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Posted: 13 years ago
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umaaahhh 4 such a funny dhamal prt yr.. bohtt maza aya.. kya fight hai yr.. vaag mk n poetry.. vah vah..
oyeee moti geet. kya baat hai. all dialogues r umaaahhh...

oyeee dont forget to pm me in nxt prt.. varnaaa
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i hope ye khushi maan ki khushi na ho i mean his GF sirf naam ki ho tu achha he wese the fight was great bohot maza aya and thanks for pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
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heey just came across ur ff...
have read the both parts...
its really awesome...
add me in & continue soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 2
nice part...
so Samrat is confused with his feelings for Gunjan...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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THNX ALOT EVERYONE FOR LIKING MY FF..IF YOU HAVE ANY DEMANDS N COMPLAINS PLZ LET ME KNOW I WILL WORK ON IT...AND SORRY FOR LATE UPDATE M BUSY IN MY STDIES..TRY TO UPDATE SOON...THNX ALOT FOR UR LOVE U SUPPORT...
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that was amazing update
loved it loads
do ..con ..soon
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superb update
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cont.soon
thankx for pm


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PART 3

Maan phone rings he saw his phone n said

Maan:margaya

Sam:kia hua yar?aisa koun hain jis ne tujhy mardala

Maan:khushi

Sam:dude ab to tou sach may margaya tou use call krna bhol gaya na

Maan:yeah

Geet:chill yar ek phone hi nhi kia na whts the big deal kisi ka murder to nhi kia na
Gunjan:geet wo pehle hi pareshan hain aur tm apni stupid baato se use aur pareshan kr rhi ho thts not fair

Geet:chamchi boli


Gunjan:mayne tmhe kitni bar bola hai may chamchi nhi ho

Geet:ok chamcha thek hain?

Gunjan:ufff geet u r the limit

Sam:yar jaldi call pick krle agar nhi kia to jo chance hai tere bachne ka wo b chala jaeyga

Maan:yup u r right

Sam:see m always right

Geet:haan tm sb hamesha right hote ho may hi hamesha wrong hoti ho

Gunjan:plz stop it guyz...MK tm us se baat kro aur tm dono chup betho use aur pareshan na kro

Geet to sam:chamche ki chamchi boli

Gunjan:geet m not chamchi aur MK b chamcha nhi hain

Maan pick the call

Maan:oey meri janeman meri janebahara tere bin mera nhi hai guzara

Khushi:no response

Maan: I missed u

sooo much sweet heart

Khushi:no response


Maan:plzzz sweet heart kuch to bolo naraz hona..m sorry may tmhe call krna bhol gaya m really sorry next time aisa nhi hoga i promise

khushi:no response

Maan:oh i forget to tell you mayne tmhare liyh kuch likha hain sunata ho

Khushi:(self talking) poetry likha yaad raha call krna nhi

Maan:hello r u there?

khushi:(self talking) inhe yh b nhi pata chalraha hai mayne call cut nhi ki hain

Maan: SUBAH KI PEHLI KIRAN HO TUM

MERE CHAMAN KA PEHLA PHOOL HO TUM

YUHI KHILTI REHNA HAMESHA MERE CHAMAN MEIN

MERI ZINDAGI KA ROSHAN KARNA APNI MUSKURAT SE TUM...

Maan:are yar mayne tmhare liyh itna acha likha hain kuch to bolo kam se kam wah wah hi boldo

Geet n Sam:wah wah once more

Maan gave angry look to both of them...they both start laughing n planning to tease him more

Maan:sorry meri pyaari khushi plzzz man jao na plzzz

Khushi:smiles

Maan:hassi to phassi muaahhh my sweet heart.sorry aaj sam ka match tha na isliyh may bhool gaya

Khushi:its ok...man lo aapko apne frnds k aage koi bhi nhi dekhta hain

Maan:aisa nhi hain sweet heart

Geet n Sam:khushi bilkul aisa hi hain jaisa tm bol rhi ho tm iski baato pe trust mat krna

Maan:tm dono chup betho

Geet n Sam:bilkul b nhi hume bhi baat krni hai tm apni baatein kro hum apni krege

Gunjan:plz tm dono use mat tang kro wo khushi ko mana raha hain use manane do plzzz

Geet:chup kr chamchi hum gussa ya naraz hote hain hume to MK aise nhi manata hai (making baby face)

Khushi:geet ko bolo wo aapki sweet heart nhi hain.aap usko aise nhi mana sakhte..sirf may aapki sweet heart ho aap sirf mujhy aise mana sakhte ho...haina?

