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Ok guys, I know I promised to answer to all your comments. But all of you threw a googly at me by asking me to give picnic details.

So sorry for not responding but I loved each and every one of them.

For those who don't know, precap is being shifted to another day as I have an additional update today with "picnic".

Now those who know about this update, I have some news for you too. You know I am one crazy writer. So I started typing this chapter and you know my style. I visualized the whole day and when I started typing, it went on and on. By the time I finished I had written 2000+ words, even more than what I wrote on Holi.

I didn't write this part and now I can't cut it short as everything seems important to me…self arrogant fool I am.

But anyways so here are two back to back updates as I couldn't break this and leave you guys hanging.

Now be good and please please give me long long comments (yes a plural….ab I am giving you double updates toh double comment bhi toh banta hai na). And silent readers, please as a special treat…do comment if possible.

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Chapter 23

Picnic Day

Geet woke up early but wondered why. Meera and Daadima completely shooed her off from the kitchen and did not let her lend any hand in preparation. On top of it when she tried to protest Maan came down all wet from a bath and wearing his vest and tracks. Geet was so lost in drooling over his muscles that she lost all her ability to retort when even Maan pulled her out – "Aaj kitchen me no entry hai tumhari. Go and pamper yourself as we will take care of everything."

Geet tried to put up some fight – "Lekin aap"

But Maan cut her in between – "Dekha Daadima, aapki laadli ko kitna confidence hai on great MSK and his Daadima"

[Look Daadima, how much confidence your darling has on great MSK and his Daadima]

Geet's mouth opened wide in amazement as she was left with no comeback.

She shook her head off and decided to get ready with nothing else to do. As she entered the washroom, she was hit by soft aroma of vanilla candles. She noted that bath was already ready with rose petals in it. There was a book with a note on top of it.

"I meant it when I asked you to pamper yourself. Happy Birthday – Maan"

Geet was overwhelmed with emotions and she kissed his name gingerly. She could not believe the effort he had made. More than that it was the thought that counted.

"Unhone mere bare mein itna socha".

[He thought so much about me.]

She again and again kissed the note. She removed her clothes noticing all the small things he had put for her. There was a luxury lavender and milk bath, a spa mask, set of pink grapefruit face wash, scrub and toner. There were sets of foot creams, hand creams and body butters in different flavors. He had created a mini spa for her.

She blushed thinking about his unsaid and unrealized feelings.

She dipped into the warm water, enjoying her time. She came out after almost and hour and a half all relaxed and pampered truly. She dressed in a white t-shirt and jeans pairing it with a set of comfortable flat sandals.

As she walked down, she rolled her eyes at the mayhem down below. Maan, Dev and Daadima all seemed ready to go. But as usual Vicky was throwing tantrums with Meera trying to make him agree on set of clothes.

Dev – "Meera jaldi karo. Dekho ab toh Birthday girl bhi aa gayi hai."

[Hurry up Meera. See now even Birthday Girl has come.]

Geet decided to help clearly harassed Meera.

"Meera tum jao…is badmaash ko mein dekh lungi."

[Meer you go, I will see to this monster now]

Vicky made a face on the word "badmaash". Geet pulled his cheeks – "Tayiji!!!"

"Kyon tang kar rahe ho mummy ko. Chalo jaldi se ready ho jao. Aapko apni tayiji ke saath ghumne nahi jaana…hmmm"

[Why are you giving trouble to Mummy? Come, let's get ready fats. Don't you want to go outside with your Tayiji…hmmm?]

Vicky told her his dilemma of clothes. Geet smiled – "Ok tell me who is the best dressed in this house in boys"

Vicky rolled his eyes – "Off course Bade pa"

Dev gave a glare as Maan pulled his collar up and Daadima laughed aloud.

Geet gave a leisure eye over Maan making him feel a little exposed – "ok so let's see. You Bade Pa is wearing a white shirt with blue jeans…just like your Tayiji. So how about a white shirt/t-shirt with blue jeans. Nothing could go wrong with that."

Geet winked as Vicky agreed readily and ran inside his room to dress up just like his bade papa.

"Wow…that was easy"

"Easy nahi Dev but kya karein…as your brother said in morning…ab great MSK ke aage kiski chalti hai."

Maan smiled slightly at her cheeky response as Meera came all ready and they started off.

In the car, they had breakfast of cucumber-tomato-paneer sandwiches with one side smeared with spicy green chutney and one side with ketchup.

Vicky was grinning ear to ear.

