has dressed up like a
bride.J weeps in her house.
J:I feel that I'm doing a
mistake.
Her mom gayatri:no,don't b
guilty.we've told everything 2 armaan.but
promise that u'll never talk
about this 2 armaan.
J:ok mama,bcozs I want 2 4get
my past.but I doubt
whether I can luv armaan.still
I don't feel like marrying
him.
G becomes upset:u've 2 luv
armaan beti.he's such a
nice guy.
J's eyes r full of tears.
Gayatri goes near
Walia:I lied 2 jassy that we've
told everything 2 armaan.that's
how she agreed 4 this
marriage.if abrman cums 2 no
everything what'll b jassy's
future?
W becomes upset:lets hope 4
the best.

Jassy-Armaan enter the
mandap.they get married. J's mind
was full of
pain.song:Dhadkan…{Dhadkan}

Jassy is sitting inside the
decorated bedroom.ARmaan
enters.J gets tensed.

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Aabha thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi jasmine 😃

thanks so much for taking the time out to write this yaar! i really really appreciate the effort hon, but can u please fix it so that it's more legible. Right now it's kinda choppy cuz the font's shifted so no one can really read it 😳 i tried, but i just couldn't get it. plz correct it cuz i actually do wanna read it again...i'll have to read it later on today cuz i've gotta go to bed now, but will defo read it in the afternoon for sure! 😉

thanks once again,

~Abz~ 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanks, its very nice! 😃😃 But Jassi's Mom's name is not Gayatri!😕 😕Its Amrit!😊😊
Edited by laddoo598 - 19 years ago
momogrl21 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#4
Thanks for making one! It's nice 😛
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#5
2morrow onwards i'l write properly.plz bear with me


Part-2..Armaan smiles at Jassy.J did'nt smile properly.


A:jassy,2day   ;my dream came
true.i was waiting 2 get u.i

just can't believe that now u
r mine.only mine.
J
becomes upset. A:u no what I
felt when I saw u 1st?u r
my
wife.that's why did'nt
employ u there.what did u feel


when u saw me 1st?
J
was speechless. A:I no that
u also felt the same.
J
becomes upset.J
thinks:eventho he nos
everything,why

he's talking like this?he's so
nice.i don't deserve him.

A cums near J.A holds her hand
& keeps on her chest:u r
my
luck.
J
feels discomfort.she wants 2
get away from A.

J:I'm tired after the
function.can I sleep?

A:sure…sleep.b fresh.

J:thanku armaan.u r an
understanding husband.no other
guy

can b so soft in this nite.
J
sleeps.A smiles.


The next morning Jassy
brings bed coffee 4 armaan
A:thanku

jassy.
A
starts drinking. A:did u
drink coffee?

J:no
A
extends hiss cup:drink this

J:this is urs no?

A:we'll share it

J:I'm sorry armaan.i don't like
drinking from other's cup.

A
becomes dull. J:don't feel
bad plz.

A:its ok.


Armaan cums in the evening.
A:jassy,get ready.we've 2 go 4

a
party.

J:sorry armaan.i'm not coming 4
the party.

A:jassy,what r u telling?my
friends arranged this party
4
us.plz cum with me jassy.

J:ok,let me wear sari.

A:thanks jassy 4 cuming with
me.
A
sits there.J takes the sari.
J:I've 2 wear sari.

A:ok.. J:so plz go out of
this room. A
was embarrassed:ok,I'm
sorry.
A
goes out. A thinks:why do I
feel that jassy is

avoiding me?is my feeling
true?
Edited by jasminerahul - 19 years ago
Aabha thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#6
thanks for the interesting continuation jasmine! thanks for agreeing to change the format so it'll be easier to read 😃 plz continue 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#7
Part-3..Jassy cums in a grand violet sari.Armaan cud'nt take his eyes off her. A:jassy…u look really nice.
A's arms go 2 her face.J moves away.A becomes dull. J:we'll go.
J walks out.
A-J reach the party place. 1 guy announces:now the famous baby doll is going 2 perform .we ask all the cuples especially the newly married cuple Armaan-jassy 2 dance 2 the song.
A smiles at jassy.J:plz armaan.my mind is not allowing me 2 dance.
A was shocked:why?
J:armaan,I'm not feeling well.
A:jassy,then we'll go 2 a doctor
J:no need.it wil b ok if I take rest.
J's cell rings.It was gayatri:jassy,how r u?
J:fine mama. G:how is armaan?
J:fine.how r u? & papa..
G:we both r fine.jassy…keep armaan happy.don't giv him
chance 2 become sad.he's gr8 jassy.he gave u a new life. J becomes upset:now we r at a
party.so bye mama. G:bye. J thinks:I shud'nt make arman
sad.
J looks at A.he looks sad. J
smiles at A.A becomes very happy.J:armaan,now I'm ok.we'll
dance 2gether. A was thrilled:really? J:ya.
Babydoll performs:Aksar…{Dhadkan}.A-J dance 2gether.A looks at
J. Seeing J's dull face,A's face becomes dull.After the song got stopped J moves away
from A.A becomes dull. A thinks:why do I feel that Jassy is keeping a distance with me?
laddoo598 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#8
Its really good! But dont keep janda away from each other for a long time! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#9
Part-4...Jassy is infront of the mirror.she's trying 2
remove her necklace.
Armaan cums:shall I help u? J:4 what?
A:I'll help u 2 remove ur necklace.
J:no thanks.i myself will remove it.
A becomes dull.J removes it.
J:armaan,wil u plz go out,I want 2 change my dress.
A:ok. A goes out. A thinks:how much I dreamt about
my life with jassy?is it shattering?is it true that dreams won't cum true?
A becomes upset.He goes back 2 the bedroom.there J was sleeping. J looks at her with
sad eyes.A was sleepless & walks out. J opens her eyes & tells in her mind:I'm
sorry armaan,I still can't luv u.that's why I'm avoiding
u.plz 4giv me.
J's eyes r full of tears. J
thinks:I don't think I can ever luv armaan.poor guy.he loves me very much.but he's not getting anything from his
wife.

A's mom Sarala tells:Armaan,take jassy out 4 lunch.
J:no need mummiji.
S:no matter.armaan has 2 take jassy out. wives won't force their husbands 2 take them
out.but husbands shud behave knowing their wives' desires.
A thinks:I'm happy 2 take jassy out.but I doubt whether kusum wil b happy.

A-J r sitting in a restaurant.
A:jassy,if my mom had'nt asked 2 cum with me 4 a lunch here,wud u hav cum with
me?
J was speechless. A says in
his mind:I no jassy,u wud've cum with me?
A:jassy..u look very pretty
now
J:thanks A:not only now,u r
always pretty,u r very fair.Am I that bad looking?
fair?I no that I'm not fair.but I'm a that dark?
J:u r not dark.u r very fair.very attractive also.
A smiles:really? J:ya. A:u no jassy,I'm so lucky 2
hear a complement from u.i value ur comment more than
anybody else's comment.
J feels pity.

The next day,A-J go 2 stay in
J's house. J tells A:armaan,can I sleep with my
mom 2nite?
A:what?

WILL ARMAAN ALLOW JASSY 2 B
WITH HER MOM DURING NITE?

laddoo598 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#10
THANKS ALOT! BUT ARMAAN'S MOM'S NAME IS ILA NOT SARALA! 😊

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