CONFESSION SHOULD HAPPEN NXT WK IN KS

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Besides showing bani's verbal reaction 2 the pregnancy news, the creatives/script writers and ekta mayi of all need to show jai confessing to bani, i think it is long overdue, bani on her part has more than done enuf.

They can show it as part of the confrontation bet J&B in which Jai HAS AND I mean absolutely HAS to spell out his feelings to bani and confess the old fashioned way by saying I LOVE U BANI ............

Sorry, but i have cut and paste this from some of the member's fanfics just to let u guys know that it is high time that jai acts responsible and admits his feelings to bani, i feel it is the only way to get thru to her, if not immediately, she can think about it when she is in her kopebhavan hatred phase and reach a decision but atleast he has made it all clear to her, answered all the questions that she has been asking herself about his love/feelings towards her and left no scope for ifs, buts and misunderstandings.

He should be shown as he doesn't care how she reciprocates anymore, as long as he has told her how he feels he has nothing more to worry about. So while she is fighting with him and accusing him, he should just cover her mouth with his hands and say

Jai: Shutup Bani, just chup. Bahut ho chuka. Ab main jo kehne jaa raha hu, woh shaayad mujhe bahut pehle kehdena chaahiye tha.

Bani, we've spent a lot of time together. A lot of it has been spent with me taking my anger out on you., constant accusations, misunderstandings & fights bet us and I am truly sorry for that, but I don't want to hurt you anymore. I don't know how or when it happened, but there is now a deep relationship between the two of us that neither of us can deny. I know that I have been denying it for a long time and lying to myself about the way that I feel about you just to protect myself from being hurt any more becoz I have always been unlucky in love and becoz i never knew about ur feelings towards me. ur silence on the subject coupled with some comments i heard u pass on to pia on the phone has not helped me much.

Also i always knew that once u got to know about the raaz u would hate me and leave me anyway, so i was just saving myself another heartbreak and preparing myself to be without u.

i was confused all this time, kept fighting with myself and ur silence did not help me much too. that night i felt i had taken adv of u becoz u were not in ur senses but still in a way i was happy about what had happened bet us. then after hearing what all pia had to say about ur feelings for me, it just convinced me that i was wrong to have forced u, so i took the blame upon myself and called it a mistake becoz i did not want u to hate me for taking adv of u. You too did not clarify ur stand to me, so i just assumed the worst.

but I just can't take it anymore. When I wake up in the morning and see you it completes my day. When you smile at me all my worries seem to fade away. When you touch me Bani, I feel alive. If you are upset then I feel upset. If your happy than I am happy. Bani, you complete me. What I am trying to say is that Bani, I love you a lot.

I have also come to understand all ur subtle hints and actions of ur feelings towards me too and hence do not want to keep quiet anymore. the way u ran into my arms just seconds before the bomb was going to explode cleared away all the remaining doubts i had about ur love for me.

In dino jo kuch bhi hua usse mujhe sirf ek baat pata chali hai. Jab Pia mujhe chod ke bhaag gayi thi to mujhe gussa aya tha – us baat pe ke koi mujhe dhoka de kar kaise jaa sakta hai?! Lekin abhi jab tum humara ghar chod kar jana cha rahi ho woh bhi jab humara zindagi humara nahin raha lekin humare aane wale bache ka hain.....Bani tab mujhe ehsaas hua ke mere liye tumhari kya ehmiyat hai. Pata nahin kyun mujhe aisa lagta hain jaise ki meri poori duniya bikhar jayegi. Shaayad….. shaayad yahi to pyar hai…

Bani mujhe yeh to nahin pata ki is ehsaas ko tum pyar kahogi ya kya... lekin ye pata hai ki tumhaare bina sab kuch mujhe adhura lagta hai. Aisa lagta hai ki mera shareer yahi hai, lekin aatma kahin ghum ho gaya hai. Agar tum mere paas nahin hoti ho, toh lagta hai, that i have lost something imp that belongs to me.

Main tumhaare liye koi faisla lena nahin chahta Bani, i think i lost that right after all that i have put u through. But after what has happened yesterday I decided I had to tell you how I felt and did not want to hide my feelings anymore even though i know u hate me and probably what i feel for you does not concern u anymore - lekin pata nahi zindagi mein kal kya ho jaye.......... so i just had to let u know and lighten my burden.

