Virat And Maanvi Finally Talk- The whole story

Hey guys I really like the whole Virat and Manvi pairing so I was wondering how she would tell him about her being sick. You're welcome tell me what you think, but no flames please 😊

Virat Point Of View

I just looked at Manvi while she told Bhabhi that I was an irresponsible brat. Voh mere bare mein aisa kaise bol sakti hain? Par aajj kal voh kuchh ajeetb tarah behave kar rahi hai. Voh hospital mein Dr. Manan ko dekh kar pareshan hona, bar bar behosh hona- nahin. Kuchh toh gadh badh hai. Voh mujhe batana chahe ya nahin main jankar hi rahoonga.

" Partner? Kya main tumse akele mein baat kar sakta hoon?" Maine poocha.

Manvi thoda ghabra gayi par kaha," H-H-Haan haan Virat bolo na."

Jaise hi bhabhi kamre ke bahar gayi meine kaha," Manvi yeh tumhe ho kya gaya hai? tum yeh sab kyun kar rahi ho? I know you don't think I'm a brat. Itna toh tum mujhe janti hi ho. Kya ho raha hai? "

Manvi gussa ho padi," Maine jo bola voh sach tha. Aur vaise bhi, mere saath jo ho raha hai usse tumhe kya farakh padta h-"

" Farakh padta hai Manvi!"

" Kyun? "

" Because-" Manvi ne mujhe ignore kar ke apni bakwas shuru kar di.

"Kya lagte ho tum mere? Meri di ke dewar ho, mere partner ho, aur kya?-"

" BECAUSE I LOVE YOU GOD DAMN IT!"

Manvi Point Of View

Virat ki baat sunte hi mein bilkul freeze type ki ho gayi," Tum kya?"

Virat ne apna gala saph kiya," Mein-Tumse-Pyaar-Karta-Hoon. Okay? There I said it? Are you happy now?"

Aisa lag raha tha jaise ussebhi abhi bolte bolte realise ho raha tha.

Mera gala attak gaya," V-virat, main ab kya-"

" Ab kya matlab kya? Main chand tare tod kar launga. Idiot. Kya tumhe bhi mere bare mein..."

Yes Virat obviously! I wanted to shout that out in his face, but I couldnt. Not now. Ab jab mere pas rehne ke liye jyada waqt nahin tha," No Virat. Main nahin keh sakti ki mujhe bhi aisa hi lagta hai."

Virat Point Of View

My heart sank. Okay. Main use pasand nahin tha, aut main yeh accept kar sakta hoon, " Okay. F-fine. I think bhai mujhe bula rahen hain , mujhe jana chahiye ."

Bahaar jakar maine gusse mein darwaze to mukka mara.

Main nahin keh sakti ki mujhe bhi aisa hi lagta hai.

Main nahin keh sakti ki mujhe bhi aisa hi lagta hai.

Main nahin keh sakti ki mujhe bhi aisa hi lagta hai.

These words were swimming around my head. Again and again and again.

Something seemed off, though.

I stormed into her room, and saw her put down a tube of medicine.Why does she put that same cream in the same spot all the time?

" Manvi, mujhe tumse kuchh baat karni hai."
Manvi hamesha ki tareh ziddi thi," Par mujhe tumse koi baat nahin karni hai. Kaha na, I can't say I feel the same way about you."

" Main ussi ke bare mein baat karna chahta hoon. Tumne kaha I can'tsay. Not won't say, can't. Why?"

Manvi ki aankhen bhar aayee," Virat I know what I said. I can't tell you how I feel because it'll crush you."

" What do you mean? You've said you don't feel the same way. Ab aur kya ho sakta hai? Hey Partner, kya chupa rahi ho tum mujhse?"

" Virat, if I could tell you I would. I can't. Tum seh nahin paoge."

" Why can't you tell me? You've Manvi Choudhary for god's sake yaar, yeh kya aise baat hai jo tum pata nahin-"

" Main marne vali hoon okay Virat. Mujhe cancer hai and I am going to die. Are you happy? Iss liye main tumhe nahin batana chahtu thi kyunki ham apni imaginary happy little dunliya nahin bassa sakte okay?"

" M-Mannu?" Yeh keh kar bhabhi behosh ho gayin.

