GUYS I NEED HELP EMERGENCY

Hi guys im a media student and this year in a levels we had to make start credits of a film... i would really appreciate if u all like my page and comment on my film as well as share it with ur frnds...
guys i really really urgently need the feedback so pls help me out, ur feedback is part of my course work.. my grade dependss on this


facebook link:(also like this page)
https://www.facebook.com/video/video.php?v=3783234263892&saved


i will be posting youtube like once its uploaded

thanku so much and pls help me out!!

i need more ppl to go and comment pls it wont take too long!!!