I know u may think that i am saying all this now becoz of the baby and u are justified in doubting my intentions, but just as all this is sudden for u, it is for me too. i am not denying that i am on cloud nine to know that u are having our baby, god has finally decided to shower his blessings on me by making my biggest dream of having a family of my own come true and that too with a woman who has taught me the true meaning of love and made me love her back and have feelings and emotions like i have never ever had before for anyother woman and made me a better human being. so please do not misunderstand my intentions, yes the baby is imp to me, but more than that u mean the world to me. if only u could see how i reacted like a mad man when the doc gave me the news, i literally carried him, hugged him and twirled him around, he thought i had lost it, i was so elated that i could not stop myself from running to u, felt like i had just acquired wings to fly up the stairs faster than usual and come to share this news with u, but then when i was about to open the door, i remembered ur last words of hatred for me and just could not get myself to show u my face, i did not want to hurt u anymore especially now that u were having a baby. i died at the thought of not being able to share the biggest joy of our life with u, and believe me that was punishment enough, so i walked away.

Lekin Bani tumhaara jo bhi faisla ho usko main poori tarha se respect aur accept bhi karoonga. I am not going to compell you to do anything Bani. Bas itna yaad rakhna ki agar tumhaari taraf se na ho, agar tum mujhe maafi ke layak nahin samajti ho, to tum jo bhi karogi, jaha bhi jaogi, mujh me ek dost zaroor paogi. Humaare beech pyaar ka na sahi, understanding ka to rishta rahega na, tumhare bache ka baap hone ka rishta to rahega na? Jab bhi tumhe aur humare bache ko meri zaroorat padegi tab yaad karlena, tum mujhe ek pal mein tumhare paas paogi…

All Bani can then say is ........... Itni si baat kehne ke liye apne bahut der lagaadi?

but since she now knows what she means to him, she can decide with a clear mind now that all her doubts have been cleared and all her questions have been answered.

what do u guys think, will the creatives take this path, i wish they would 😕

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FizuLki thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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if only..i really hope so.. im sick and tired of the on and offs i the couple's mood.. but come to think of it, if jai and bani is settled than the show won't be fun to watch unless thay move it to ranveer and rashi!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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no one is asking to show them settled, just happy and out with their feelings for one another, it would make matters simpler. also the show could still go on with them showing bani trying to prove jai's innocence. look at where that has taken saat phere, atleast nahar and saloni were shown happy and in love instead of misunderstandings and beating around the bush all the time about what they mean to each other
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: sabsj

no one is asking to show them settled, just happy and out with their feelings for one another, it would make matters simpler. also the show could still go on with them showing bani trying to prove jai's innocence. look at where that has taken saat phere, atleast nahar and saloni were shown happy and in love instead of misunderstandings and beating around the bush all the time about what they mean to each other



I agree with you sabsj and i also feel that its high time that they show Jai confessing to Bani. And yes, the confession will definitely not mean that everything between them will be settled, but the stability and security of teh confession will make Bani more open towards the accident. 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sabsj

what u have written is marvellous.
I think you better contact EKTA KAPOOR right no

U deserve to be a Dialogue writer.
it was just great .
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i want to give ua hug for what u have written 🤗
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I completely agree - it soooooo needs to be made crystal clear so they can't pretend they didnt quite understand or brush it off!! also with Bani as dazed as she looked on friday she needs to be told something unequivocally earth shattering!!!!

by the way sabsj, i am highly flattered!! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey some this is from my FF

When I wake up in the morning and see you it completes my day. When you smile at me all my worries seem to fade away. When you touch me Bani, I feel alive. If you are upset then I feel upset. If your happy than I am happy. Bani, you complete me. What I am trying to say is that Bani, I love you a lot.

Hey thanks you think its good enough for an actual confession between J&B
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I mean guys & gals all i am saying is the script writers need to give bani one reason why she should still want to stay with jai leaving aside the fact that now she is pregnant, what else is there in their relationship that should hold her back. she has absolutely no inclination about his feelings for her, all she remembers is he called their first night together a ghalti and said there was nothing worth remembering about it, he tells her time and again how after masi is gone they both can go their seperate ways, even when he does something loving for her eg. singing for her/dancing with her during one of the marriage ceremonies he follows it up with comments like had a great time, am happy to see masi happy, few more days then we don't need to put up an act etc. etc. COME ON JAI how dumber can ur character get, u do nothing but leave the poor girl confused all the time. to think that u are made out to be such a great businessman, u cannot handle such a simple situation which is so close to ur heart

Take for example the last conversation bet the 2 of them after jigs broke the pregnancy issue to an already shattered bani, what does jai do besides slapping jigyasa, which I think did not even register so much with bani given her blank expressions, of all the things he starts off by telling her "nah chahte hue bhi, hum is shaadi mein bandh chuke hai", I mean pleeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaseeeeeeeeeeee, how can u say something like that, u just reiterated the fact that u are being forced to stay in this relationship. so what if u followed it up with a beautiful dialogue as "yet i see u in all relations", what bani is going to remember is only u once again implying that u are being forced.

don't u guys think given the kind of mental state bani is in, put urself in her place for a min and see, wouldn't a plain and simple I LOVE U be more effective than any other fancy dialogue. i know a lot of us feel it is very typical, very cliched to say the 3 words etc. etc., but at the end of the day aren't we all succors for those very 3 words. doesn't it turn our worlds upside down when it comes from a loved one, especially when all along u are nothing but confused about what that special person feels for u.

