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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi! Everybody

Here just a small poem for those who understand hindi. Read and Enjoy...These are few feeling that I pen down on Mohan's behalf.

Kyon is khamosh rishte ko ek aawaaz doon?

Kyon bhala khamoshi to saaz doon?

Woh kehte hain koi to naam hoga?

Main kyon aapne ehsaashon ko naam doon?

Pyaar hai mujhe ye kabool hai magar

Is pyaar ko pyaar ka bhi naam kyon doon?

Ek ehasaas hai jo mujhe choo ke jaata hai

Ek khwaab hai jo raat bhar jagaata hai

Ek baadal hai jo bin barse bhiga jaata hai

Ek sailaab hai jo mujhe baha le jaata hai

Main khud ko bhi ab bhool jaata hoon

Tum he bolo is jaan ko kyon naya naam doon?

Nazare he jab pardh leti hai nazaro ki zubaan

Isey lafazoon ki zubaan kyon doon?

Dhadakano ki dastak hi itne tezz hai

Inhe baatoon ka shoor kyoon doon?

Khamoshi sun sakti hai jab dil ki baatein

Inhe Ikraar ki aawaaz kyoon doon?

Roz jhaakta hoon uski khidki se

Ek zalak bas dekh leta hoon

Dil ko tasalli mil jaati hai uski ek muskurahat se

Main bebas sa dil tham leta hoon

Har din uske saath ek pyaara sa lamha jee leta hoon

Jindagi bas itna raham karati rahe

Roz saasey milti rahe toh kyo koi aur ilteja karoon?

Is benaam se riste ko kyoon koi naam doon?


Note: I know many of you are wonderful writers and poets here, so friend just feel free to add your lines ...It would be wonderful to know your version too.


Hi...some beautiful additions by...

Kuls...

har Rishta kahan kissi naam ka mautaaz hota .hai..

Benaam se iss rishte main hee kyoon na khushi ke kuch paal dhoodh loon...

Bharti...

Tum hame chaaho ..humne ye kabhi kaha nani..

Hum tumhe bhool jaaye ye hamare bas mei nahi..

Geet261...

from mohan to mehga :

Yun pyar se muj ko dekho na
Kaheen pyar na tum se kar bathon
Main apne aap se darta houn
Koyi dukh na tum ko de bathon

A BIG THANK YOU TO Sen_madhuban for translating it into English...


Why do i lend a voice to this silent bond...
Why should i give this quietitude any sound...
They say it must have some name...
I say why name my emotions...
I am in love i accept but...
why do i name my love as love...


A feeling is there which touches me as it goes..
A dream is there which keeps me awake all night...
A cloud is there which wets me without raining on me...
A torrent is there which flows me away...
I no longer remember even myself...
Tell me why to give life a new name...


When eyes can read the language of eyes...
Why give them the language of words...
The heart beats so loud...
Why give them the noise of talks...
When silence can hear the heart speak..
Why give them the voice of acceptance...


Everyday i look through her window...
Just once i need to see her sight...
The heart rests in peace with just one smile of her...
Helplessly I clutch at my heart...
As each day i live one moment of love with her...
Let life grant me this one favour...
let our breaths meet everyday...
then why should i ask for anything more...
why should i name this nameless relationship...


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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
beautiful...you have written very apt for mohan feelings...specially last paragraph...
har Rishta kahan kissi naam ka mautaaz hota .hai..
Benaam se iss rishte main hee kyoon na khushi ke kuch paal dhoodh loon...
Edited by kuls11 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow! its beautiful👏
esp the last 4 lines👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow...superb👏
Mohan ke jazbaat ko ba-khoobi se bayan kiya hai aap ne...too good
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Posted: 13 years ago
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too good.very apt for monu.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful Poem! I have no words to say. I don't belong to the category creative ppl. But i can appreciate creativity. Even that is a blessing. All the lines are too good.

Only for these lines, unfortunately hamari heroine itni samajdaar nahi lagti(atleast now). Nazaron ki zuban kya, khulke batao bhi toh bhi tik se samaj paayegi ya nahi? I'm confused.

Nazare he jab pardh leti hai nazaro ki zubaan

Isey lafazoon ki zubaan kyon doon?

Dhadakano ki dastak hi itne tezz hai

Inhe baatoon ka shoor kyoon doon?

Khamoshi sun sakti hai jab dil ki baatein

Inhe Ikraar ki aawaaz kyoon doon?


But Good work. Thanks for sharing!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful Poem dear👏 love this lines so much.😍

Pyaar hai mujhe ye kabool hai magar

Is pyaar ko pyaar ka bhi naam kyon doon?😍

keep writing👍🏼


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow...Beautiful poetry..👏

Mohan ki khamoshi ko khoobsurat labz dediya...

keep writing..👍🏼

Tum hame chaaho ..humne ye kabhi kaha nani..

Hum tumhe bhool jaaye ye hamare bas mei nahi...😳
Edited by Bharti_k - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb shairi 😊

from mohan to mehga :

Yun pyar se muj ko dekho na
Kaheen pyar na tum se kar bathon
Main apne aap se darta houn
Koyi dukh na tum ko de bathon
😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kuls11

beautiful...you have written very apt for mohan feelings...specially last paragraph...

har Rishta kahan kissi naam ka mautaaz hota .hai..
Benaam se iss rishte main hee kyoon na khushi ke kuch paal dhoodh loon...


Thanks dear and I love these line
Benaam se iss rishte main hee kyoon na khushi ke kuch paal dhoodh loon...
just Beautiful!!!!!!👏

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