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Why are the grandkids so PG here
Originally posted by: 18mypride
are we getting update 2day š
Originally posted by: jayshu17
mona ur story is awesome..mindblowing... i like that part especially wen geet was depressd and maan comes wit candle lit symbolising that he is wit her!!!good job gal..keep it up!!!š³š³š³
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gem1606, dpurva, navyanissi, sheetalvasa, nehavashi, malikn, kabslocks, priyasree, preet.harman, SuperbDrashti, shubhigupta, varu, dreams-reality, manjuahuja, Candy_js, afghanqueen, d_sonia, Hanishadevi, jayshu17, pamil, lathaau, angelaraf, nostalgic_soul, bhakbhartifan, divya22, neethuMG, sree.maneet, piya27, sweetysaran, maan_geet1, preetymaaneet, gbhat, sk_75, manisha259, fatema_007, 4komal4, JANAGI, dolly10, Moon002, renjini263, nats0101, simm28, --Fairy--, drrose31, KINGKHANFAN, maaneetmaahi, uteem, Gcs-girl, ashvinisharma, maansi007, kuhu18, maanspadhu, shristi1, cyum321, MyInfatuationz, kamiya, -Prithi-, rubinahansa, misty_drastifan, aakritisri1111, Jass.KN, ritzy09, love2_soma, dona86, DDbiggestfan, punam2712, srirad, jyothikrish, payalpari, tamanna1391, megh_piyashi, shrutheAjay, Remya_Pillai, kahkashansakina, jyoti_l, anupm04, todayzstar, zaara2212, tushti-kiran, abinash079, meena.., hinal_maaneet, maansee, sona-rai, minnie_tweetie, Mehek25, nahtani88, mandymore, PrithviSanyo1, -NaGs_BaBy-, monikaseth, RajeevGurtiFan, dumas, janu_2006, bhanu_rekhag, spvd,Maan hugged her tightly and kissed the hair hair of his love his geet who hid herself in his embraceā¦..
Geet's hold on maan became tighter and tighter by the passing of every secondā¦she is making herself sure that her maan is really with her..she's crying silently whilst maan caressed her hair with one hand to console.."maan plz don't leave me again..i cant leave with out you maanā¦I cant leave..i love you maan"geet said between her sobs still hugging him tightā¦
"no geetā¦never in this lifeā¦mein tumhe chod kar kahi nahi jaaunga"said maan for which geet smiled at himā¦
"ha geet..i wont leave youā¦becoz I love you and I cant live without you"said maan cupping her face with utmost loveā¦
Geet smiled with tears and about to hug him but stopped when she heard the sound of clapping..maan and geet turned to otherside just to find vicky standing there clapping..
"wah!!what a confession..maan I cant leave without youā¦geet I cant live without you maan.. vicky mocked them š”and laughed out loudlyā¦
Here geet stood shocked when she saw vicky there and she almost forgot breathing..she stood there rooted to spot looking at vicky with horrified expressions..

Maan is fuming with anger when he saw that man there who made geet's life hell and still trying to intimidate her to act according to his wish but this time he cant do anything as maan is with herā¦maan's eyes almost turned blood red and his fists tigtenedā¦vicky smirked at geet who almost lost her senses in fearā¦she is about to fall down as her legs were too feeble to support her but maan instantly saved her placing his arm around her waist protectively for which vicky glared at maanā¦
Vicky:so geet..u broke ur promise..oh babes u always end up in breaking ur promise and insist me to do something or the otherā¦lagtha hai ajay ko friend milgaya..ajay wait for sometimeā¦your friend is coming there..said vicky looking at roof..
Saying so he aimed gun towards maan but there is no sign of fear in his eyes instead they are reflecting fireā¦here geet is hell scared as she know what vicky is up to..he killed ajay without even thinking once..so he can kill maan too which she don't want..after all maan is her love her lifeā¦
"no..no vicky plz..maan ko kuch mat karoā¦I'll do whatever you want..but plz maan ko chod do"pleaded geet in tears..
"oh!!my love don't cry..i cant see you in tears..kya kartha mein u broke ur promise and I have to break my promise..ok but still I'll give u a chance.."said vicky and his gaze shifted towards maan whose eyes refected only rage..
"ok mr.maan or whatever you are..i don't have any enimity with you..so I have decided to give you one chance as my love requested me..stay away from geet"said vicky still aiming revolver at maanā¦
"exactly!!!stay away from geet..oops!!my love my geet..maan ki geet(stresses the word)..and ha I don't give you any chance and will kill u if u even think of harming her...meri geet se door raho warna mein tumhe kuch karne layak nai chodunga..na chance dene ya lene.."
"tumhe kya laga vicky??u can do whatever u want..u made a very big mistake in your life and that is messing with maan singh khuranaā¦.u cant even touch her shade(parichayi)when msk is with her"said maan pointing his finger towards fuming vickyā¦
"ha ha haā¦maan singh khuranaā¦kya dialogue thaā¦hmmm why don't you try as a writer..you would have had very good future but not now"said vicky and released bullet immediately without giving a second to thinkā¦"maaan"geet screamedā¦.
