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Posted: 13 years ago
Arnav is letting his mind take over and that could cost him in the future! Can't wait to read more!
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Posted: 13 years ago
so i know the flashbacks and the story suggest completely otherwise...but i cannot help but keep thinking that somewhere arnav isnt really in the business...that its some sort of undercover...continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update!!! arnav just left shimla and finally decided to go back to his plan of trapping lavanya...thats interesting how arnav and khushi would meet each other...
now waiting to know what happens next!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Gr8 update..
so arnav is chossing lavanya it seems.. nt letting his heart rule..😔
n khushi met aakash.. 😕
carry on..
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Posted: 13 years ago

just read the latest two parts

i love it, there is so much to learn about arnav, and what will happen when he eventually gets caught by khushi..
cont soon
SA
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Posted: 13 years ago
m luvin' it.
awesome update. hope arnav and khushi meet again asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ola Rachel!! Mon Cheri!!!❤️
I sincerely apologise for not commenting earlier!! uff...All I've been doing these days is only Apologise!! :P Sheesh!!! Jahaan jao Sorry...Sorry...Sorry bol rahi hoon!!😔 😳 🥱
Okay back to your chappies...
🤓

Chapter 8: That nightmare very much reminded me of Prince of Persia: SAnds of Time's first scene, where the King finds Dastan in the streets!! 😍 It is one of my Most Favourites Movies, I tell you!! And I keep watching it whenever it comes on TV or anywhere!! heheheh...😉
Okay, not all of it is same or similar, but it reminded me of that!! Yes, Arnav's helplessness was agreeable... God, even I could feel the pain stinging me, while reading about him being flogged and also kicked in the abdomen, which is damn sensitive at such an age! My body actually heated up on reading it all... Here I am seated here in my room, while the seething Sun is shining and heating up the whole place and making me sweat!! :P Sheesh!! And on top of that, am burning even more after reading this nightmare!! :P
And the way you ended the nightmare was beautiful... No One...
Same here!! Actually even if it has happened or not, any nightmare leaves a feeling so creepy that you feel that it actually happened just recently and you can still feel the stinging pain shoot across your body! *shivering lightly* And you also feel your body heat up, and then, cool down after a few moments of deep breathing and realisation of your present position.

Heheheh...I liked Khushi and Lavanya's interaction again!! It was fun!! I do it too!! Even though Mom doesn't appreciate it much, when it comes to waking up like that! But she is game for it during the rest of the day!! Heheheh... Especially grandmom!!! She toh loves to tickle me till am breathless and cry out in a strangled voice to stop!!! Gosh!!😲

Hahahah...Even am not such a fan of Parties!! But if it's something related to family or Friends, whom you 'Know' then it is okay!! 😆 At least, we do know some people there to get along with and have a chat!! Otherwise it becomes Hell lot of boring to be in a party where you don't even know a Soul, and it becomes pretty embarrassing to keep on sticking to your phone too, messaging. It kinda gives a wrong impression too for the hosts and the other guests! You know what I mean!😳

Ooh La La!! You killed me again, mi Amore!! Gosh!! I could literally feel myself witnessing it as one of the girls there, stealthily noticing him in those black trousers and that grey half-sleeves hoodie!! :P Main Vaari Jawa!! Aye Haaye!! Aha!! Kickboxing too!!! Nice, nice...I like it...!! *nodding my head slowly*😉

LOL!!😆 Lavanya bhi na!!! *shaking my head in disbelief* Sheesh!! Heheheh...Well, no one can complain too!! When it comes to Arnav smirking his stylish mischievous smirk, then he takes on the whole world!! 😲 😳 ☺️Hmm...Lavanya's just kinda intimidated and that's all...Well, I know that Lavanya ain't that kind who'll throw themselves on guys, but she is damn naive, more than Khushi herself, to be lured into some really Dangerous situations and Horrid troubles...

