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nityaa02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#361

awwwesome update... really loved to see caring side of rey eagerly waiting for the next update...

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annie mathias

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Posted: 13 years ago

#362

it was awesome their quiet fight rey tesi g kria for while dinner their romance all was just awesome i love it

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aishasully

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Posted: 13 years ago

#363

awsomme yaar dono updates mindblowwwing hai yaar no commnt ab jaldi se unka plan batado aur kriyaansh ko saath lao luv da way kriya behaves like a baby soo cuteee yaaarrr one word for it kya baat

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Asha

@Zehnaseeb.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#364

Lovely update... loved the foord n the chocolate part...

dairy milk😛

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--Nishi--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#365

thnq sooo much frnds for liking it😊😊😊😊

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sapnaarsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#366

Originally posted by: nishirockzzz
thnq sooo much frnds for liking it😊

Wen ur updating the next part

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sapnaarsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#367

plzz give a big update tis time 2...plz

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--Nishi--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#368

Hey guys am back with the update..today i thnk am gona give short update coz i hav some projects to be done...Anywayz here is the update...

Swayam*smirks*:Muje pata hain kya karna hai!

all:kyaaa???

All make a circle

Swayam:iss plan ko hume step wise follow karna padega!

all:haan ok!

Swayam:kisi bhi step ko miss kiya toh bahut kadbad ho jayega!

vicky*annoyed*:ok yar plan toh bata!

Swayam:mera baat sab log dhyaan se sunoo...

Nilesh was so irritated with swayam as he was not saying the main point so immediately nilesh comes to swayam as if he was about to kill him...he goes to him with a great force n falls on his legs.

nilesh:arey swayam pehle plan batana bhai!plz!

simmi:tumne toh aisa acting kiya ki tum usse mar rahe ho...

nilesh:kuch zyadha ho gaya hai kya ?

swayam:arey guys chodo ye sab!actually hume...

a voice from back "Rahul?kaha ho?"

Ok this was the terrece whch i hav mentioned ..they find taani coming near the enterence in search of karan ..so all of them gets hyper

Sharon*whispers*:ab kya kare??

simmi:kya kare agar usne dekh liya toh??

vicky:toh hum gaye!

Swayam:arey guys kuch socho socho!!!!haan haan !!karan karan!!

karan:ya ya dude!

swayam:karan tum kuch karo!!usse yaha ane se roko!

karan:mei kya karun?...he was standing near the entrance n all wer walking here n der only karan is visible for taani from outside..

taani:rahul tum yaha ho?

karan was shocked he faces taani with a shock exp and he gets tensed
he sees wer has the gang gone but all of them wer standing in a line side of karan n they were all sticked to the wall ..karan was more tensed by seeing them.taani was about to come in .he places his hand on both sides blocking her from going in

taani:arey chalo andhar chalkar baat karthe hain

karan:nahin hum yahi baat karthe hain na?

taani:rahul kitna badmash ho gaye ho?

karan*thinkin*:badmash?ab meine kya ki?

karan:par meine toh kuch bhi nahin kiya hai..

taani:aww kitna innocently acting kar rahe ho??...and she hugs him

suddenly nilesh whispers "ye ladki pagal hai kya?"

taani breaks the hug n says "tumne kuch kaha ?"

karan:nahin nahin toh !!...and he glares at nilesh

taani:lagtha hai muje teri dil ki baate sunayi de raha hai

rinni*confused*:aisa ho saktha hai?

taani:kya?

karan:ku...kuc..kuch nahi!!bas ke raha hun aisa ho saktha hain kya?mera galat karab ho gaya hain isliye voice aisa hai

taani:okok...haan ho saktha hai jab dho log pyaar mei hota hai toh aise hotha hai..nd hugs him again

swayam*whispers*:usse uske plan ke bare mein kuch puch na!!

taani:kya?

karan:kuch nahin kuch nahin bas dil ki baate...by saying this he doesnt allow her to break the hug so that she could not lift her head.he forceflly dugs her head into his chest.

karan ishara's swayam :kya puch na hai?aur kaise puch na hai?

swayam *says seriously*:muh se puch

taani:kya?

karan:kuch nahin DIL KII AWAZZ..

Swayam ishara's karan:ARey puch !warna teri toh!!

Karan ishara's:haan okok!

karan breaking the hug :waise taani tera agla plan kya hai?

taani:nahin mei nahin bataungi!

karan:kyun?

taani:kyunki mei tumhe surprise dhena chahtha hun...

nilesh :arey iski toh!!...he was going near her to hit her but gang stops him

karan:plz batao na baby...

taani:waise ab tak kuch nahin socha hai...jab plan aya toh bata dungi...ok?

karan:ok...ab tum jakar so jao bahut raat hogayi hai

taani:ok...by saying this she gives a peck on his cheek n go...

Karan comes near the gang by rubbing his cheek

karan:swayam mere liye ek kaam kardho yar plz...

swayam:kya hai?

karan:mere liye ek dettol ya face wash karidho yar !

swayam:kyun?

karan:yeh humesha muje kiss kyun karthi hai yar?*rubbing his cheeks*

all laugh hard!

precap:Swayam:kria iske rey ki galti nahin hai!

sharon:haan kriya woh sirf uss chudail taani ne ki!!

KRiya runs in search of rey n finds rey kissing taani on her cheek

Kria:rey...*tears rolled down*

Rey*shouts*:kria rukho!kria jaisa tum soch rahi ho waisa nahin hai

taani smirks

Edited by nishirockzzz - 13 years ago

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--Nishi--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#369

Originally posted by: dildostidance01
plzz give a big update tis time 2...plz

sorry i culdnt give a big update today tomorrow night i will be free i will give update as big as possible sure!

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

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Posted: 13 years ago

#370

Awesome update...loved it
yeh taani baar baar kyu beech mai aa jati hai
bechara karan usse detol ya face wash use karna padta hai taani ke kiss karne ke baad
eagerly waiting for the next part

Edited by lovely7010 - 13 years ago

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