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Jyo.

@Jyo.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

I love this OS :D Especially the end 🤣 Lmfao 🤣

Tujhe mujhse aur kuch nai milega, I already review and analyse your kaam 😆

But I loved this so much :D <33

Love you twinno 🤗

Waise ab aur mat likhiyo, sab ko shock se maar dalogi 😆 But I am so proud of you, you've learnt how to move your lazy ass 🤣

Okay, I'm slightly high. YES, slightly, don't give me that look 😳

'Kay bye :P

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shewolf.

@shewolf

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

mine too :)

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why you so freaking awesome?

lemme read it again 😎

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BIackSwan

@BIackSwan

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

ok so these are different OS's right? cuz im quite lost on this side since there's no connection between them...

loved them all doll and what's gotten into you since of late? back to back OS's??!?!? gosh i didn't even bring an umbrella today and what if it rains in da evening?!?!?!?!? 🤪

love ya 😉

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

That was a really good OS. The intensity was there and for once honest emotions were there. I liked how they both realized that they cant just move on without addressing their basic issue which is of lack of trust on each other first.

The ending was really cute. Good job! :)

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

That was so good! Arnav and the family standing up for Khushi. And the part where she said "We are not okay". It was very real.

"Hi, I'm complicated" was genius! :D

Nice work! :)

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-Devanshi-

@-Devanshi-

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

Brilliant OS!!!!!absolutely brilliant!!!!
the way he defended her...i was like...in your face Maami!!!and i was sooo happy when anjali stood up for something right and was useful for the first time!!!:D...
loved how he consoled her and said the sorry...the truth revelation was also well written...loved how among the two atleast khushi was being the mature one and didnt just forgive him like it didnt matter...im glad she gave him another chance and the awww.. part was when he said would you want to start over and then the introduction where he goes..."Im complicated"...superb!!!!loved it to bits!!!:)

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Anisha/Habiba Barun Sobti ;-)

@Anisha_91

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

wow this was beautiful. the emotions the intensity was just superb. And the 'Hi I'm complicated' was ace!! loved it x

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

Simply beautiful. The end made me all emotional and sappy. But they started over!😳 Loved this ❤️

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hilly

@hilly

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

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ah ! touchy but BRILLIANT ! this was absolutely SO well done ! Loved every bit of intensity, mellow-ness, heart felt apology, and that adorableness of the tinge of humour inserted at the end !

"Hi, I'm Khushi ! "

... Pause...

"Hi, I'm Complicated!"

Epic ! :D you're too good.. and way to go ! Keep it up on the roll ! cauz i'm lovin' it !