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Aishwarya

@Naina...

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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 1 - I LOVE U AND ONLY U...

YAH...MY FIRST PART OF THE OS...HOPE U ALL LIKE IT!!!!

CHARACTER SKETCH:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/suvreen-guggal-topper-of-the-year/2967349/os-the-love-undefined

the part 1

suvreen is in the kitchen (same as given in character sketch)...yuvraj gripped her waist frm back and held it tightly!!!!😳

yuvi: gud morning jaan..(kissing on her neck)

suvreen: yah,jaan gud morning...neend puri hui??

yuvi: kaha???puri raat tum mere sapne main aa rahi thi...

suvreen: aacha par main toh tumhare saath hi thi...phir kya hua??

yuvi: ha...par still na...i love uuu soo muchhh!!!

suvreen: love u tooo...chalo nahne jao..

yuvi: nahi..mujhe nahi jana hai

suvreen: kyun??? yuvraj agar tum nanhne nahi jaogey to hum institute kaisey jaengey...aur institute nahi jayengey toh play ke reharsal's kaun dekhega???

yuvraj: aacha...main ek sharat par nahne jaunga...😊

suvreen: kaunse???

yuvraj: tum bhi mere saath chalogi!!!!😳

suvreen: yuvraj...pagal ho gayye ho kya😆...subah-subah kya baat kar rahey ho...

yuvraj: kyun...ab toh main tumhara pati hoo...aur pati parmeshwar jo bhi kehta hai woh karna padega...

suvreen: aacha...tohhh phiiirr (she run's away)

yuvi start's following her and goes back of her and they get into their bedroom...and they landed on thier bed!!!

suvreen: yuvraj pls na...mujhe jana hai...bohot kaam hai

yuvraj: ssshhh (keep's his hand on her lips)...jao lekin mujhe kuch chahiye

suvreen: ab kya chahiye???

yuvraj: ek choti si puppy

suvreen: oh!!! woh toh assan hai na...

yuvraj: toh do...

suvreen: ha par uske liye toh phone no. chahiye na...!!!

yuvraj: kyun?? why phone no.???😲

suvreen: ab puppy chahiye toh pet shop ko phone karna padega na!!!!😆😆

yuvraj: tujhse toh baat karna hi bekaar hai....

suvreen: arrey par mainey kya kiya...tumne hi toh kaha na ki puppy chahiye isley phone no...

yuvraj: nahi meri ma...kuch nahi chahiye (angry tone)😡

suvreen start's crying😭😭

yuvi sees that

yuvraj: nahi...suvreen mere kehne ka matlab yeh nahi tha!!!...mere

suvreen: mere kya??? tum hamesha yahi kartey ho...cutty jao main tumse baat nahi kartiii...

yuvraj: aab isko manana padega!!!!😃

ab kaisey manayega yuvraj suvreen ko...????

precap:

yuvi: sorry jaan...plss

suvreen: nahi..bilkul nahi tum kuch bhi karoo par main nahi manne wali...

yuvi (in his mind) : lagta hai abhimanyu ki 101 wooing tareke aapnane hi padengey!!!😳

howz it???????comment guys...

Edited by naina1716 - 13 years ago

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osina

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow naina ...lov it so much n excited for precap

itz so romantic ...

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aishwarya

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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice one..pls pm me wen u update..

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Ritu

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome yaar...cont soon...& pm me next time!!!

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Aishwarya

@Naina...

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Posted: 13 years ago

in college

yuvraj: aisa kya karun ki woh mujhe maaf kar de...

just then thier student's aditi,aishwarya,shantanu and rohan comes

aishwarya: sir??

but no response...

aishwarya: sir??? actually we wanted to ask u something!!

yuvraj: yah what??

rohan: sir hum sooch rahe the..ki yeh hamre play ke first day reharsla's hai...so why don't we...mean's u and suvreen mam show us how to do

shantanu: yah sir it would be helpful!!!

suddenly something striked in yuvraj's mind...

yuvraj: yah...i'll do it (thanku baacho ...ab toh suvreen guggal singh mana hi padega) in mind with a smirk

otherside

suvreen: what????😲...tum log pagal ho gayye ho??main aur acting

rohan: pls maam...

aditti: yah mam...pls humne pehli kabhi acting nahi ki na

suvreen: toh as if mainey ki hai...

shantanu: mam par apne apne drama main kiya hoga na??

suvreen: oh yah...that day!!! how can i forget that day...when yuvraj confeesed his love for me😃

flashback

rea: hey guggal...ready for the play??

suvreen: ha...main har cheez ke liye hamesha ready hoti hoon...

annie is with yuvraj and asking him whether he could do it!!!

annie: u can pakka na...

yuraj: mera naam yuvraj hai...main cheetah hoo...cheetah (lukin at suvreen)

suvrren: dekhtey hai...kitni cheetagiri chalti hai iski play main

play

the scene is that the boy confesses hi love to the girl...but the girl reject's it

suvreen: main tumse pyaar nahi kati

yuvraj: tum aisa nahi kar sakti...main...main tumse

suvreen: yahi toh na...tum hamesha tumhe mujhse pyaar ki tha maine nahi...

yuvraj pull's her toward's him and they have an eyelock...

yuvraj: yahi baat meri aakhon main dekhe kaho!!!

suddenly brezze came...suvreen alway's used to feel attracted toward's her cheetah maine yuvraj...but before that she could think of it she remeberd her papa's dream's and yuvraj ke dream's chaknachur ho jattey😭😭

yuvraj: kaho na...kaho...

suvreen: nafrat...nafrat karti hoon tunse!!!

yuvraj: what???

abhimanyu: what..wait yeh dialouges toh script main hai hi nahi!!!...yeh kaha se aye??

rea: oh god this guggal...female

suvreen: ha...ha main yumse nafrat karti thi,karti hoon aur karti rahungi!!!

yuvraj: par..main

suvreen goes toward's yuvraj cathes his collare and say

suvreen: what...what u want to say

yuvraj: ki main...main tumse...

suvreen: main what???

yuvraj: main tumse pyaar kart hoon...

omg atlast yuvraj told what suvreen wanted to hear...but wait a sec...did she accept it or she??😕

wait and watch...sorry wait and read😆

precap: yuvreen ki suhagrath.😳😳..but what happened in his suhagrath that suvreen alway's laughed remebering this???