Maan:yup sirf tmhi meri sweet heart ho aur koi nhi...tm kia kr rhi thi?

Khushi:kuch nhi aapka wait kr rhi thi

Maan:sorry may shayad late aao

Khushi:its ok aap apna kaam kro...aap ne lunch kia?

Maan:nhi tmne kia?

Khushi:ji krliya aap bht careless hote jarahe ho plzzz apni health ka khayal rakha kro ap jao aur

lunch kro

Maan:ok jo hukum meri sweet heart byee

Khushi:ek min

Maan:kia hua?sb thek haina?

Khushi:ji sb thek hain aap plz apna phone ka speaker on kro mujhy sb se baat krni hain agar nhi

ki to naraz hojaeyge

Maan:aisa nhi hain sweet heart

Khushi:mujhy sam ko congrs bolna for his match warna wo mujhse fight krega

Maan:ok sweet heart may on krta ho speaker
Maan open the speaker n kept the mobile in the middle of the table n said guyz speaker is on khushi wants to talk to you...

Geet n Sam:hi khushi

Khushi:hi how r u both?congrs sam for ur match meri treat kaha hain?
Sam:m fine khushi treat jb tm bolo yar

Khushi:ok we will plan something

Sam:sure

Khushi:aaj gunjan nhi aai?

Gunjan:hi khushi how r u?hum tmhe bht miss kr rhe hain tm humare collage kb arahi ho?

Khushi:pata nhi may to bht kehti ho yh mujhy nhi late hai

Sam:arey tou is chakkar may ghar pe hi bethi rahegi.tujhy jis din aana ho mujhy call krdena i

will pick n drop you

Geet:tm driver k sath aajao na abhi yaha we will have a blast

Maan gives angry look to both of them


Khushi:thnx alot magar jb yh leyke aaeyge may tb hi aaogi collage aur ap in dono ko guse se gorna band kro

Geet:haila MK tere mob may webcam hai?its rocking yar kounsa model hain?

Maan:chup kr geet

Geet:hamesha mujhy hi danta hain yh DD

Maan:tou ne mujhy phir DD kaha

Geet:haan bologi DD DD DD DD...

Khushi:tmhe dant pitni b chahiyh

Geet:wo q?

Khushi:tmne mujhy shopping pe leyke jana tha tm bhol gai na?

Geet:may kaise aati?

Khushi:q koi problem hogai thi kia?

Geet:haan na mayne DD se paise mange the shopping k liyh us ne mujhy nhi diyh

Maan:geet jhot na bol..sweet heart aisa kuch nhi hain yh chatter box jhot bol rhi hain

Geet:nhi may sach bol rhi ho is ne yh hi kaha tha tm shopping pe jane ki zarorat nhi hain assignment complete kro

Khushi:aisa ho hi nhi sakhta

Geet:wo q?

Khushi:MAAN SINGH KHURANA apni sweet heart k liyh kabhi kuch b mana nhi krte hain

Gunjan:khushi tmne bilkul thek kaha

Khushi:acha aap log lunch kro may baad may baat krti ho bye take care have fun

Maan:ok sweet heart do your work if you need my help call me i will come

Khushi:is hi liyh call ki thi

Maan:pehle q nhi boli?tm b na wait kro m coming

Khushi:nhi aap aram se aao lunch krk may baad may krlogi kaam abhi time hain mere pass

Maan:r u sure?

Khushi:yup byee all

They all said byee to khushi...After chatting with khushi they order there lunch

Maan:chatter box tou ne lunch q order kia?

