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hey friends iam starting another ss...MY SOUL MATE...
hope u all like it...it is just 8 or 10 parts...iam posting 1st part now...so plz tell me whether i should continue with it or not...

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as usual maaneet are main characters...


it is about how destiny plays a role to meet two people from two different ways of living...and how they become best soul mate to each other...
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INDEX:

part1:-page1

PART-2

PART-3

PART-4

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MY SOUL MATE

[banner credit goes to sakshi di]

part-1

"why??why this happens to me always??y she hates me soo much?why?? says geet who is sitting in a corner of her dark room tightly hugging her knees'and sobbing like a baby'

"why she's doing this to me?why papa wont utter a word when she illtreats me?is iam that bad?she always says that iam an evil omen to this house' iam i?????she again starts sobbing in few minutes her sobbing turns in to a loud cry.she is not just letting out her tears but her pain is coming out in the form of tears'not because she is believing all those whatever her mom says'no she could not be called a mom because no mother in this world behaves like this brutally,mercilessly with her own daughter...

Yes!!!!!!her mom,pammi will never treat her as her daughter but as a burden to her...she always wants to get rid of her...she'll never let her to do whatever she want...she didn't even spoke to her lovingly...actually expecting love from her is like waiting for the person who don't exist in this world...in the same way it seems like love is totally deceased from her heart but long back...she never found her mom asking for her atleast having a glimpse of her..."why she hates me??why she hate a glimpse of me??y???she starts crying again...she continuosly kept on crying,sobbing sometimes...then she starts sniffing heavily due to continous crying...she slowly drifted in to sleep...

In the morning she woke up with a jerk when she remembered the last night's incident in which her mom were shouting at her rather ordering her to do whatever she says...

Flashback:

Nakul enters geet's room just to find geet engrossed in her books ,yes geet likes to study and she is doing her M.B.B.S final year...she is a very intelligent girl in the class and she always tops in the class...so she wants to top this time too and preparing for that as final exams were not so far..just in 1 month...

Nakul:geet didi pammi ma'm is calling u and she told that u should be there with in 5 minutes...

Geet instantly closes her books and runs downstairs as she don't want to take any risk...

Geet:ji mom....

pammi wont even look at her but just informs her that she's gonna get married so soon and her engagement is after 3 days...

geet is shocked to the hell with the piece of info she gave to her...this is her life...she's gonna get married to someone and she's informing her now before 3 days of the engagement'she even don't know the person to whom she is gonna marry'

geet:but mom...I dnt..

pammi immediately stops her"iam nt asking un ur opinion iam informing u about my decision...

tears starts making their way down her cheeks"she don't even let me to talk'never...but still iam trying...oh god I have my exams in 1 month...atleast I want to complete my studies"

she knew that pammi wont listen or agree with her but still she gathered her courage and asked her in pleading tone.."mom plz let me complete my studies atleast..plz"

but pammi is pammi..."geet I already said u that iam just informing u my decision and that's final'..and wat u are going to do after completing ur so called studies..??ha are u going u manage a hospital and treat patients???huh(smirks)..let me complete my exams..(imitates geet).."look I just allowed u to study becoz ur papa insisted me..and now iam not going to listen to anyone...

now geet is totally broken her last hope is her papa...she looks at him with pleading eyes...but he gives her sympathetic look and leaves the place...

Ends...

Geet recalls it and starts to cry again...she somehow gathers strength and wipes her tears..."no I wont let it happen now..i wont allow anyone to judge my life anymore...not even mom..i always did whatever she said but not now...she have to answer to all my questions today..ha she have to..."

She stands up and makes her way to the living room where pammi is sitting in a couch and talking on phone...geet stands in front of her and says..."I don't want to marry now..I want to complete my M.B.B.S and stand up on ownfeet.."

Pammi smirks and says"she again started her nonsense"

She stands up and is about to move from there but geet holds her wrist"mom u have to answer me today...y u hate me ??y u hate my appearance?y?

But pammi keeps mum...geet turns her towards her and asks her again by holding both her shoulders tightly and shaking her..."mom u have to answer me...y u hate me? y???y mom y??plz tell me y??mom plz..

Geet asks her while crying bitterly...

Pammi just pushes her which makes geet land up on ground..."becoz I hate u" geet is shattered by her answer..even she know that she hates her but she might have expected that she atleast wont say it from her mouth...tears made their way to her cheeks...she slowly tries to speak and says in a husky voice"mom"

Don't say that...don't say that from ur mouth...iam not ur mom and u r not my daughter...now geet is totally shattered..she's just looking at her like alife less soul...her world broke in to pieces.."yes u r not my daughter but u r daughter to ur father..his illegal child...ur mom is bloody bitch who tried to separate me from my husband...

"pammi"cried mohinder in rage..."ye kya bakwas kar rahi ho tum'ye mat bhoolo ki meri pehli patni rano thi aur tumne usse cheena hai apne pati ko"

And they started quarrelling...geet who was sitting like a lifeless body got up and said "iam ready for this wedding"

She said in one go and left the place...she don't know why she said it but said it...she went to her room and settled in the same place where she was in last night...she spent two days like that without coming out and without maintaining any relation with any one...even with her father...atlast the engagement day arrived...the whole palace was busy with engagement preparations...pinky,geet's friend entered geet's room and made her dressed up in the engagement outfit...geet is just sitting like a rock and pinky can just cry for her but cant do anything more than that becoz no one can dare to go against pammi's will in handa palace...

Here in the hall pammi is busy with her talk on phone just then her evil daughter sameera comes there who just arrived from her trip...

Sam:mom wat's all these'.wat nonsense iam hearing'geet's engagement with the great bussiness man "maan singh khurana"..are u out of ur mind'I mean u r making that stupid girl,whom u call a evil omen to our palace...arranged her wedding with msk'achanak itna pyar????

Pammi:oh common sam..did u lost it?how can u even think that I love that bitch's daughter?never..iam just making this becoz iam getting a project from khurana constructions...

Sam:oh so that's the matter...then y don't me but that idiot??

Pammi:becoz I don't want u to loose evrything...

Sam looks at her confusingly...."nahi samji??i'll tell u"

Mr.khurana have cancer that too last stage and he's gonna die within one year...his daadi wanted him to marry so that khurana family would be extended with maan's kids..for that she wants a simple girl who can tolerate anything...so I made an agreement with her that she should give me the biggest project of KI in return of geet...so it's simple!in this way we can get rid of that burden...

Sam:wow mom u r intelligent...

Both smiles evilly...

Precap:

Engagement...


hope u guys like it...please press like and do comment...

IF U WANT PM'S FROM ME PLZ ADD ME TO UR BUDDY LIST...

love u all...

-mona


link to next part:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/53074580

Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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huh... crul world...
poor geet!
nice begining ... yaar !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update loved it nice start maan has cancer hope it a lie thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting..
waiting for nxt part

thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start mona...
poor geet... so sad for her...
chi... hate that pammi... how can she treat geet like that...
hate that sam even..
god what will happen now...
plz mona continue soon dear..
cant wait to read next part...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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O...O...😲...Maan has cancer...

please Yaar u have broken my heart in first part only...

don't separate Maaneet please...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb
Continue Soon
Thanks 4 The PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I m lovin it dear...its really great to get this type of works...jst ur os...Geet bechaari..Pammi is always evil..keep it up

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