" Bhabhi!" Virat shouted.
I looked at the door and saw Jeevika di faint," Di!"
Hum dono bhag kar darwaze tak gaye. Virat ne jeeju ko awaz lagayi aur main paani le kar aayi.
Jeeju ghabrakar aaye," Jeevika? Kya hua Jeevika ko? Jeevika wake up please!"
Main ne chup chap di ke muh par paani chidka, aur voh thodi der mein jag gayi.
" Man-Mannu, yeh tum kya keh rahe the?"
Virat ne kaha," Kuchh nahi bhabhi, voh hum dono roz ki tareh ladai kar rahe the aur Maamvi bas thoda mazaak kar rahi thi, hena Maanvi?"
Virat ko aise toota hua dekh kar main sach nahin keh payi," Haan di. Bas gusse mein aakar mein-"
Beeji ne meri baat kat di," Bas karo Maanvi! Kab tak chupaogi? Maanvi ko cancer hai aur yeh hi sach hai."
Thodi der baad beeji jiju ko sab bata rahin thi aur main di ko sambhalne ki koshish kar rahi thi," Di aap itna pareshaan mat ho. Kaha na main theek hoon..."
Jiju ne aakar di ko thoda sambhala aur main Virat ko dhoodhne chali gayi.
Usse maine apne kamre mein dekha, aur paas gayi toh pata chala ki life mein shayad pehli baar, Virat Singh Vadera ro raha tha.
" Virat tum ro kyun rahe ho yaar. Kaha na theek hoon..."
" Achha? Toh phir mujhe mana kyun kiya? Agar pata tha ki tum theek ho toh phir kyun kaha ki tum marne wali ho?"
I took a deep breath," Virat, tum mujhe bhi bauhaut pasan ho. There, I said it, are you happy now? Ab toh apni yeh Ganga Yamuna band karo na partner."
Virat ke aansoon kuchh kam ho gaye," Will you go out with me? "
" No."
" Yes."
" No! Virat main haan kehna. chahti hoon par tim kyun kar rahe ho yeh apne saath? Plus yeh long distance and all mujhse nahin hoga."
" Bas karna chahta hoon okay? Agar main voh problem door kar doon toh?"
" I'll think about it. Itni aasaani se haan nahin kahoongi, thoda toh tumhe tadapna padega..."
Virat took out a bouquet of roses from behind his back," Pata tha ki tum koi aisa hi drama karogi, so I came prepared."
I smiled," Okay. Jab tum itni bheekh mang hi rahe ho to haan kehe deti hoon... Achha yaar ab khush?"
" Ek aur baat. Tumhara illaj hum karaenge."
" No."
" Yes."
" NO!"
"YES! Maanvi, chachu ki dukaan ko maine jalaya hai, itna toh main apni girlfriend ke liye kar hi sakta hoon..."
" Girlfriend? Uske liye toh kabhi haan nahin kaha maine..."
" Nahin kaha, par tumse kaha loonga... Aur tum humare saath Chandigarh chal rahi ho that's final. Bhai ne baahaar sabse baat kar li hogi, saaman pack karo aur chalo."
" No."
" Maanvi, tum chalogi toh ek, hum ek saath thoda time spend kar sakte hain. Do, tum India ke top doctors ki care mein rahogi. Teen, tum bhabhi ke saath reh sakti ho, ab toh chalo meri ma."
" Main tumse yeh ehsaan nahin le sakti."
" Ehsaan ki baat kaun kar raha hai? Chachu ki dukaan ki jaise hi hum bharpai karaaenge tum soot samet lautadena okay?"
Di kamre mein aayin," Virat, if you don't mind mein baat kar sakti hoon?"
Virat Point Of View
Bhai ko main ne apna aur bhabhi ka saaman rakhte hue dekha," Kuchh madad chahiye?"
" Yeh sab chod, I'm sorry yaar, Maanvi..."
" Kya baat kar rahe ho? Chandigarh jaate hi dinner par le ja raha hoon..."
" Virat, are you sure you want to do this to yourself?"
" Yaar tum sab aise kyun baat karte ho jaise Maanvi ko pata nahin kya ho gaya hai, theek ho jayegi okay. She'll be fine. She better be fine."
A few days later, in chandigarh...
I held the window ledge and pulled myself up and into Maanvi's room. Why didn't I use the door, well that would be because everyone was sleeping, everyone thought I was sleeping and I wanted to surprise Maanvi. Aaraam se ghode bech kar so rahi thi. She mumbled," Virat. No Virat, pink tum par bil kul suit nahin karta..."
I rolled my eyes and shook her slightly," Maanvi. Maanvi uth na."
Maanvi jhat se uth gayi," Virat! Tum raat ke bareh baje yahaan chor police khelne aaye ho?"
I didn't say anything, I just handed her her favourite box of chocolates," Happy Meetaversary."
" Virat, tum pagal ho gaye ho, ye Meetaversary kya hai?"
Maanvi started coughing violently.
" Maanvi? Kya hua?" Main ne bhag kar usse thoda paani diya.
" Main theek hoon, bas voh kuchh."
I rolled my eyes," Tum kabhi nahin sudhrogi. Beemaar ho, takleef hai but you won't say a word... Here lie down."
Maanvi Point Of View
Puri raat jag kar Virat ne mera khyaal rakha.
I know, main bhi shocked thi. But Virat was really sweet. Voh mere liye paani laya, meri dawai laya, mere uupar chaadar aur puri raat mere bed ke paas padi chair par baitha. Virat Singh Vodadra.
Ab kitni shaanti se chair par soya hua hai, vaise toh pataa nahin kaise tufaan khade karta hai.
" Mannu, chai?" Di ne yeh keh kar mera darwaza khola aur Virat jhat se uthkar meri cupboard main chup gaya.
I nervously swallowed," Er, haan di, thanks."
Virat ne jor se cheenk mari. IDIOT!
Di ne cupboard kholkar Virat se kaha," Virat I think tumhe apne kamre main jaana chahiye..."
Virat ne jaane se pehle mujhe aankh mari! Hey bhagwaan isse kya hua hai?"

3rd person Point Of View
Virat anxiously paced around the room, waiting for Dr. Tandon to report something, anything. Maanvi had gone into surgery for removal of her cancer cells, and Virat was the most man in the room.
Finally they switched the light off and the doctors stepped out.
Virat ran in, and what he saw made him almost faint.
Virat Point Of View
" Hi Virat! Kaise ho tum? " Maanvi ne kaha.
" Main toh theek hoon par tum..."
" Bilkul maze mein hoon. Voh kya hai na, doctors ne mujhe kuchh dawai type ki cheez di hai, aur ab mujhe bauhauuut achha lag raha hai!"
Bhai kamre mein bhabhi ke saath aaye," Virat, chinta mat kar, doctor ne kaha hai ki Maanvi bilkul theek ho jaayegi."
Maanvi ki muh par ek stupid si smile thi, jo mujhe secretly bauhaut cute lagi. Usne kaha," Agar aap logo ka lhus pus karna band ho gaya hai, toh kuchh khaana mangva sakte ho? Maine kissi ko ek date promise ki thi."

Sooo... Good👏? Bad😡? Okay🥱? Please tell me!

Should I write more or would that ruin it?