Geet:sb ne lunch order kia mayne apna order krliya to tujhy problem hogai hain

Maan:sb ne lunch order kia hain tou ne puri canteen order ki hain wahi jake kha leyti bechara waiter kitna chalega teri waja se

Geet:tou phir strt hogaya na mayne tujhy kitni bar bola hain mujhy moti aunty ji na bola kar
Maan:mayne kb kaha tmne kudh hi apne aap ko bola hain moti aunty ji

Sam:(control his laughing) haan geey tou ne kudh hi apne aapko moti aunty ji bolti hain aur hum pe ilzam lagati hain yh galat baat hain

Gunjan:(self talking) i think i should leave warna may b inki trha pagal hojaogi

Geet:teri to rukh abhi tujhy batati ho

Maan:yar jo b batna hai jaldi batao mere pass ziada time nhi hain u know m very busy

Sam:yeah me too

Geet stood frm the chair n came to wards MK n Sam

Sam:yar geet tou yaha aake q bolrahi hain wahi se boldeyna

Geet jump n sit on maan's lap with full force

Maan:AAAOOOCCCHHH

Gunjan:geet sharam naam ki b koi cheeze hain tm may uthro MK ki ghood se

Geet:nhi uthrogi yh mujhy moti aunty ji bolta hain ab ise pata chalega

Sam strts shounting n pleading for help

Sam:arey koi hain mere frnd ko bachao is se koi aao plzzz

Maan:geet uthro meri ghood se its hurting me yar

Geet:nhi bola na

Gunjan:geet uthro use pain horaha hai

Sam:BACHAOOO BACHAOOO BACHAOOO BACHAOOO...koi to bachao mere masoom,seedhe,shareef MK ko koi to aao

Gunjan:sam tm yh kia kr rhe ho?

Sam rolled his eyes n said

Sam:tou apna dialogue change krle

24 hrs yhi bolti rehti ho yh kia kr rhe ho yh kia kr rhe ho

Maan:geet tou uthar rhi hain ya may uthao tujhy?

Gunjan:mere sawal ka koi jawab do yh tm log kia kr rhe ho?

Sam:arey yar may help mang rha ho ta ke koi aake MK ko bachaey

Gunjan:koi q?tm bachao na

Sam:may?mujhy itni jaldi marna nhi hain

Maan:yar jaldi bacha warna may mar jaoga isk wazan se

Sam:yar tou ise janta to hain dekh agar mayne tujhy bachaya tou mujhy is se bacha b nhi sakhega

isliyh tou wait kr may kisi ko bulata ho

Maan:jb yh tere pe aise bethegi na tb tujhy pata chalega yh kia hain

Gunjan:geet bht hogaya natak uthro MK ki ghod se...

Geet:NAHIII BOLA NA...she hugs maan n said kuch b

krlo may nhi uthrogi

Maan gives naughty look n said R U SURE?

Geet looks towards sam n gunjan n said yeah

Sam:tou humari q dekh rhi hain MK ko dekh...

Gunjan:sam help kro ise utharte hain

Sam:NO WAYS...yar jb yh film ki heroine ki trha hero ki ghod may bethi hui hain tou q supporting cast ki trha use bacha rhi hain dekh to kitne naughty looks de raha hain geet magar yh pagal heroine ise dekh hi nhi rahi hain tou dekh abhi new entry hogi scene may

Geet look towards maan n said tm mujhy aise q dekh rahe ho?tmhare mind may kia chal rha

hain?

Maan:sam ek bar yh moti aunty ji uthar jae phir tujhy batata ho

Sam:kia bataeyga?geet is per se na utharna dekh tujhy is ne phir se moti aunty ji bola,

Maan:chup kr chatter box ka chamcha nhi chamchi pata nhi tera gender abhi b confirm nhi hua hain

Geet n Gunjan strts laughing

Sam:geet isk upper se mat utharna kuch b hoajey

Maan:dont forget m MAAN SINGH KHURANA I CAN DO EVERYTHING...

Sam:yeah i know chal ise uthar k dekha

Maan held her close n said ise utharna koun chahta hain may to kb se wait kr raha tha is aise meri ghod may bethe aaj wo tamana b puri hui ab sb gives naughty look

Geet,Sam,Gunjan shocked

Geet strt pushing him n said chord mujhy MK mujhy nhi pata tou mere bare may aisa sochta hain chord

Maan:nhi itni asani se nhi chordoga itne time baad tamana puri hui hain itni asani se nhi chordoga

Geet:chord MK tm dono meri help kro warna pata nhi yh kia karega mere sath

Sam strt helping geet but maan hug her tight while they were fighting waiter came with their food n said

Waiter:sir maam agar aap dono ka romance khtm hogaya hoto may lunch table pe rakh do

Maan:nhi abhi nhi hume thodra time aur lagega...Geet gives angry look to both of them

Waiter got scared n sam strts laughing loud n said mayne kaha tha na new entry hogi na hogai..HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Gunjan:bus kro bht hogaya mazak chali ab lunch krte hain...aap lunch table pe rakh de

Waiter keep the lunch in the table n left

Geet:chord mujhy warna tere liyh acha nhi hoga

Maan softly kiss her cheek

Geet stood frm his lap

Maan looks towards sam with winning smile n said kaha tha na m MAAN SINGH KHURANA I CAN DO EVERYTHING..dekh uthar gai meri ghod se (winks)

Sam:iska matlab wo sb natak tha?