Agreed actions speak louder than words, but the state that bani is in right now, needs simple verbal reassurance more than any kind of grand action. things may may not smooth out bet them immediately, but like sangita said atleast as far as she is concerned there will be stability and security after hearing what he feels for her. it may then make her see the accident in a diff light altogether becoz now she knows that both love each other and it is not a one sided. as it is she has kept telling herself before the raaz was revealed that she knows what he wants and she will not keep him bound with her love and knows he does not love her, so all the more reason she will want to walk out now becoz she will look upon her pregnancy as an added burden on him. unless she knows that it is otherwise and he is as elated about it and is equally crazy about her, why the hell should she want to stay back.

even the masi factor is not there anymore, she no longer needs to pretend, so then why?????????? i feel masi has done her part, she needs to leave any way, they have reached where they are today thanks to all the pushing from her side, so now if masi leaves and bani still decides to stay back, it goes to show that she is doing so for herself and jai and the child and not to please masi, which again takes their rel to a new dimension.

instead of using masi as a catalyst maybe the writers can now use rano who is going to be living in the same house as her di. no one knows bani and her feelings better than rano and rano is well aware of her di being in love with jai, and for all that her di has done for pia and her and all the sacrifices she has made, the least rano can do is be shown as mending the gaps bet jai and bani, don't u think that would be better and more fun to watch, it would give her role in the serial a diff meaning too.

Bani has always been simple in stating her feelings for him even though indirectly, no fancy stuff, after the fire incident she very simply told him what she felt, plain and simple. when she shuts his mouth up to stop him from telling her the raaz, again she simply tells him her feelings, even their last encounter before the raaz blows up on her face, the song she danced on, if u try and recall the words, she then too was asking him "maro dil ko bas be karke, dil se anjana pan kyun", so she is a simple girl and putting it simply across to her and saying I Love U when she needs it the most is the best thing that jai can do for her and himself.


Bani has so far managed to look after/bring up her sisters after her parents passed away, has always been self sufficient/independent, she can jolly well do the same for her kid too, she does not need to be with a jai walia for that. what she does need is a soul mate and life partner to love her and be there for her, someone she can rely on in bad times, someone she can share her fears with, someone to give her stability in life like she has been doing for her sisters all this time. Fortunately both her sisters have been blessed with this but for bani it is something which she has lacked all her life and she could not have been more voiceferous about it and explained her needs to jai better than when she is accusing him of what he did to her life after killing her mom accidentally. Jai too felt bad when she said that she had nobody to fall back on, all the more reason then for jai to tell her that he is there for her becoz he loves her even though she hates him now. Him telling her that he is in love with her is just going to help her choose her future path, give her more options.

look at it this way too, even if someone has to step in and try to get them 2 together say for e.g. pia, or pushkar or rano or aditya etc. the first question they are going to ask her but naturally is whether mr. walia loves her too, becoz by now they all know that she does. what do u expect her to tell them, when she herself is not convinced, should she say he presented me a necklace in front of everyone maybe that shows he loves me, or then, he gave me kangans maybe that is love, or he said he got scared when he did not see me in the room one morning, maybe that is love, or he said, i see u in all rels, maybe that is love............. but these are all still MAYBES ONLY FOR HER right, nothing concrete as the old fashioned I Love U Bani.

him stepping on the bomb for her will not even occur to her at this stage becoz whatever happened at the mill is connected to park road and that is something she is trying to forget.

please ks creative writers, itna toh akal hoga na tumhe, come on which woman no matter how modern or advanced we are will not want to hear the 3 golden words from her husbands mouth ........ for bani they may just give her a new lease to life.

SORRY EVERYONE FOR THE LONG POSTS, I BLAME IT ON MY HORMONES OR ON THE FACT THAT ONE PREG WOMAN IS FEELING BAD FOR ANOTHER EVEN THOUGH HER PREG IS FICTITIOUS, STILL I FULLY UNDERSTAND WHAT SHE IS GOING THRU. WOULD LOVE TO HEAR UR VIEWS/GAALIS IF ANY, JUST MAYBE SOMEONE OUT THERE WOULD READ ALL OUR VIEWS AND TRY TO TAKE THIS FAVOURITE SHOW OF OURS BACK ON TRACK.

Edited by sabsj - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yes chickster, of course ur fan fic is good enuf for the confession, could be polished up a bit, but then if we do all the work for the script writers, unka kaam kaun karega, afterall they get paid for the mess they are turning KS into, they should just be grateful we are giving them ideas of how to get out of it 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks cordelia too, am glad u did not mind me repeating some of ur thoughts.

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