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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mayapari

we understand dr!!!!!
ALL THE VERY BEST😊
do well...

thanx dear🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
no probs dear...
All the best...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely part dear.
Pls continue soon.
Precap seems very interesting.
Thanx for pm dear.

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Posted: 13 years ago
All da best for yr exam dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Just came across this.
Will read all parts and comment.
Seems interesting dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
all the best for ur exams...
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Nice updates 👏
good luck for ur exams...
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVE ALWAYS WINS

CHAPTER 18


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mayank:now plz stop fighting and get ready for the ceremony as it is about to start...

Both glares again at each other and leaves the place...they soon got ready and came out...geet wore red colored sari in whch she looked exactly like a red rose..she looked very pretty in that color and every one's gaze automatically shifted to geet..




at the same time maan entered the hall wearing black suit and he is nt lookng less than a prince..
Every girl over there started drooling over him..they were dyng to gain hs single gaze bt disappointing them maan made his way straight to the stage where mayank and nupur waiting for them...




here geet also started heading towards the stage...both are on their way to steps whch were at the very middle of the stage..maan is coming from one side and geet from opposite direction...they didn't saw each other and when they are about to climb the steps both again bumped in to each other..maan automatically held geet in his embrace to save her from falling as if it has become his regular activity...


Both lost in each other not caring about the surroundings and even forgot that they are in the middle of the hall where everyone over there can have clear view of them..maan and geet are totally lost in each other's eyes..they came to their senses when sid came there smiling and patted maan's shoulder...both adjusted themselves as if ntng happened there..finally they are back to their normal jagda mode...

Maan:lagtha hai tumhare aankhon ka treatment karwana padega..tumhe toh kuch diktha hi nahi isiliye jab dekho kisi na kisi se takra jaathi ho...
[i thnk u need treatment for ur eyes..u cant see anythng and always bumps with someone or the other]

geet makes golgappe face and glares at him...

Geet:accha! Aapke bhi bade bade aankhein hai na..istmal(use) kyun nahi karthe hai..muje toh badi ankhein dikhate hai..ab kya hua?
[oh really!what happened to ur big big eyes?why dont u use them?]


maan:tumse toh baat karna hi bekaar hai..
[it's waste to talk anythng with u]

geet:muje bhi koi shouq nahi hai aap jaise SADU se baat karne ka..
[I too don't have any interest in arguing with you]


maan glares at her ..
'kya kaha tumne?'

geet:wahi jo aapne suna..sadu(stresses)
[i said the same which u listened just now...sadu]

everyone present there forgot that they are in some ceremony and started enjoying their tom and jerry fight..everyone over there were giggling and laughing at them but our tom and jerry is in no mood to stop their fight..

Sid who also was giggling at them finally tries to stop them as mayank signalled him to do..both mayank and nupur stood there makng cry face almost...

Sid after making lot of efforts finally suceeded in bringing maan and geet on to the stage but he could not able to stop their glaring sessions whch were gng on continuosly..in between ths mayank and nupur exchanged rings and they are engaged now..

Savitri devi who didn't know that she's making way for tom and jerry to start their fight again asked them to distribute sweets to everyone there as mayur are engaged nw...maaneet at a time held the thali(plate) and literally grabbed it from her..they both forgot about sweets and concentrated on their plate fight nt forgettng to glare at each other..

Maan pulled the plate once and so did geet..in this process both lost control over the plate and it fell on aadi's head who was standing down the stage just near them unfortunately..
Bechara started crying in pain while maaneet asked for sorry..and ha without ignoring their glaring session..

Present:

meera burst out laughing loud after listening how horrible was their first meeting...geet felt embarassed when nupur and meera teased her..

Meera:omg geet seriously u guys are too much..itna ladthe the tum dono..dekke toh aisa lagthi hi nahi ki tumlog lad bhi sakthe ho..aur maan..mera matlab hamare jijaji ko toh sadu banadiya tumne..
And continued laughing holding her stomach..
[OMG! You guys are too much..i never thought that you guys could fight this horribly...and u named maan jiju as sadu..lol]


geet giggles remembering that incident and their childish acts...

Meera:and nupur fir kya huwa?
[and what happened next?]


nupur:hmm..that was just the beginning of world war3..these guys used to fight whenever they meet ignoring the situation and place...they used to search for bahanas to fight..can u believe ye dono phone par bhi ladthe the..no no ladne ke liye phone karthe the ek doosre ko...

There was only one week for our wedding preparations to start...at that time bhai and geet reached the stage where they used to blame each other for everythng they ruin in their silly fight..and u know they used to say 'i hate you' to each other daily as if they are wishing gud mrng or gud evng...

I dnt knw what would have the actual budget of my wedding but these guys almost made it double as we used to do everything in double...


Meera looks confused...

Nupur:nahi samji...then listen..

--------flashback-------

khurana mansion is full on busy with arrangements as wedding is gonna held there in a week..savitridevi is pacing here and there not knowing what to finalize first and what not to..sid is also busy with his work assigned to him i.e,decoration work and mandap work,inviting guests along with his dad etc etc..

S.d: offo..itna kaam pada hai..i think i cant manage this all alone..

Maan who came downstairs found his mom confused...

Maan:maa what happened?why are u so tensed..is everythng ok?

S.d:beta tension toh hoga hi na..one week mein shaadi hai and so many things are yet to be finalised..iam really confused..samaj mein nahi aaraha hai ki kya karu aur kya na karu...aur aaj designer ke paas bhi toh jaana hai mayank aur nupur kn lekar..offo bhagwan mein kya karu...

Maan:maa..maa...maa relax..just calm down..sab kuch hojayega..and dnt worry i'll accompany mayur to designer..you just sit here and i'll do everything whatever you say..

