'DOSTI KI MEETHAS' part 3 updated Page 4

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MAAN SINGH KHURANA:

Maan singh khurana is the son of yash & priya khurana.He is very ambitious about his life,career,studies.He lives in london with his daadi.He has attitude with killing looks.His friends call him MK.People know him as a good speaker,achiever.He has everything in his life name,fame,money,power but still he feels something is missing in his life.Every person wants to be like MAAN SINGH KHURANA.He is very passionate for his work.He wants everything in perfection.He is very caring towards his family...

GEET HANDA:

Geet handa is the elder daughter of mohinder n ranu handa.She lives in joint family.She has 1 younger brother.She lover her brother alot.She is bubbly,very naughty,very talkative.She is full of life.Her friends call her "THE CHATTER BOX".Always good in studies.She is the jaan of the whole family.She loves to play pranks with family n friends...

SAMRAT SHERGIL:

He is not the only son of shergil family.He has step brother n sister.He lives alone in his flat.When he was a kid he lost his mother.He is independent,hardworking,sponteanous,always ready to take challenges.He loves to play basket ball.He is the captian of basket ball team.He has no interest in studies.He very well knew how to win his fans heart(GIRLS).He loves to play guitar.He is the charm of his college.He is crazy for sports car n bikes.He takes compitition in bike races.He is the champion of basket ball n bike racing...

GUNJAN BHUSHAN:

Bhushan family has twins babies Puja n Gunjan.She is the younger daughter of bhushan family.She is very sweet,shy,down to earth.always ready to help.She loves to ready books.Gunjan is very intelligent always top in her class.Her friends call her chashmi.She helps her papa in his busniess...

PRECAP: NAHI BATAOGI AGAR BATAYA TO SUSPENSE KAISE RAHEGA...WAIT FOR MY NEXT UPDATE INSHALLAH VERY SOON I WILL UPDATE THE NEXT PART.

THIS IS A STORY OF FRIENSHIP.HOW THESE 4 BECAME BEST BUDDIES WITH DIFFERENT PROFESSIONS.THIS STORY TELLS YOU THEIR FRIENDSHIP,THEIR LOVE,THEIR IMPORTANCE IN EACH OTHERS LIVES...

IF YOU GUYZ LIKE OR DISLIKE THIS STORY PLZ TELL ME...THIS IS MY FIRST ATTEMPT..M WAITING FOR YOUR RESPONSE...SORRY IN ADV FOR THE MISTAKES...

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Part 1

Come on pick up the phone...pick up the dam phone..


Agar aaj tum late hui na m gonna kill you.Dam it why cant she picking the phone...

m sure she is sleeping peacefully...


Ise kaha bhi tha aaj subha jaldi uthna magar nhi MADAM kaise uth sakhti hain subha ka unka late uthne ka record khrb hojaeyga na...Y cant she listen to us.kitni bar kaha hain raat ko fizool sites pe chatting kr k apna time aur energy waste na kro magar nhi GEET HANDA yh kaise krsakhti hain...Aaj hi uncle aur aunty ko bol k iski yh harkate band karvata ho...Everyone is cheering for me aur may yaha room may bethe k MADAM ko half an hour se call kar raha ho...GREAT

ALL THE BEST FOR YOUR MATCH.

He turned to see his best buddy MK standing infront of him.He came to wish him for his match.They about to strt their conversation a very sweet voice came from his back ALL THE BEST SAMRAT...


(Gunjan).Samrat hug both of them n said thnx alot guyz for coming and wishing me :-)


Maan:where is our "The chatter box"?


Samrat:Plz dont ask me use half an hour se call kar raha ho magar she didnt pick my phone only 10 mins left for my match and she is still sleeping :-( Abhi dekhna coach is going to shout on me...PLZ GOD SAVE ME...Aur kitna sunvaoge is mahrani k chakkar may...


Gunjan:may bhi use call krti ho shayad pick krle meri call..


Samrat:Plz chashmish use uthao warna mujhy b maregi.


Maan:Relax yar wo aajaeygi m sure everything will be fine.