Maan:yup

Sam:geet tujhy kia zarorat thi uthne ki ek kiss hi to kia tha bhai samajh k accept krleti

Geet:bhai hoga tera mera to...mera to best frnd hain

Sam:yeah

Maan:aaa

Sam n gunjan:kia hua?

Maan:its paining sooo much

Geet:kuch nhi hua hain ise natak kr rha hain bachpan se iski ghod may beth rhi ho aaj ji ziada

pain horha hai

they all forget about MK naughty looks except Maan he is planning some thing

Sam:yar tou bht din baad bethi hona isliyh aadat nhi rhi hogi ab daily betha

Geet:great idea sam yar mujhy bht pain horaha hain tou beth jana is pe

Sam:sure i love too

Maan:pehle ja ke gender check krva pata to chale tou hain kia cheese

Sam abt to say something Gunjan says tm log fight kro may lunch kr rhi ho..they all settle down

n strt eating their lunch

Maan:waise geet tou na gym join krle

Geet:tou phir shuru hogaya ek kiss pe mayne kuch nhi kaha ab nhi chordogi tujhy

Maan:nhi tere liyh nhi bolraha ho dosro k liyh

Sam:wo dosro k liyh q join kre?

Maan:take dosro ka faida ho stupid

Sam:mujhy teri baat samajh may nhi arahi hain

Gunjan:tmhe b geet ki trha kisi ki baat samajh may nhi aati hain

Maan:yar jb yh meri ghod se uthri to mujhy pata chala k sirf isk bethne se mere thyz ka weight

kam hogaya hain agar yh aisa kregi to soch logo ko excercise b nhi krni pardhegi aur unka

weight kam hoajeyga aur yh famous b hojaygi

Sam n Gunjan strts laughing

Geet:tou apne bakwas ideas apne pass rakh ( angry face)

Maan:waise MAAN SINGH KHURANA kisi ko advice deta nhi hain tou bht lucky hain tujhy

MAAN SINGH KHURANA ne advice di ise waste na krna

Geet:very funny aur tm dono hassna band kro

they both stop laughing

Sam:yar may chah kr b apni hassi nhi ruk pa raha ho n strts laughing loud

Geet:thek hain tou hass m going

Maan hod her hand n said beth aram se lunch kr

Geet:mujhy nhi krna

Maan:tou kr rhi hain ya may tujhy apne style may karvao

Geet:kr rhi ho apna style na dekha plzzz

Maan:sam stop laughing

Sam:ok ok

Gunjan:geet tmne mujhy library may kaha tha k tmnr koi important baat krni hain hum sb se kia

baat hain bolo..

Geet:oh han may to bhol hi gai thi thnx chashmish

Maan:kia hua sb thek haina?

Geet:haan sb thek hain tou khama kha pareshan hojata hai acha ab suno

Maan:bolegi to sunege na

Geet:tm logo ne next week ka kia plan banaya hain?

Maan,Sam,Gunjan:next week kia hain?

Geet:dekha mujhy pata tha tm log bhol jaoge may na hoto tm logo ka kia hoga

Maan:hum kia bhol gae maam?

Geet:wohi jo may bol rhi ho wo bhol gae ho

Geet:geet saaf saaf bolo kia baat hain?itna suspence na create kr

Geet:jab kuch ghanda hai hi nhi to saaf kaise kro?

Sam:tm dono safai baad may krna come to the point

Geet:next week new batch araha hain freshers u know

Maan:haan to yh sb ko pata hain

Geet:chup beth k meri puri baat sun...

Maan:ok bol

Geet:m thinking is bar ranging kuch unique,different type ki krte hai what say?

