VirManSS:Dil,Dosti aur 'pyar'|Prt 1:Page 2|22May

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I am thoroughly shocked at the 'over-friendly' environment I experience in this forum which I love it to the core!Thank you lovely people for accepting me as a new member into the VirMan clan.

After my attempt in writing an OS on VirMan,I have decided to attempt an SS on them called as 'Dil,Dosti Aur Pyar!'

Hope you people will continue to support me.Thank you and if you want to receive PMs,please add shruti_ms_pms to your buddy list because my friend Shruti will be sending out PMs.

If you are truly interested,you can try out my writing corner.

~Wierd Ruminations~(Sally's FF corner)

Dil,Dosti Aur Pyar..

Character Sketch

Virat Vadhera

Arrogant,rude,snobbish,egoistic..

The above are the few words which you can use to describe 28 year old Virat.He is someone who thinks that he is always right!

Manvi Choudhary

Nia Sharma as Manvi

The only person who can control the lion, Virat is Manvi who is Virat's best friend!

Inder Choudhary

Anupam Bhattacharya

Inder is Manvi's father who does everything for her benefit. He is a retired Central Government worker.

Vanshika Choudhary

Manvi's mother and perfection in every sense!

Manvi stared at the henna in her hand which had changed into the deepest shade of red.She remebered Maya's words,"The redder your henna gets,the greater your spouse will love you!"
Manvi chuckled as she thought about the game of fate.When she had lost her heart to her best friend Vadhera,how could she marry Dr.Mannan?
She was so lost in thoughts that she forgot to hear the sound of the door clicking.
"Manvi..I.."someone began and Manvi knew the owner of this baritone voice without turning back.
"Just forget it,Virat.I am getting married and that's it!"she told him coldly.
She felt herself roughly turned back and face Virat's ever handsome face which looked beautiful in the moonlight shining through her stained glass window.
"Shut Up Manvi!Just do not punish yourself for what I did!I can read your eyes well Manvi!Don't marry him if you don't like him!"Virat said to her.
Manvi laughed mirthlessly and told him,"If you read my eyes,you would have never hurted me Virat.You are not what you think!You are not my 'dumbo Vadhera' anymore!
"You have become the 'Great Architect Virat Vadhera' who now has forgot the values of friendship!"
Manvi jerked his hands off her shoulder and ran into her room trying to control her cries.
"You are not my dumbo Vadhera anymore!"
"...forgot the values of friendship.."
As her bitter words kept playing back in his mind,Virat helped himself to his room with his heart breaking into minute pieces..
..To Be Continued..
Finally a happy wala SS😆 I am writing😆Hope you people will like it and support me😳
Love,
Sally



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved the prologue... Continue soon...!!
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Hey do continue soon ... lovely proluge . 😊
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Its jst osum...shally.luvd it yar...superb.do cntinue soon yar
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Ohhh i am likeing it!!! :)) Can't wait for your next update!!

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Ahhh loved it cant wait for the part! 😊
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ohk!!! if u don't pm me, i will kill u ofcs wid my constant bantering as i want u alive for this ss... hahahaha
no really its superb... love yaa!!
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