Hahahah...I agree with you!!😆 Any such furry animals are too damn Cute to be resisted and even I would go on chasing them till the end!! Heheheh...Without a worry of the world!! :P😉😉

You know that feeling when you're checking out something somewhere and you turn to see or unconsciously call onto your loved one, whoever it may be, and on receiving no response turn to see nothing...nobody and just lots of people or nothing?? Gosh!! It's happened to be dozens of times!!! That creepy feeling of fear just creeps on and on, though you never show it on your face, but while searching and failing, it slowly starts to show!!! A few years back, in a mall, I had a knack of checking out utensils and still do and would imagine myself cooking and tossing and turning all those pancakes and sabzis, with tablespoons, pans, etc... I would turn to my side to look for my parent(s), if they were nearby... And on not finding, I would feel my senses go slightly numb
😲and then, back as I would try and scan the crowd...And then a wash of pure relief sets in on finding at least one of them!!
Have you ever had that kind of experience?😳

Annie
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 9: Hahahahah...I liked that out-of-the-blue prayer and begging that Khushi did, without even opening her eyes!!! heheheh...😆 😉
Uh huh!! She's got some real good skills re and a clever mind!!! Nice, nice!!⭐️
OH MI GOD!! 😲 You brought out that revelation so simply, yet so beautifully!! But so early?! Eh?😕 😆 😉
Sajda song is already playing my mind here!!😍 While reading the part where both of them put two and two together of the other being the same person that fateful night!!! Heeheehee...😛
Well, well, well!! 'Murderer'...Arnav would be thinking that's what he is and in reality, yes, he IS one! But that 'Nice Guy' put him in thought again!! Gosh!! Such detailing is so much fun to read!!! It makes the story all the more exciting!! Mwh... Chummeshwari, Rachel!! 🤗 ❤️
But one thing I didn't understand! How does Arnav know Khushi's name or was it just a nickname he had given to the supposed angel of that fateful night?
😕
Urm...Was I wrong about Lavanya not throwing herself on guys??!!! Sheesh! So she does, eh??😕 😛
tsk..tsk..tsk..tsk.. Well, though she doesn't have any evil plans in her mind, to hurt someone or disrespect any one for anything!!! *sigh* Just a girl who gets attracted to every other guy, who is Handsome, good-looking, suave...blah blah...classic definition of a Gorgeous looking man!! :P 😉

Mission Accomplished!! :P

Chapter 10: Hahahahah...Lavanya's coo-ing about 'Rishab Malhotra' was what I had imagined!!! 🤣 Dumbo!!! Sheesh!!! *shaking head in disbelief with a grin*
At first I thought after both of them reveal, maybe the part where they would come across the same face and the whole revelation would come!
😎 But yaar!! *patting your back* You twisted it again and brought in another twist here, making Khushi totally exhausted and think that that matter of hers wasn't so important!! 👍🏼

Aww...The fountain reminded me of Bangalore's Musical Fountain!! Gosh!! It was one...no,...a few magical experiences!!! 🤗 Really!! I enjoyed it thoroughly there!! The water jets spraying into the air, creating waves and flexing to form various forms and those lights creating a magical look for us to feast our eyes on and also those wonderful songs played along and the synchrony of all those water jets to every beat, made me jump with excitement all the time and still does when I remember it!!
😍 It was seriously a Beautiful, Amazing and a Magical Experience!! 😍😍
And I could imagine Khushi jumping around it there like a six year old kid, gleefully playing with the water sprays!!!
WOWIE!!!! Mwh...again!! Heheheh...🤗

Uff...Yeh gussa!! 😳 Arnav ji thhoda toh sambhaalo apne aap ko!! But why did he hiss in anger like that at night? Was he getting frustrated/annoyed at her affecting presence? 😛 😉 😃
And now, at the restaurant, he attempted to talk to her about the previous night!!...He really did?!?!?😲😲😲😲😲
Well, Khushi's fear and disappointment was what it would always be after such an interaction!!! :P

Oh ho!! Farak thhoda thhoda pad raha hain, yaara!!! Heheheh...Good one!!
You don't give a damn about 'such' people now, but you will soon, Mr. Arnav-- Oops! Rishab Malhotra!! :P
😉
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CHAPTER 13

"Shyam, are you sure these are the only ones in the Delhi network? No other men in this list?" Arnav asked curiously peeping into the monitor. Initially, he had doubts about Shyam's intentions and his loyalties. But there was no other choice left for him. Shyam had been the only one to have access to the most confidential info from the criminal network.

Arnav had wanted to find out about his assailants at Shimla. But his search was unsuccessful. It looked like the men weren't locals of Delhi or they weren't established in any gang.