Savitridevi smiles at her concerned son..

'ok beta..u first inform mayank to reach there'says s.d

maan starts heading towards the main door while dailing mayank's number..

Here our express geet is entering the mansion with her high speed unware of the fact that she's going to have an encounter with her favourite enemy..and so maan...

Asusual both bumped in to each other and this time geet did not fall but stood like sherni glaring at maan..maan also thought that he had escaped from his regular duty of saving her from falling...

'i hate you' is the first thing that came out from her soft lips while glaring..

'i hate u too'maan also said very sweetly...

Geet:aap dekkar nahi jaa sakthe the?aapke do golgappe jaise aankho ko bank locker mein chupadiya hai kya?if u dont want to use them then y dont you donate them to some needed people..atleast they use them...
[cant u see?if u dnt want to use ur eyes then y dnt u donate them to someone else..atleast they'l be helpful to them]


maan:o kya hai na jab ek chalti firti disaster saamne hoti toh aankhein hokar bhi kuch nahi kar pathe..how can i see the disaster who always assault on me with her high speed..

Geet:aap ne muje disaster kaha??
[u called me disaster?]


maan:koi shaq?
[any doubt?]

geet:aap...aap...aap ha dust danav ho..jo sabko tang kartha rehtha hai..

Before maan could say anythng nakul comes there with terrified expressions and calls them..'maan sir..geet didi'

'kya hai?'both shouts in unison...

'savitri ma'm wants to see u both in her room nw' says in one go and literally runs from there...

Both started to her room pushing each other and ran fast as if they are participating in a running race...

'ha maa' 'ji aunty' both says at a time..

Maan and geet gives ignoring look to each other and looked at savitri devi who is standing there with a file in her hand...
Savitri devi nods her head in disbelief when she noticed their childish behaviour..

'maan did u inform mayank?'asks s.d

that's when maan remembers that he actually went to call mayank but ended up in fighting with geet..

'maa..wo...mein'maan fumbles...

'And geet what abt u? Did u inform nupur?'

geet gives weak smile while nodding in no...

S.d:i knew it..jab tum dono ko ladne se fursat mile tab karenge na..primary school ke bacche bhi itna nahi ladthe honge..anyways i informed them to reach there directly and u two plz stop ur fight and go there..i would hav sent sid and riddhima bt they r busy somewhere..so i dnt hav other option..u keep ur fights aside and help them..

Geet:par aunty mein ne kya kiya?pehle isne shuru kiya hai..

Maan:kya kaha tumne?mein..tum toh boli baali bachi ho na..maa pata hai isne muje dustdanav kaha..

Geet:aur aapne?aapne toh...

'bas..bas..ab shuru mat hojao tumdono..take ths file with you as it have some designs of nupur's attire..and plz no ladayi now..

She kept the file on table and left the place as she have to attend the call..

Again both holds it at the same time..maan pulls it and then geet pulls it..

Maan..then geet

maan..then geet

finally both got that file as it is of two pieces now...

Both made golgappe face and started blaming each other..

Geet:sab aapki wajah se..
[it's all becoz of u]


maan:nahi sab tumhari wajah se..
Kisne kaha file pull karne ke liye..


Geet:aur aapse kisne kaha..mein le rahi thi na aapko haat lagane ki kya zaroorat thi..faad diya na aapne..ab jakar kahiye aunty ji se muje toh kuch nahi pata..
[and who said u to snatch it frm me..i was takng it na..u teared it..nw u go and admit ur mistake..i dnt knw anythng]

maan:ha tumhe toh kuch nahi pata..sirf ye pata hai ki mujse jagda kesa karna hai..jagdalu kahinki..
[ha u dnt knw anythng except the ways to fight with me]

geet:jagdalu kaha aapne muje..aap sadu donkey monkey sab kuch ho..aur ha poore ke poore dustdanav jo harwaqt muj jaisi masoom ko tang kartha rehtha hai..

Maan:tum..

'maan geet abhi tak nahi gaye tum dono'shouted s.d

maan:muje tum jaisi pagal ke saath nahi jaana hai..
[i dnt want to go with a mad girl like u]


geet:muje bhi aap jaise dust danav ke saath nahi jaana hai..

'maan geet' s.d shouts again...

'ha maa ja hi rahe the' says maan..

As they are nt left with other option both headed no no started their running competition to reach the car..

Precap:
maaneet jagda again at desiginer's place..
Where is file geet?
Oops!ab kya kare?

HII friends this is part 18. hope u all like it..
sorry for not updating these many days... my net is not working n i am typing through mobile.. so plz forgive me... i will try to update regularly...

plz hit LIKE n do COMMENT..

love
-mona 😉
Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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EDITED~~
mona... 🤗
yaar i just loved the update very very very much...
mera saara tension dur hogaya n i felt so relaxed after reading this update...
omg.. kitna jagda karte hain yaar in dono ne...
really primary school kids are better than them...
hehehe dhustdanav n chalti phirti disaster... 😆😆
ufff my head is spinning after seeing ther jagda...
poor mayur guests came to their engagement but enjoying maneet's t n j fight...
yaar mujhe ek baat samaj mein nahi aya ki how they fell in love.. 😕
poor file do tukda hogaya... ab designs ka kya hoga...
hahaha double budget... omg... in dono ki wajah se saara kaam double time karna pada...
ab shaadi ka din kya hoga... hope they wont fight during saath pheras... 😆😆🤣
bechara panditji darr jaate inn dono ko dekkar...
i am imagining jab maneet ki shadi hogi n if same panditji comes... he will be hairan seeing maneet... he will scrach his head how on earth they both are getting married... 🤣🤣
continue soon dear...
love u... muahhh

Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago

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