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kishu789

@kishu789

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Meera you are awesome!

you're such a fantastic writer.

I love reading your work as I can imagine it as if i'm watching it.

definately swooning. There is something hot about a being on a motorbike and being that close to the man u love.

👏👏👏
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appy

@appy_12

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Meeerraaa!!!!

I know I told you to take rest after your FF.. but aise amazing OS likhogi toh all my well nurtured goodness will go out the window.. I may start demanding you to write! I'm not, I'm not! :P

Okay, now to the OS! Awesome cannot do this piece of work justice! It is just too good!

Arnav, on a bike??

*Swooonnn and thud!*

CVs... Koi toh padho yeh OS!! And enact it, ditto to ditto!! Do it NOW!!!

And i like that song too.. And Parineeti Chopra! \m/

Meera, continue writing ma'am! I have fallen for you! :P

Oh, and thanks for picking me in hyour elitist commentors list! ;) :P

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meera30

@meera30

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Thank you, people!

Glad you liked this!

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

This was amazzziinnnggg!!! Loved every word of it!

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taniks

@taniks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Awesome piece , well written and an enjoyable read

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

WOW! I am so glad you did not take a break from writing! :D

I loved the sequence of events and thoughts and how one led to the other seamlessly. Switching of the POVs was really nice too! :D

Thanks for the PM! :)

I could so imagine the expressionless expression! :P