"No. These are all the people in the list." Shyam replied back to him. "Any specific reason for this sudden search through the database?"

"Nope. Nothing!" Arnav said and turned around to leave. He didn't want anyone else to know about the attack on him. He couldn't trust anyone. He would have to be more vigilant than ever before.


o0o


"Miss?" Akash asked turning towards Khushi who was standing beside Buaji's bed at the hospital.

"Khushi Gupta." Khushi replied back her name.

"Can I talk to you for a second outside?" he asked indicating towards the door. Khushi stood up and went outside followed by the doctor.

"Your Buaji suffered an Asthma attack due to severe stress. Her stress levels have rocketed up. Looks like something is really bothering her. Not only that, but her blood pressure was alarmingly high when she arrived. You did the right job in bringing her to the hospital. We have now put her under anti-stress medications. I would suggest that she be under observation for a few days until her body stabilises. I'm afraid there could be more severe repercussions if this is ignored." Akash spoke in a low voice not wanting to scare her with this piece of information. He could clearly see the worry spreading across her face.

"Will she be fine?" Khushi asked softly, afraid of the answer to her question.

"For now, yes. But if this continues, I'm afraid, it's a no." he replied back not wanting to keep her in the dark.

Khushi tried to fight back all the tears that now threatened to flow down her eyes. But she couldn't. She had to be brave for Buaji and her own sake.


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"So Lavanya, what are your plans for the weekend?"Arnav asked calculatively, his mind already on the verge of forming a new plan.

"I think I will invite Khushi over. You know for some girls day out. We haven't seen each other since the Shimla trip." Lavanya said lazing around on the chair at a restaurant in a mall. "Do you want to come over? I can introduce you to Khushi. You haven't met her right? She's a nice girl. You'll like her."

Arnav couldn't stop himself from flinching at the mention of the very girl's name who he had wanted to forget. Somehow, he felt guilty for doing this. But there was no other choice for him. He was doing it for his future. Once he got hold of that ten crores by trading the document to Mr. Goenka, then maybe his life would change for the better. He had been waiting for this opportunity to enter Lavanya Kashyap's house. But now it seemed impossible to go ahead with it. Khushi was the only one who knew his true identity, well atleast his name. And hence, he couldn't appear as Rishab in front of her.

Arnav didn't know how long this game could be continued. But he hoped that he wouldn't get caught until his mission was successful and the papers were in his hand. All he had to do was not appear in front of both Lavanya and Khushi. And it was possible if he exercised every bit of caution from his side.

"Sorry, I'm busy. Got to go to Ludhiana for the weekend to meet my family." He lied, using the first excuse that popped into his mind.

"That's bad. Maybe next time." She said.

Arnav had been busy sipping the juice from his glass, when he felt someone suddenly yank his collar and pull him up from his chair.

"You B*stard! How dare you snatch away my girlfriend?" The guy blared and punched Arnav's face. Arnav had been least expecting this and hence, was not able to defend himself.

"Karthik!" he heard Lavanya scream out at the guy who punched him. "How dare you! Don't blame him. I'm dumping you. It's over between us, you douchebag! Khushi was right about you!" Lavanya blared back furiously at Karthik's face, while everyone surrounding them looked at them in complete silence.

Arnav looked back at Lavanya's face with astonishment. Wow! So atleast Khushi had the right sense of judgement with people. This Karthik was definitely a douchebag.

"Let's go Rishab!" she said pulling him away from that place and leading him to her car parked at the basement of the mall. "I'm sorry, you had to go through this." Lavanya said apologetically.

"It's fine. I'm alright! I better get going home. See you later Lavanya!"

"Bye Rishab!" she said pecking his cheek. Arnav sighed as he turned around. This girl was going to be devastated at the end of all this.


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"Buaji, Doctor said you have to be admitted in the hospital for a few days. He said you needed to be under observation." Khushi said sitting beside the hospital bed.

"Sankadevi, is his crazy? No, I can't stay here." She protested trying to sit up straight. "I need to go home."

Seeing the worried expression on her aunt's face, Khushi spoke. "Is something bothering you? I can help you. Please tell me Buaji." She pleaded holding her hand.

For a minute, Buaji hesitated to speak out. But after pondering over it, she decided to share it with her niece. "With the rising costs of living, it is very difficult for me to manage the household with just your uncle's pension money. Everyday, I barely manage to make our ends meet. And now, if I stay here in the hospital, how can we afford to pay for all these bills? It's better that we go home."