Maan wispers in sam's ear is se ziada is duniya may unique,different kuch aur hain kia they both strt laughing

Geet:tm dono q hass rahe ho?

Sam:kuch nhi yar

Maan:bht acha idea hain hum kuch unique,different ideas sochte hain ranging k liyh (winks to sam)

Geet:great

Gunjan:geet yh sb thek nhi hain tm janti ho yh sb allow nhi hain

Geet:aaj kal wohi hota aya hain jo allow na ho just chill m sure u will enjoy waise mere pass 1

aur idea hain

Maan n Sam:ek aur kia hain bol

Geet:m thinking q na aaj hum sam ki victory celebrate kre xyz disc chalte hain suna hain its

really cool

Sam:great idea yar bht din hogae disc nhi gae

Geet:thts y m saying...MK tm aaoge na?

Maan:ofcourse aisa kabhi hua hain disc k liyh mayne mana kia ho

Geet:i know chashmish tou nhi aaeygi we really miss u

Gunjan:me too

suddenly maan n sam remember tht those girls r also going to xyz disc...they both said

NOOO

geet n gunjan get scared

Geet:kia hua?nahi q bola?

Sam:yar aaj nhi disc kisi aur din chalege disc

Geet:q?abhi to haan bola ab nhi q?tm dono kia chupa rahe ho?bolo

Sam:kuch nhi yar tere se kia hum chupaeyge

Maan:haan kuch nhi hain yar tou apni jasoosi band kr

Geet:nhi band krogi bolo kia baat hain?

Maan:kuch nhi sam ko rest krna hain mujhy khushi k sath time spend krna hain agar nhi kia to phir se naraz hojaegi itni mushkil se mani hain ab nhi naraz krna use mayne bus ya kuch aur jana hain maam?

Geet:pehle boldeta na

Gunjan:tm khushi se bht pyaar krte hona?

Maan:mere dil may jo pyaar hain khushi k liyh usk samne bht b chota hain may kudh b nhi janta wo kb meri zindagi may aai aur mujhy apna banaliya

Gunjan:haan use is duniya may sirf tmhare liyh bheja han

Maan:haan mujhy aaj b wo din yaad hain jb mayne use pehlu bar dekha tha wo bht pyaari lagrhi thi us din us ne apni fav dress pehni thi pink colour ki abhi tk meri aankho may wo manzar hain jb mayne use pehli bar dekha tha uski wo masoom aankhein,usk naram naram gaal(cheeks) uska muskurate hue honth(lips) uski lehrati hui zulfe uski awaaz jise sunte hi mujhy laga k may ise sunta hi jao ushi waqt mere dil ne kaha mujhy ise apne se door nhi krna hain wo bikul ek pari hain...

Sam:tou ne ghar aate hi call kr k hume khushi k bare may bataya tha

Maan:haan jaha wo mujhy mili thi waha mayne nhi jana tha pata nhi may kaise chala gaya waha aur dekha ek lardki bht pareshan khardi hain use samajh nhi araha tha k wo road kaise cross kre

Geet:aur tou ne hero ki trha uski help ki use road cross krvai

Maan:haan us ne mujhy thnk u b bola tha wo thnk u hi kafi tha mere dil ko chune k liyh...usk sirf ek thnk u ne mujhy aur mere dil ko chuliya aur apna bana liya aur aaj hum dono sath hain

Gunjan:haan khushi hain hi aisi ek hi mulakat may apna banane wali m really happy for both of u..destiny ne use tujhse mila dia pata nhi yh desting kb kia krde kisi ko kuch nhi pata

Maan:haan

Geet:khushi hain hi itni pyaari dekhna hum sb k sath kaise ghul milgai hain jaise hum use pehle

se jante hain

Sam:haan all thnx to MK is ne hume itni pyaari khushi di

Geey:chalo lets go its late now

Maan:yup

when they leaving the canteen one girl entered in the canteen she hug maan tightily n said tm milgae m sooo happy may tmhe kb se dhoondh rhi rhi

Precap:yh lardki koun hain socho socho nhi bataogi may hehehehehehe

Edited by SAHARLUVGC - 13 years ago
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who is khushi and love friends fight



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Nyc update...😊
Luvd d way hw Maan made Geet get up from his lap...😆
Ab ye Khushi kaun h...???😕
N also wo ladki kaun h jisne maan ko hug kiya..?/?😲

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