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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey guys.. before you kill me.. i wanna say my last few words.. I was suffering from a writer's block n still suffering my Di sayaneegupta helped me a lottt to write this chapter.. so a biiig clap for her..👏👏

I'm here to post the new chapter.. so i guess you won't kill me n those r not my last words. 😉 Here is the 10th part.. I hv started this FF on 22 July, 2011.. I have posted 10 chapters in 9 months. i m d slowest FF writer no? 😭

Ok.. here is the 10th part of Jannat. dnt 4gt to cmnt... hope u like it... and let me remind u the terrorism I have depicted here is totally a work of fiction... no real issue or incident is connected with it.

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Part : 10


Maan was sitting at the court room lonely. The busy people around him, their talks, their works nothing were effecting on him. He just sat lonely in the crowd of busy people collecting his memory of the day they became one. And how did everything change in a heartbeat. He would do anything but won't take her name here.

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After the dead body was found, all started to suspect the junior officer who was suspended for criticizing colonel's work. Maan wasn't an exception.

"where were you then?" enquired Maan.

"Do you think I killed him? No. I'm not that brave. If I was I would have killed him the day he killed those innocent people. Replied the Junior Officer.

He hid his face in his hands. Then after a few sec he spoke slowly. "I was at my room."

"Sir, he is saying the truth." Another junior officer spoke "I was with him when Colonel was shot; I was the one who brought him food."

Maan couldn't question him anymore as he had an alibi. Even the investigation team has no option but to believe it.

"I have a question." The investigation team stopped hearing the voice of suspected officer. He said directly looking at Maan's eyes. He was insulted; his eyes were reflecting anger and hatred. "you also had a fight with colonel, where were you?"

"I was in my apartment." Maan answered calmly. His anger is natural.

"do you have an alibi?" he asked again.

Maan was going to answer but he stopped this time.

"do you have an alibi?" he asked again, louder and stronger this time.

"No, I haven't." Maan said in a low tone.

"So, why only I'm the suspect?" he shouted. Anger totally overpowered him. He couldn't control his tears anymore.

"you may go." Another senior officer spoke. Then he turned to Maan. "Do you have an alibi?"

Maan didn't spoke but nodded negatively.

Naturally Maan came in the suspects' list.

Apurva: sir we know you haven't done this. We have seen you with that girl' she is Asim Khan's sister right? We just have to find her.

Maan: please Apurva, don't drag her here. It's not safe for her.

"but sir.. she can save you" Apurva tried to convince him many times but he didn't agree.

When thunder cracked in dark sky it lights up the whole surround for a sec. the same way her thought light up his abyss.

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Maan came to sense hearing a small noise. All were talking about something rather talking about someone. Maan's eyes traveled to the door following others' gaze.

There she was. Geet.

"Geet!" he murmured shockingly.

She slowly went to the chair of the witness.

"What's your name?"

"Jannat"

"you were with him that night?"

"ji haan' party se nikalne ke baad mein sari raat unke sath hi thi, unke flat mein" She said in a low but clear tone. A noise came from the crowd.

"who are you to him?"

Geet stopped for a few sec then spoke "main unke..." She stammered. Again a noise, some smirk came from the corner where other officers were sitting. Is this question needed to ask, thought an annoyed Maan.

"She is my fianc." Replied Maan in a firm voice.

Judge may have understood Maan's dilemma now' After a few question answer the court declared him innocent and the session was over.

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Everyone left one by one leaving Maan and Geet alone. Maan slowly went towards her chair.

"Geet!" he put his hand on her shoulder. She didn't spoke but put her hand on his shoulder.

"why did you came here?" Maan said sitting before her.

"aapke liye.. aapne kyun nahi kaha uss raat main aapki sath thi."

"main nahi chahta tha ke log tumhare naam leke batein kare" He closed his eyes "tumne suna na how they were talking about you."

"nahi suni' mai yahan aapke liye ayi hu .. unn logoke batein sunne nahi."

Maan was stunned with her unshaken firm personality. He cupped her face, "Geet! tum ho koun? Jannat se utri koi pari? Jise Bhagwan ne banaye hai sirf mere liye."

"nahi main to bass aapki Geet hu." She paused for sometime. "apne aisa kyun kaha?" She asked slowly.

"kya?"

"main apki.." her voice broke.

"Geet maine tumhare ammi se tumhare haat mange hai .. itna haq to mujhe haike main tumhe apna mangetar bula saku."

A silence engulfed them for a few sec. "Geet." Maan spoke slowly but in a strong voice. "ghar chalo Geet."



So how was it? plzz do comment. n updt of which FF u want next??? Plz let me know.. with love Mimi.

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Edited by princess_mimi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsmmm yaar
lvd it...😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part..but short one..give long one dear...
geets answer was too gud..
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally u updated
awesome, brilliant part
I guess it right geet will save maan.
so maan didn't say anything cause to save geet's honor and so all thing he didn't have any alibi
So geet came there and saved maan and judge also got it
continue soon and post long part
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
after a long tyme u updated but its too short.. not fair..anyways pls update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update..
Loved the strong geet..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome, i knew geet will come to rescue maan.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
loved it very much...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part...

so maan is safe...

geet saved maan

oh he said right geet is like her fiance

thnx for pm

plz be back soon

love rose😉

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