Daadima – "Kya baat hai Vicky…lagta hai aap bahut khush hain picnic ki wajah se"

[What's the matter Vicky…you seem to be very happy because of the picnic.]

Meera twisted his ears – "Yeh khushi filhaal picnic ki nahi balki milk ki jagah apple juice milne ki hai

[This happiness right now is not because of picnic but because he has to drink apple juice and not milk.]

Vicky grumbled – "Mom!!!" while everyone smiled.

Geet took off Meera's hand from his ear and fondled Vicky in her embrace – "Aaj koi tang nahi karega mere bete ko"

[No one will trouble my son today]

They went to a densely foliage area part of protected ridge forest in north of Delhi. Boys quickly set up a tent, barbeque and sports nets while girls put out the sheets, cutlery and food. To start with, Meera and Dev walked off to find out information from forest office. Meanwhile Daadima and Vicky got engaged in a game of ludo as Maan and Geet started to fire the barbecue.

Maan put the coal pieces and Geet placed the grill. As Maan struck the match and lighted the coal, Geet started fanning it slightly. Coal pieces caught fire and Maan adjusted the oxygen opening to just simmer them a little before they were ready to warm the food.

As he straightened he was horrified to see Geet's eyes all red and watery. She was rubbing them slowly as little bit of smoke had directly went inside and irritated her eyes. Maan quickly went to her and held her hand.

"Yeh kya kar rahi ho…don't rub them."

Maan took water bottle from his pocket and wet his handkerchief. He held her face gently in one hand as he rubbed her eyes with wet cloth. Then he leaned closer and blew some air in her eyes.

Geet stilled as he she had long forgotten the pain and irritation. She was all lost in his concerned touches and worried face. She felt as if she was flying when she felt his warm breath on her face along with his masculine smell which hit her nostrils. She had never felt so close to him before and she almost felt weak in her knees with his closeness.

Maan straightened when her eyes stopped watering.

"Ab thik hai"

[Is it ok now?]

Geet nodded her head absent mindedly half listening to what he was saying. Maan noticed her flushed face and a little labored breathing. He asked her again – "bahut dard ho raha hai".

[Is it paining a lot?]

She again nodded when she saw him putting his hands across his chest and glare at her. She shook her head instantaneously getting back to her senses. Maan just turned to walked towards Daadima but not before muttering "Pagli" which made Geet flush even more.

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Chapter 24

Everyone had an invigorating game of volleyball next with Daadima as referee. Maan-Meera-Vicky won on the last point mainly because Geet could not keep her eyes off her husband's sweaty flexing muscles and finally gave into her temptation.

They all settled on the sheets and got the lunch out. Geet had no idea of the menu and her eyes twinkled with excitement – "Oh Daadima!!! I absolutely love aloo-puri and even better as picnic food. Wow….it smells delicious"

There was another box and Geet was pleasantly surprised to see pasta. "This looks so yummy"

Daadima smiled – "Beta yeh pasta bahut special hai lekin iski specialty hum aapke taste karne ke baad batenge."

[Beta, this pasta is very special but I will tell you it's specialty only after you have tasted it.]

They poured the food in aluminum containers and placed it over barbecue to warm it. Meanwhile, fruits were cut and Geet sorted out the drinks making virgin Mohito and Margaritas.

Everyone relaxed and started having food which was indeed delicious.

"Daadima, you were right. This pasta is special. Wow, I love pesto sauce. You know it is one of the healthiest sauce but not many people know about it. And I think you have used roasted red peppers to give it smokiness and sweetness." Geet almost said with her mouth full.

Daadima – "Bhai ab yeh toh tumhein Maan se puchna padega. Kyonki aaj bahut dinon ke baad pasta Maan ne banaya hai."

[This you will have to ask Maan because after a long time, today Maan has cooked this pasta.]

Geet's stopped eating as her eyes widened. She gulped down the remaining bite – "Aap…aap cooking bhi karte hain."

Everyone laughed heartily at Geet's amazed face. Maan smiled slightly.

"Wow!!!…bahut bahut tasty hai."

"I am glad you liked it."

After lunch, Daadima decided to rest a little and Meera stayed back with her in the tent. Dev, Vicky, Maan and Geet went for a walk. Dev pointed to a temple situated in the midst of forest. Maan passed so Dev and Vicky went to the temple giving a little private time to Maan and Geet.