"Don't say like that Buaji. Your health is very important. And don't worry about the money. When I'm here, you needn't fear. I will go and find a job tomorrow itself. Anyways, I can afford to skip college. It's not like something great is happening there." Khushi said reassuring her.

Buaji protested but Khushi was in no mood to listen. Finally after a lot of convincing, Buaji agreed. Khushi stood up and decided to go back home and get refreshed and return back for her stay in the hospital at night. As she was about to leave, she bumped into Akash who was about to enter the room.

"Sorry Doctor!" Khushi apologised worriedly and went away from there, leaving him completely stunned.


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It was late at night. A young man was walking towards his house that stood at the corner of the street. The lights were out in most of the houses, indicating most of them had retired for the night. The surrounding was eerily quiet and engulfed in haunting silence. Just before he could take a step further, he felt a strong arm glide over his mouth, suffocating him.

"Mmm!" he tried protesting but his voice was muffled.

"Where do you think you're going..." He heard the ambusher whisper into his ears, "Karthik? Did you have fun today punching me in public?" He released his hand and turned the young man's face towards him.

"You!" Karthik asked in surprise. "What do you think you are doing?" he stammered seeing an evil grin spread across the face of his attacker.

"Sshhh.. Someone might hear us. And I don't want anyone interrupting me." He said placing his hands on Karthik's shoulders. "We have unfinished business." And before Karthik could react, he felt a punch in his abdomen, so powerful that he felt his insides tearing apart. He immediately crouched down, grasping his sides, yelping out with pain.

"No one dares to mess with me!" Karthik heard him proclaiming out loudly. "No one!"

And with that he lifted Karthik from the ground with his hands. "Goodbye Karthik!" he whispered in a deadly tone, enjoying the terror rapidly spreading across his victim's face and without wasting any moment, twisted his neck, snapping off the nerve that connected his brain and spine, dropping him lifeless on the ground.

"Aman!" he called out to his aide behind him. "You know what to do. Make it look like an accident." Arnav said brushing his hands on the sides of his shirt.

"Yes, Bhai!" Aman complied pulling the lifeless body towards their car.


o0o


"Excuse me, Miss Gupta!" she heard someone call out to her from behind. Khushi had been silently standing at one end of the hospital's corridor, staring outside the window at the dark night, pondering over what could be done to resolve their financial problems. She turned around to find Akash standing behind her.

"Yes, Doctor?" she asked expecting some news related to Buaji.

"I hope you don't mind this, but I overheard your conversation with your Buaji in the morning. And I couldn't help investigating it further with her, but I think I have a solution to your problem." Akash spoke in a reassuring voice. "I know that you are in the lookout for a job. Well, I'm have my own clinic and I needed an assistant to assist me with the files of the patients. I'm sure it would be a suitable job for you. And we even offer insurance cover to our staff. So that will help you solve your Buaji's hospital expenses."

Khushi didn't know how to react to the words of the man who she barely knew anything about. She was reluctant at first, but she knew she had no other choice. It would be really difficult to find a job in such a short notice. Maybe this wasn't a bad idea. "But..."

"I know it is really strange for me to offer you this job, but somewhere I felt you needed my help. Maybe God is trying to help you through me." Akash said with a cheerful smile.

Khushi couldn't help smiling back at him. "Thank you Doctor."

"Nah! Call me Akash, Miss Gupta."

"Thank you Akash. And you can call me Khushi," she turned around and went back to the room, leaving behind a smiling Akash.


CHAPTER 14


So, I know this is a filler chapter. Gosh! Writer's block sucks!🤢 Hence the delay in updating. When ur mind is filled with accounts, it gets really hard to find your creativity.

henceforth, there will be delays in updating. Got to focus on studies. Afterall, I have no intentions of ending up as a writer.😆 So I have to focus on my career seriously!

Someone asked about the Akash- Arnav connection. All I've got to say is remember, till now I have never revealed Arnav's full name right?😈 Let's just say, the past is the key to his future.😉


And don't hate Akash yet! He maybe the key to Arhi's next meeting!😉

Edited by molten_lava - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part..but arnav killin karthik creeped me...m kinda scared of arnav now
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