OS: The ride back home

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

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*Swoons to infinite and back*

*Notes down 'Must own motorbike and look as sexy as Barun on said bike' in potential match list*

*Comes back to chapter*

*Swoons again*

Confused Arnav + Confusing Arnav + Smirking Arnav + On bike Arnav + Teasing Arnav + Sweet Arnav = Are you trying to kill me?!

It was just amazing, Meera, so simple yet so beautiful and complex in the emotions! I loved how Arnav is getting confused cos seriously he should be and how he acts like typical Arnav-ASR in such situations - listening to the head but unable to stop the heart from butting in a little bit!

Some lines I loved -

Either she was a great actress or a genuinely misunderstood innocent. He hated to think it was the first and shuddered to imagine if it were the second.

Only a mother would know the bittersweet feeling a wedded daughter left behind when she left her parental home for her marital home.

They were simple people and would have worshipped their son-in-law even if he had been the biggest jerk on the planet. And even though he was that to her, to her family, he had been a glimpse of the son they never had. Thoughtful, respectful, adjusting, helping - there wasn't an adjective Khushi usually associated with her Jijaji, that didn't fit Arnav.

He stood there in a crisp white shirt, tucked into a pair of dark blue stone washed denims. The pair of jeans sat dangerously low on his waist and emphasized just how fit and toned he was. The sleeves of the shirt had been lazily folded, revealing tanned arms ending in long, artistic fingers that were now lightly holding her dupatta. *DROOLS* Ahem.

As the bike gained speed, Khushi's discomfort grew. There was something heady about the combination of the man and the machine that purred beneath them. Was it the clean, woody masculine scent? Was it the heat emanating from his body? AHEM! AHEM! AHEM!

"Oh wait, are you going to ask me to get down and come on my own?"

Arnav hated that question. It reminded him just how many times he had done that to her.

He reached out behind his back, grabbed her hands forcefully and brought them around his waist. He turned his face slightly and immediately regretted it as he felt her soft cheek against his own.

"Hold me tight. I won't let you fall."

*Clasps hands and twirls and sighs and swoons*

It was perfect! <3

*SIGH*

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EverybodyLies

@EverybodyLies

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

Ok I have to agree with AngelTeen

I am swooning too!!

And the song! I love the song!

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akansha

@ritzappy

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

really nice ur english is very good

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ArshiRaiguptha

@ArshiRaiguptha

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

awsome work meera!! lovd it!!

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HaRul-lover

@HaRul-lover

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

never a ride on a bike has been that cute LOL loved it

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tata_tata

@tata_tata

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

aaa...

actually i dont want to write.. i want to copy paste AT's comment here.. majorly amazing thought of Arnav on a bike in a crisp white shirt and blue jeans.. dark blue jeans.. thats my fav combo.. major level swooonnn

acha u know.. for a min there i thought that i have missed a day and this is how the show has shown there return back home.. because thats totalllyyy possibleee... every single line is possible.. including the poor stutering happyji...

ok.. and u knw what the best part about today's OS was.. ok no.. i am kidding.. the best part was the story.. but the most amazing part was that u chose to put up the song which has been haunting mine and my sister's life for the past few days..i am not kidding.. we both (1000km away) have it on loop 24x7.. like i have written a million times before.. the similarity between things u write and the things my sis says is uncanny... and like i told u, such co-incidences give me the goosebumps.. :):)

but in a nutshell.. thank u for not giving us a chance to miss u and writing this awesome A&K description.. LOVE it!! :)

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anuramesh26

@anuramesh26

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

oh UR BCK WITHA BANG! LOVED IT! HA HA HA even though u had some other imp work to do, u were forced to write this. hope u get more important work to do (dont curse me) 😆 jus kidding.

so beautiful. the thing that's missing in the actual episode - kushi's acknowledgement of how "handsome" her husband is and she is actually attraacted to him. Thank you for writing this.

oh arnav in white shirt and blue denim "actually hanging dangerously low" 😈 do u hav to mention all this to plummet the drool quantity 😉