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Posted: 13 years ago
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Kya karoon is Mohan Bhatnagar ka...Kitne bar soochti hoon ki aaj kuch nahin likhungi iske baare main...Kuch to time bach jaayega , par nahin yeh kuch na kuch aisa kardeta hai ki main inspire ho jaati hoon...Guys I know I take a lot of your time with my shayari/poem but ek aur likhi hai to jhel lo yaaroon!

Okay! Yesterday's episode was a transitional phase for me, where the silver lining around the cloud is widening. Mohan was welcoming a new day in his life with optimism and hope. But things were not as bright for Megha. For her, it was yet another day when she has to live with the traces of past night so she decided to maintain a distance. Ab iske repercussions to hone hi the. Anything that affects Mehga brings a tidal effect on Mohan. He kept struggling with the rise and fall of her hopeful entrance back into his life. And what did he get in the end --- a strangers' look!, an thankless response to his courtesy! Well this was all expected. But what was not expected was the precap. Mohan, who gives a damn about what people think and how they behave, confronting Megha! Well I do not think 'confronting' is the right word...What he said was difficult to explain. He said, " Kya hua...mujhse baat karne ko mana kiya hai?...It was the most mesmerizing 'Kya hua'. His voice had an unexpected softness, it had a tint of complaint, a flair of concern and a lot of love. The way he said 'Gharwaaloon ne mana kiya hai mujhse baat karne ko' was heart melting. It conveyed a message that ---"I understand your delimma Megha, I understand that U are being forced to take this step but yet I am hurt that you took this decision of staying away from me...why what is my fault?...why talking to me is equally important to you also?" I heard all this in his man's one word "Kya hua". -----Na bole tum par phir bhi maine woh sab kuch suna jo tumne nahin kaha. I see a contrast here...Reshmi left you but you did't ever ask her why. But now when it is only been two occasions in few hours that Megha has not spoken, you are already pining for her!...How true love has changed you dear Mohan!

This one is for all Mohan Fans...

Raakh ke dher main kab tak daba rahoon
Jale pankhoon ko khol ke phir uda hoon main
Mujh parwaane ki hammat to dekho
Bhujhati samma phir jalane chala hoon main

Dil ka aaina toote toh aawaz nahin hoti
Bikhare tukaro ko bator ke phir chala hoo main
Mujh dilwaale ki himmat to dekho
Pattaro ko torne chala hoon main

Tar- tar damand hua mera tere ghar main
Chak is damand ko phir seene chala hoon main
Mujh fakir ki himmat to dehko
Tere hi dar pe phir khada hoon main

Pyaar ko pyaar na mile koi baat nahi
Teri berukhi ka bhi sazada karne chala hoon main
Mujh mauji ki himmat to dekho
Pyaar ko ibaadat bananey chala hoon main.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing yaar👏 no words 😍

in precap...mohan say kyun dur dur ho ..hai ree😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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whitepearl: Wow nicely written 👍🏼👏, kuch aur add karne ki zarorat hi nahi hai. Pura same to same mein kehana chahati thi 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great post and yes beautifully written, esp the last bit -- Rashmi left for ever and he dint bother but Megha doesnt speak to him normally just for a couple of hrs and hes mighty upset ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dear Whitepearl - the genius, Thank god, you wrote one at last...🤗
You are not wasting my time, but infact I wait for your poems daily. 😳

Sach mein, yesterday's episode was very heart wrenching,😭 Mohan was very hurt by her avoidance, and me too. But yes, Megha too is scared of hearing what she is denying to herself - his feelings for her, so better not talk to him. 🤔

But hamara Mohan ka kya, he is being punished unnecessarily.
😒 His effort is wasted here, he is hiding his feelings from her, so that he may not lose her friendship and enjoy her company, but what happened?, even though he backed off from his love confession and termed it as a joke, he is facing her "berukhapan". So, what's the use? instead, Mohan should've confessed, and would've thought - "jo hoga dekha jaayega!!"😉

Now about Your poem... words can't express this beauty!! Just Superb.
👍🏼
Mohan ke dil ka haal... so mesmerizing...😍
Loved every line in this soulful song of Mohan, and loved this line especially...❤️

Pyaar ko pyaar na mile koi baat nahi
Teri berukhi ka bhi sazada karne chala hoon main
Mujh mauji ki himmat to dekho
Pyaar ko ibaadat bananey chala hoon main.

Thankyou.🤗


Edited by mohan-sun-na - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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your mesmerizing words..👏...

itching to translate it.😆...

ab kya kaare...since i can;t weave d magic with words d way u do...i am just content in translation.😊..

i loved u didnt talk about pain...but of hope...of d undying faith & unfaltering courage only true love can instill...

falling in love is d easiest part of d journey of love...but walking on d roads of love...sumtimes alone...sumtimes just wth d memory of ur love...& in more fortunate times in step wth ur love...is d actual test of love...& ahh...d test is soo tough yet so rewarding...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amisha.Laher

Amazing yaar👏 no words 😍

in precap...mohan say kyun dur dur ho ..hai ree😍



Thanks Amisha...I really like Mohan's Straightforwardness when she asked Megha. He does not want any misunderstand or confusion between the two. That's a sign of true friend.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dee_76

whitepearl: Wow nicely written 👍🏼👏, kuch aur add karne ki zarorat hi nahi hai. Pura same to same mein kehana chahati thi 😉


Thanks Dee...Chalo main kisiaur ke dil ka haal bhi toh jaan sakti hoon. 😉 great minds think a like.😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: smittu

great post and yes beautifully written, esp the last bit -- Rashmi left for ever and he dint bother but Megha doesnt speak to him normally just for a couple of hrs and hes mighty upset ❤️

Thanks Smittu😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mohan-sun-na

Dear Whitepearl - the genius, Thank god, you wrote one at last...🤗
You are not wasting my time, but infact I wait for your poems daily. 😳

Sach mein, yesterday's episode was very heart wrenching,😭 Mohan was very hurt by her avoidance, and me too. But yes, Megha too is scared of hearing what she is denying to herself - his feelings for her, so better not talk to him. 🤔

But hamara Mohan ka kya, he is being punished unnecessarily.
😒 His effort is wasted here, he is hiding his feelings from her, so that he may not lose her friendship and enjoy her company, but what happened?, even though he backed off from his love confession and termed it as a joke, he is facing her "berukhapan". So, what's the use? instead, Mohan should've confessed, and would've thought - "jo hoga dekha jaayega!!"😉

Now about Your poem... words can't express this beauty!! Just Superb.
👍🏼
Mohan ke dil ka haal... so mesmerizing...😍
Loved every line in this soulful song of Mohan, and loved this line especially...❤️

Pyaar ko pyaar na mile koi baat nahi
Teri berukhi ka bhi sazada karne chala hoon main
Mujh mauji ki himmat to dekho
Pyaar ko ibaadat bananey chala hoon main.

Thankyou.🤗



Yaar tum na apni profile pic change karo...Har baar aisa lagta hai seedha Mohan hi jhaak raha hai...😆.Wasi it is a beautiful pic.😳 Thanks a lot...Ur comments encourages me to write more.🤗
About Mohan...Bilkul Theek kaha...all his efforts are going in vain. He is sacrificing so much just to see her happy face, even to the extend that he is ready to make a joke of his own emotions. Well said, He should have expressed his love to her...Abhi bhi to Megha baat nahin kar rahi...tub bhi nahi karti. Atleast he would not have suffered so much.😡

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