Samrat:Fine?bhul gaey pechle match may jab safai horhi thi college ki tab aai thi MADAM aur aate hi mujhy call kar k kaha tha yar tum log bhi pagal ho mujhy itni jaldi q bulaya dekho abhi yaha safai horhi hain may kia kro ab koi b nhi hain yaha pe tera match dekhne ko tou ne bola tha sharp 9 strt hoga abhi dekh 10 baj rahe hain koi b nhi hain yaha pe...kahi tera match cancel to nhi hogaya tou b na bata nhi sakhta tha mujhy meri sham ki neend khrb krni pardhi IDIOT..

Tum q chup ho?bolo na kuch...oh i know tum bht upset hona match cancel hogaya tmhara.tmne bht preparations ki thi na is match k liyh i know magar wo kehte haina jo hota hain ache k liyh hota hain Right?


Samrat:Right...ab may kuch bolo


Geet:rukha kis ne hain


Samrat:Geet mera match subha 9 bajy tha abhi raat k 10 baj rahe hain match khtm hogaya hai ab ja ghar aur soja apni neend puri kr...(he just abt to say m tired yar kal baat karte hain gn n sd byee) geet interrupt him.

Geet:yh sari tm sb ki galti hain mujhy bataya hi nhi k match subha hain raat ko nhi pata hain mama n papa ji ne kitna danta mujhy itna late jo aai ho tera match dekhne k liyh.Waise match the result kia tha? i know you win the match as always haina?


Samrat:yup

Geet:so where is my treat?


Samrat:TREAT...may yaha soraha ho aur ise treat chahiyh kudh to abhi so k aai hain fresh hai may to subha se jaga hua ho GOD PLZZZ BACHAO MUJHY IS CHATTER BOX SE (self talking)


Geet:oey hello hero kaha kho gaey ho?

Samrat:yahi ho kaha jaoga...(Tiring face)

Geet:chaddo treat


Samrat:REALLYYY THNXXX ALOTTT (Happy face)


Geet:haan ab may MK aur chashmish ko call krogi tm log ready hoge then we will go for dinner hmmm nhi late hojaeyga phir subha mujhy hi sunaoge tm sb late aane pe yh nhi yaad hoga mere sath kia kiya tm sb ne (Angry face)


Samrat:kaise batate MAHARAHI aap ne to apna mob offline krdia tha kaise batate aap ko...(samrat is happy treat chapter is closed magar uski khushi kuch hi der ki thi)


Geet:Aaj chord rahi ho magar kal nhi chordogi tmhe kal double treat deyni hogi hume


Samrat:DOUBLE...wo q?


Geet:tmne jo meri neend khrb ki,mujhy dant pilwai uska kiya haan bolo bolo thts y double treat.


Samrat know fight krne se koi faida nhi hain haan bolo do kam se kam sone to ko milega agar na kaha to puri raat kudh b nhi soeygi aur mujhy b sone nhi deygi yh...(self talk)


Samrat:ok done bye m really tired let me sleep plzzz


Geet:haan mayne kb rukha hai kudh hi bole jarahe ho kb se gn n sd byee c u tomorrow in college.

They both came back from their thoughts n strts laughing on their chatter box.while when they were in their thoughts gunjan is calling to geet.


Gunjan:geet kaha ho tm?kb tak arahi ho?


Geet:arahi ho yar traffic may phasi hui ho.


Gunjan:tmhe subha uthaya tha na mayne aur MK ne phir bhi tm late hogai ho ufff geet u r impossible


Geet:dear impossible ko possible krna GEET HANDA ko aata hain wait n watch ab may kia krti ho...


Gunjan:geet plzzz koi nai mushibat mat khadri krdina wo waise hi bht gusse may hain jaldi aa match strt hone wala hai we r waiting for u.


Geet:phone rakhegi to car drive krogi na tujhy nhi pata driving krte time phone pe baat krna allow nhi its very dangerous.


Gunjan:UFFF

Gunjan came back in room n said she is not picking the phone :-(


Samrat:m gonna kill her for sure abhi last time try krta ho


Samrat:come on pick up the phone


Geet pick the phone before samrat says something geet strt talking in her sleeping voice


Geet:koun hain jo adhi raat ko mujhy tang kr rha hai bolo bhi ab boleyge nhi ajeeb log hai aaj kal k adhi raat ko meri surili awaaz sune k liyh call ki hain tmne? bolte ho ya do ek kantaap...