Geet slowly opened her eyes which were closed till now and found no one there..she's panting and her body is sweating badly due to fearā¦she looked here and there and found herself lying on the floor irregularly..she took a sigh of relief when she realised that she was dreamingā¦she cried out loud hugging her knees as she was scaredā¦
"nahiii mein⦠mein ye sach nahi hone dungi..mein maan ko kuch nahi hone dungiā¦ha mein maan se door rahungi"thought geet while cryingā¦she cried for a long time and drifted again to sleep leaning towards the wall near herā¦
After sometime, someone slowly opened the door of her room and found her sleepingā¦she looked very pale and anyone can say that she was crying since long time also there were tears on her cheeksā¦the one who entered the room is none other than maan(is baar sacchi meinš) he closed his eyes in pain when he found geet in that conditionā¦he cupped her face without disturbing her sleep..he took her in his embrace and wiped her tearsā¦.
"geet I promise u..i wont let u cry anymore now..i promise u to give all the happiness u deserve and take all ur pains..i wont leave u alone geet..this is the last time iam leaving u alone..iske baad tum hamesha mere saath hogi"said maan and kissed her foreheadā¦he slowly lifted her in his arms without disturbing her and placed her on bed..he covered her with quilt and left the place kissing her foreheadā¦
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Pinky is cleaning all the mess thereā¦she is shocked when she noticed the blood on one of the glass pieceā¦
Pinky:what's this??blood is still wetā¦kahi..no no..this cant happenā¦
She shrugged off her thought and went on cleaning it..meanwhile,maan came back to homeā¦
Pinky:bhai aap kaha chale gaye the itne raat..pagal ho gaye ho kya..mein kitna gabra gayi thiā¦you said that u are returning home when I called u 2 hours back but u are late..where were u??bhai aap geet se milne gaye naā¦asked pinky without any full stopā¦
Maan:ha pinkyā¦kese nahi jaatha⦠she was crying..bas pinky kal ke baad geet ke aankhon mein ek bhi aasu nahi aane dunga(poor maan don't know that he's going to join geetš)
Pinky I requested commissioner uncle to trap vicky's calls..i gave his number..and kal subah tak humein pata chal jaayega ki o idiot kaha haiā¦
Pinky smiled at maan for which maan smiled back..suddenly maan felt dizzy and held his head with his hand...
"bhai bhai kya huwa??are u all right??"asked pinky worriedly and made him sit on couch but with in a second maan fainted on her lapā¦
"bhai..bhai what happened"pinky tried to wake him up..when she failed she brought glass of water and sprinkled water on maan's face..maan opened his eyes and pinky helped him to sitā¦
"bhai kya huwa aapko..aap teek toh hai na"
Maan:ha pinky don't worry iam fine..pata nahi aaj kal muje kya horaha haiā¦baar baar chakkar aane lagtha hai"
Pinky:kyun nahi aayegi chakkar..u don't even have ur food on timeā¦. I think it's low B.P ā¦
Maan:nahi pinky mein time se khana kha raha hoon..can u believe aaj kal muje bhook bhi zyada lag rahi haiā¦.so no chance for thatā¦
Now pinky's fear increased more as maan's health condition is not goodā¦maan noticed this and smiled..
Maan:ofoo pinky..now don't start ur worry session plz..iam fine..i think stress ki wajah se aisa huwa hai..u don't worry..
Pinky gave weak smile but still fear is visible in her eyes..
Pinky:bhai..plz u go and take restā¦.subah commissioner uncle se bhi toh milna hai na..
Maan nodded and headed towards the roomā¦pinky stood there with scared face..
"oh no!!ye kya horaha hai..god plz mein jo soch rahi hoon o sab galat hoā¦plz god..no no I cant sit like thisā¦pehle blood,ab ye symptoms..i should do something..ha I'll take this for test atleast for my satisfactionā¦god plz nothing should go wrong"
Precap:
maan is trying to snatch the gun in his hand but meanwhileā¦ā¦ā¦.
Pinky is shocked when she opened it..she broke down on floor and cried out loudā¦
Friends past will get finished in 2 0r 3 parts..and then we can move to present..tab tak bear with me plz and support me by pressing like and giving comments..plz give long ones rather than one word..ur comment motivates me..plz plz
And guys plz forgive me for continous sad updates..situation hi kucyh aisa hai na..i promise to give happy wala updates but after 2,3 parts..plz bear with me till them..iam sorry againā¦ā¦
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love..
-monaš³
Originally posted by: jyothikrish
edited~~
mona... š”
yeh dream tha... omg... i thought that vicky's chapter is closed... par tumne kya kiya.. hey babaji...
poor geet she is crying crying... š
me feeling very very sad for her..
oh so finally maan talked with commissioner and trapped vickys call..
yaar complete this vicky soon.. cant see maneet in pain...
oh no maan fainted..
yaar mona i am really crying now...
pinky sensed something and thought of taking blood sample...
oh no precap is scaryyy ... šš
yaar i cant read next update.. in which it will reveal that maan is suffering with...
oh nooo
but plz continue soon...
love u... muahhh
Originally posted by: abinash079
awesome update
loved itso pinkey would come to know about maan's health
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