And so spoke Arnav Singh Raizada Edited

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rima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: jessicad
But your heart is wide,
It will still allow love inside

So could you hold the love for us both...
Till I make my way back into the man you love
from the man you may now loathe?

Yes, yes, yes, yes!!! She will! I'm so sure!
And brilliant poetry! Loved it!

thank you. i am sure she will too. may take time but she will

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thechaigirl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Rima just awesome yaar...I m checking thesaurus to find perfect adjectives for ur writing ..

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rima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: memyselfandrshi
Rima just awesome yaar...I m checking thesaurus to find perfect adjectives for ur writing ..

:) now u have humbled me. thanks

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Ipkkndaddict

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Amazing! Beautifully written👏

Wish I could write my feelings on paper like this

Edited by Ipkkndaddict - 13 years ago

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rima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Ipkkndaddict
Amazing! Beautifully written.
Wish I could write my feelings on paper

thanks. just go for it. pour it out. always feelings pour out

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shybabe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: rima

yep yep yep I did.

Su asked me why I wrote for ASR and not Khushi.

Because yesterday that one moment when he looked yearningly at the girl he loves made me feel for him.

In the imes to come he will be tough to understand for most, but i will hold on to that moment

😆 then u r blind...😆 i have seen more than one...even better once then yesterday...trust me..Rima..i know i have over 10000 pics of this guy in my warehouse🤣

And he has always been tough one to understand..he is tough shell to crack..and believe me..he will make it all worthwhile...not many would agree..but that me speaking and u know i don't speak that much😳 since i have retired

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rima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: shybabe

😆 then u r blind...😆 i have seen more than one...even better once then yesterday...trust me..Rima..i know i have over 10000 pics of this guy in my warehouse🤣

And he has always been tough one to understand..he is tough shell to crack..and believe me..he will make it all worthwhile...not many would agree..but that me speaking and u know i don't speak that much😳 since i have retired

oh no. i know those tons of scenes too. i am telling you about which scene made me write this piece.

i know a million moments too when i felt his love.

forget holi when it was out in the open.

i also remember the moments like these:

when during diwali she drops her purse and pulls her pallu from his car seat and he observes her and feels her pain

when she cries about shyam and he is worried and then he connects the dots immediately

when she puts the tikka and he is mesmerised

when she is missing for two days and he gazes at the stars

when she is hit by the goond and he is ready to kill them

the man loes and i know it. of late it doesn't show except once in a while. but the scene yesterday just touched my heart

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shidin0117

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

WOWWW, Amazing, loved the last lines, ASRs redemption in Khushis eyes and heart. Hope everything becomes alright by the shows 1st year anniversary, it will be a nice gift

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rima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: shidin0117
WOWWW, Amazing, loved the last lines, ASRs redemption in Khushis eyes and heart. Hope everything becomes alright by the shows 1st year anniversary, it will be a nice gift

thanks. keeping the fingers crossed for the redemption to happen by the first anniversary