Pyaar FF- DISCONTINUED-NOTE PG 21

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-Tinu-

@-Tinu-

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey guys my name is Tina. I'm in love with EHMMBH so decided to write my own story...

Here is part one it is short but if you guys want me to carry on then the updates will be longer. However, you will have to bear my writing as i am not at all good in writing story's.

Part 1

Virman and Virika are best friends. the vadhera boys are brothers and chaudrys are sisters.

all four of them sitting in a cafe

virat- so finally guys college khatam

manvi- haan yaar ab finally ab hum aish kar sakte hain!

viren- sahi kaha manvi, ab koi tension nahi kyun jeevs?

jeevika was lost in her own world looking worried

virat- yeh loh yaha tension nah leni ki baat chal rahi hain aur yeh madam ... jeevs!

manvi- diii!

viren - whats wrong with her yaar!

finally all three of them had enough so decided to call her name out together

JEEVIKA!!

jeevika startled out of her daydream and looked at them confused

jeevika- whats wrong with you guys yaar, main tum log ke paas hi bheti hoon chilaaneey ki kya zaroorat thi?

viren - oye madam humein chilaney ka koi shauk nahi hain!

virat- and whats wrong with us more like whats wrong with you humne tumhe kitni baar awaaz di!

jeevika -really

manvi- kahan kho gayee thi app?

jeevika - arre actually woh ...

she looked at manvi, virat and viren who were waiting for her to give an answer but decided this was not the right time or place so she decided to change the subject!

jeevika- nahi kuch nahi, an humain chalna chahye, everyone must be waiting at home.

SO PLEASE TELL ME IF I SHOULD CARRY ON OR NOT!

THANK YOU

Index-

Part 1- page 1
part 2- page 1
Part 3- page 3
Part 4- page 6
Part 5- page 7
Part 6- page 9
Part 7- page 11
Part 8- page 15

Edited by -Tinu- - 13 years ago

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nishi12345

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Posted: 13 years ago

continue soon

liked the p;ot

looking forward for the next part

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virika-deewani

@virika-deewani

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Posted: 13 years ago

yep! please continue soon! it doesnt matter about your writing what matters is that the plot is intresting! do continuee!😉

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-Tinu-

@-Tinu-

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Posted: 13 years ago

thank you to those who have sent pm's to say how much they want me to continue and thank you for the likes and comments you have made!

but i have decided that i will get really bored writing to same story's and with the same updates all the time so i have decided that the plot will be the same but the event in the story will be different and even may be the dialogues can change to!

so in that way i wont get bored and neither will the people who visit both the forums!

thank you once again.

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-Tinu-

@-Tinu-

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 2

jeevika- nahi kuch nahi,ab humai chalna chahye, everyone must be waiting at home.

Virat- Actually, tum dono jao , main aur bhai will stay for a bit more, we have some work.

Viren looked at virat confused but decided no to say anything.

Manvi- okay then , we will see you tomorrow bye.

jeevika's phone rings

Jeevika- manvi wait, it's beeji

jeevika- excuse me guys,

jeevika leaves from there

Viren is looking at jeevika talking on the phone which virat notices and smirks.

Jeevika comes back

jeevika- why did you guys not tell us your mom has invited us over for dinner?

virat- what? no seriously we didn't know unless she planned it at last minute.

jeevika- its okay, chill i was just kidding so see you guys in the evening lets go manvi.

virat- guys why don't you stay over tonight, we can catch up on things and we could go out tomorrow.

manvi- wow! virat great idea!

jeevika- sure! bye

jeevika and manvi leave

virat and viren were now alone.

After they had left virat looked at viren surprised as he had not said a word throughout the whole conversation.

virat- whats up bhai? everything okay?

Viren- huh? yeh Virat everythings fine anyways what work did we have here?

Virat- nothing bhai, i just thought to have a brotherly talk you know where you could tell me everything.

Viren looked at him confused

Viren- tell you what?

Viren took a sip of his coffee

virat- okay, im going to say it straight , bhai do you like jeevs?

viren chocked on his coffee and looked at him.

Viren- virat! what are you saying? how can i love jeevika?

virat raised his eyebrows and knelt back in his chair and looked at viren amused.

Virat- bhai, when did i say love? i just said like!

Viren looked at him shocked

Virat- come on bhai just say it!

Viren looked away out of the window and spoke.

Viren- fine i do love her! happy!

Virat stood up with joy.

Virat- my brother is in love!! hayyee... i knew it! trust me bhai you won't find someone better than her! i am so happy!

Viren- no! forget about me and tell me how much do you love manvi?

Virat was so happy for his brother that he didn't think before answering his question.

Virat -A lot! i love her more than anything bhai!

Viren looked at him with his eyes wide.

Edited by virenjeevika - 13 years ago

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-Tinu-

@-Tinu-

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey kanishka i tried to pm you but it says you have exceeded the amount of private messages you are allowed so i cant. but sorry i cant update again today need to revise so promise the next update will be tomorrow but yes if you do want to read more on virika i have written another story on them but its not on this forum its on myeduniya you can read it there . thank you

😃😉
😉😃😉

Edited by virenjeevika - 13 years ago

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Dii

@-princess-

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Posted: 13 years ago

Ahh loved it amazing beautiful sweet and simple! 😊 Can i ask you a favor plz make it longer next time! but other thn tht amazing keep posting😃

love:

-princess-

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ayeshapasta

@ayeshapasta

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Posted: 13 years ago

i wish that also happen in the show wouldnt be cool:D

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karpagam rajendran

@Kryanian08

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

it was awesome yaar!!!! 😊 do PM me please when you update next, waiting for the sleepover at the Vadheras!!!! 😊

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Kanishka

@LoveforRaya

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: virenjeevika
hey kanishka i tried to pm you but it says you have exceeded the amount of private messages you are allowed so i cant. but sorry i cant update again today need to revise so promise the next update will be tomorrow but yes if you do want to read more on virika i have written another story on them but its not on this forum its on myeduniya you can read it there . thank you

😃😉
😉😃😉

heya! can u plz give me d link!!😊

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