Samrat:yh bilkul pagal hai kisi ko bolne ka mauqa hi nhi deyti hai(ufff kia hoga iska)mayne kia kiya hain jo yh mujhy kantaap derahi hai subha subha koi bachao mujhy is se (self talking)


Maan n Gunjan watches his expressions they know geet is going to do something magar kia?both thinking for few mins then said use samajhna bht mushkil hain pata nhi kb kia krede yh pagal.


Geet continue her talks...


Geet:abhi b nhi bologe meri awwaz itni achi lagi tmhe? i know ab tm mera naam pochoge magar may bata do may koi aisi waisi lardki nhi ho bht sanskari ho..


Samrat:yeah yh tere hi sanskar hain jo tou unknown person se itni der tak chat kr rhi ho..(thinking)


Geet:Oh hello kaha kho gae meri awaaz sun k?kahi so to nhi gaey meri surili awaz sun k?tm kuch bolte q nhi?goonge ho?tm b na agar goonge hoto mobile buy q kia khama kha apne paise waste kiyh bolo oh sorry may bhul gai tm goonge ho..acha m going to sleep now kal sam ka match hai basket ball ka agar may late hogai to wo mujhy kacha kha jaeyga aur mujhy abhi nhi marna hain...aur haan next time yaha call mat krna aur agar ki to tmhari kher nhi samjhe tm...tm mujhy jante nhi ho may GEET HO GEET HANDA THE GREAT GEET HANDA...DAUGHTER OF HANDA...waise tm shareef lagte ho tmne abhi tak mera naam nhi pocha mere sath filrt nhi kia u r a nice guy anyway byee m talking its was nice talking to u n really sorry for u tm goonge hona...gn sd n she cut the call..

When samrat finish tha call MK n Gunjan ask kia hua?wo arahi haina?


Samrat:kia bolo us ne apni speech di aur call krdi then he tells abt the call to both of them

just then coach strts calling the team members to play the match..They both wish him n abt to leave geet came running sorry late hogai may.she hug him n wish him ALL THE BEST SAM...AAJ KITNI LARDKIYO KO MARNE KA PLAN HAIN?


Samrat:ab arahi ho?

Geet:q kia hua?jaldi aagai kia?

They all said UFFF

Geet:kia hua mayne kuch galat kaha kia?


Samrat:nhi sahi kaha m going byee c u after the match

Geet:ek min ruk yar tou hamesha itni jaldi may q rehta hai chill yar..she moves towards her bag n take a box from the bag


Samrat:mujhy bhook nhi hai tou kha le

Geet:may nhi kha rhi ho u r going to hve this.she open the box it has yogurt with sugar.she fill the spoon n abt to feed him


Samrat:yh kia hain?

Geet:yh yogurt hain with sugar hai kehte hain jb b koi acha kaam krne jarhe ho ise kha k jana shub hota hain yh match tere liyh bht important hai na isliyh yh may tere liyh laii ho she fed him

Samrat:tou b na geet..waise yh baatein kb se tm sochne lagi?


Geet:hamesha se in dono topers ko b nhi yaad tha



Samrat hug all of them n left for the match...Match was rocking.samrat played very well.They win the match.After the ending ceremony geet,MK,gunjan came to congrs him he hug them n said thnx alot for becoming my strength before it going to be a emotional moment geet srts shouts


THREE CHEERS FOR SAMRAT...HIP HIP HURRAYYY...HIP HIP HURRAYYY...HIP HIP HURRAYYY



After few mins samrat came from the changing room geet tells him MK is left for submitting his assignment..chashmish is in library n m here chal kuch khate hain bht bhook lagi hain..samrat phone rings..

Maan:hi sam its me MK my work is done n m waiting for u guyz in canteen come soon we will celebrate ur victory


Samrat:sure

Maan:yar chashmish is in library use b sath ley aana

Samrat:yup n cuts the call

Samrat tells the plan to geet n they moves towards the library

Geet:yar yh MK akele kia kar raha hoga?

Samrat:wohi jo krta hain hamesha

Geet:NO WAY..m not going to listen his poetry

Samrat:we hve to we dont have any other choice yar he is our best buddy aur iski poetry bht achi hoti hain

Geet:hmmm...


PRECAP:MAAN SINGH KHURANA N POETRY...

Edited by SAHARLUVGC - 13 years ago

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