HEY GUYS I KNOW THIS PART WAS NOT THAT GUD...BUT TOMO I'LL UPDATE YUVREEN PART...HOPE U DONT THROW CHAPPAL'S ON ME😆

DO COMMENT AND IF WANT PMZ...THEN BUDDY ME!!

Edited by naina1716 - 13 years ago

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey this part is awesome:):)
Yuvraj proposed suvreen:):)
Precap s interesting:):)
Waiting eagerly for d next part;);)

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Menika

@BrunoMars

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Posted: 13 years ago

It is fantastic!

Can't wait for the suhag raat!😳

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Ritu

@.Comics_Music.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome part once again!!!
Can't wait for next!!!

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Aishwarya

@Naina...

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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 3

** flashback **

Suvreen was totally shocked after hearing what yuvraj said…she pushed him back abhimanyu understood what actually happened and he gave a smile….suvreen rushed from there

Rea: hey what happened to this guggal

Abhimanyu: yah…something has happened guess love is in the air

Rea: what??? Love..but baby valentines day is gonna come na…

Abhimanyu: ya yet to cum but I think the magic of it has started

Suvreen ran to the fire escape and back of her yuvraj

Yuvraj: oye topper wait…topper suvren

She ran in and yuvraj also ran in and locked the door

Suvreen: what are u doing?? Open the…

Yuvraj goes near her and she pin's to the wall…yuvraj goes close to her and she start's breathing heavily

Yuvraj: topper….I wanted to

Suvreen: listen..I hve work I have to go

Yuvraj: u will not go anywhere

Suvreen: but…

Yuvraj goes more close to her and go near her ear….

Yuvraj: miss topper..u know wht I told u

Suvreen: what u told me??

Yuvraj: that only which u wanted to…

Suvreen: what I wanted to…there's nothing like this shut up and I want to leave

Yuvraj: I said na u'll not go anywhere

** flashback end **

Shantanu: mam…what are u thinking??

Aishwarya : mam…u'll do na

Suvreen: what..no no

Yuvraj: suvreen…naro naro

Suvreen: what naro wat happened???
Yuvraj: c'mon let's go

Suvrren and yuvraj rushes to the house….

Suvreen: ramu kaka what happened….where is naro??

Ramu kaka: actually naro in ur bedroom

Suvreen rushes to the bedroom…..where as yuvraj winks at ramu kaka

Suvreen: naroo…

Suvreen stop's as she see that her bedroom is decorted like how it was decorated for their suhagrath….yuvraj comes and he locks the room

Suvreen: what the hell is this yuvraj

Yuvraj: this is for u…topper

Suvreen: means??

Yuvraj goes near her place his arm's toward's her waist and said

Yuvraj: this is for….mean's ke u remember our suhagrath

Suvreen blushed but at the same moment she laughed to

Suvreen: oh god how can I not forget that day

**flashback**

Yuvraj enter's the room and it is dark….he is too scared

Yuvraj: topper…I'm suvreen

Suvreen: ji

Yuvraj: ji???

Actually he did not knew that this prank was set by all his frndz….abhimanyu was sitting as suvreen in bridal dress and rea,naro,annie and all the other's were out….whereas gyanesh was down of the bed giggling

Abhimanyu: ab aap mere pati parmeshvar hai….ab aaj se hum aapko ji hi bulangey

Yuvraj think's what has happened to suvreen…..

other side suvreen was in other room waiting for yuvraj…she was fuming with anger and was getting irritated as she had to wear all those heavy jewelley……

Suvreen: wait yuvraj singh…today I'll not allow to touch me also

other side

Annie: this is worst…yuvi will get angry ahh….let's stop it

Rea: yah even I think so…

Naro: yaar..nahi let it be!!! Remember rea at ur time also we did the same thing…it's a ritual kind of

Abhimanyu: ji…aap aaj…means what are ur planz???

Yuvraj: which plans??

Abhimanyu: today night plans….

Everyone start's laughing and yuvraj get's very much scred that what has happened to his suvi???

All come out and abhimanyu also showz his face yuvraj shout's

Gyanesh: oh shit!!! Abhi u did a fab job

Rea: yah abhi…awesome!!!….

Anie: sorry uv we had th do it,,..it was ritual u see

Yuvraj: ur ritual gaya bhad main….tell me where is suvi??

Naro: oh ho…topper se suvreen aur suvreen se suvi??

Yuvraj: naroo…

Naro: okay sorry!!!

Yuvraj goes frm there…..and goes in the bedroom see's that suvreen was fuming with anger
Suvreen: uv…mr yuvraj singh this is ur pet name na….now I put the ultra violant ray's on u!!!

But suddenly she felt someone's hand pulling her waist….

Thank u

So how was the update??? What do u think….what would have happened??? Did suvreen allow yuvraj to touch her yah something else happened????😊