They walked a little through the winding forest paths admiring the flowers and trees. Path was lined by dense leaves giving shade and cool breeze. Sweet smell from Amaltas flowers filled the pathway. Geet stood at a certain spot where lots of Amaltas trees almost lend a yellow color sky and twirled. On an impulse Maan shook one of the trees making ripe soft flowers fall on Geet.

Geet stopped and Man just gazed at her white milky skin caressed with bright yellow flowers. He came closer and slowly grazed the petals away from her forehead and cheek. For a moment, time stood still for both of them as they gazed into each others eyes.

Geet was the first one to lower her lashes as a blush spread on her cheeks. She stuttered breaking the silence – "Thanks"

Maan smiled – "You don't need to…"

Geet cut him and spoke very softly –"Maybe not for just the things or taste of food but thanks a lot for your concern, care, time and thoughtfulness. You cooked today for me. You set out my bath. These flowers…these moments….you don't know how precious every single second has been today for me. You made it very very special…all of it."

And then, shyly she leaned and placed a quick peck on his cheek and spoke huskily – "Thanks Maan for making it one of the best Birthdays for me."

Maan stood shocked at her gesture, He knew it was just a platonic token of appreciation but could not help the shiver of pleasure which ran through his spine as those soft petals touched his light stubble.

Before he could react, she shyly ran towards approaching Dev and Vicky and started collecting fallen flowers to take home.

(This part reminded me so much of my childhood. Road from my school to home was lined by Amaltas trees and in summers, I would pick up fresh flowers everyday to take home and put them in vase. They have a beautiful bright yellow color and sweet smell and can lend sunshine to even darkest of corners.)

Maan didn't know why her noticing everything, praising it meant so much. And that kiss….he had a small goofy smile on his face for rest of the day.

It was evening when they started wrapping up everything after loads of teasing, games and fun. Maan drove everyone to Park Balluchi situated inside the Deer Park. On their way they sighted Deer and Peacocks as they reached the restaurant nestled inside the forest. Restaurant had all the walls made of glass to give a panorama view. In the night, lights twinkled on nearby trees giving an almost ethereal feel.

Dev – "You know Geet, we are coming here after a long time. Till few years back, we all used to go for picnics quite regularly and even as a kid. And Daadima initially and later Maan bhai always got us here for dinner. We just love this place and we should do this more often."

Geet nodded and wondered how their life had changed so drastically in last few years.

After finishing a great meal, Geet waited for check to come. But she was surprised to see the waiter coming out with a fresh strawberry cake.

Goosebumps came over her skin as Maan whispered – "How can a birthday be complete without cutting the cake."

Everybody sang as Geet cut the cake and then fed her. Daadima took out a box and gave it to Geet. "Yeh hum sab ki taraf se hai beta. Sada khush raho."

[This is from all of us beta. Always stay happy]

Geet smiled and opened the box and gasped at an antique jewelry set.

She caressed the necklace – "It is beautiful Daadima."

Daadima smiled. "Yeh Maan ki mom ka hai. Humne sambhal ke apni badi bahu ke liye rakha tha. Aaj aapko unki taraf se appki amanat hi de rahe hain."

[This belongs to Maan's mom. I had kept it carefully for our elder daughter-in-law. I am just giving her keepsake to you from her side today.]

Geet smiled through the tears as she understood the meaning and importance of this set. She looked at Maan and smiled – "Yeh meri khush kismati hai Daadima. Mein humesha iska khayal rakhungi."

[This is my good destiny Daadima. I will always take care of it.]

Vicky chirped in – "I also have something Tayiji." He took an envelope from Meera and gave her a hand made card. He had tried his best to draw Geet in the middle cutting a cake with candles. On top was caption "Happy Birthday to my lovely Tayiji". On the side he had drawn the entire family.

Geet kissed her tightly on both the cheeks – "This is a very beautiful card dear….thank you so much. I love it."

Maan said jokingly – "Mera gift udhar hai Geet. But you will get it soon."

[My gift is a pending. But you will get it soon.]

Dev teased – "Koi na bhai…apko aapka kiss phir bhi mil jayega."

[Don't worry bro… you will get you kiss even without it.]

Geet's face stained red as Maan glared at Dev who hi-fied with Meera as they shouted– "Chance Pe Dance"

Amidst laughter, all returned home after an extraordinary and a very exceptional day for the whole family and especially for Geet.

Precap – Same as last time - Oh teri bike!!!!! And malfunction with Maan's shirt

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wow bonus 2 parts superb i am happy maan changing so sweet loved the way he show his concern to geet