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sujana

@sujana9

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Posted: 13 years ago

#841

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dinka chika !!!!! yippee !!!!!!! first to comment 😆

aditi dii awww wat an update faddu man i am again in new love wid dis update each update has my love muaaah...<3😉

cmg to update omg rey made kria supply tea hmmm "SPL NAA"😉

ND neha knowing it hahaah wats d matter lol

nd at last he likes d name MONSTER shit kriyansh r perfectly majical :)

he liking her inside out omg atlast sumthing is happening after like ages wow

nd last hug EEPS it was EPIC love it ❤️

heknows dat he loves her omg i am "DEAD"

THNX FOR D PM

I AM so happy shoppy ab

ur writing skills shuld i say a word 👏👏👏👏

rey is cute nd kria is wildly cute love dem !!!!!!

Edited by sujucoolstar - 13 years ago

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Himani

@Infinities

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#842

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Mummy calling 😭 , and tu MARRJAA , m wapas aayi FB pe , tu bhaag gayi !! 😡
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Awww Kria in her pehla pehla pyaar mood...I am so loving her laila avatar <3 ! She is just soo adorable !!

I loved the way you described the peaceful ambiance and the calm environment ...where Kria"S feelings are nurturing ...
Awww Kria was blushing when the waiter took Rey"S name ... hayeee , she is just beyond cuteness ...

Awww I just5 love KriSha <3 ... Loved the leg pulling session of Neha 😆. They never showed the beautiful relationship between Kria and Neha ... The special bond of friendship that they share... you scultped it so damn beautifully in this story ... absoutely love these too <3...

Hayyeee Reyu too is slowly and gradually changing ... He has started feeling for Kria...eeepsss!!! Rather than risking his life and torturing himself till death , he is trying to feel the essence of love... he is changing ...hayeee ... Adi you words are pure magic...

KriYaansh can feel eachothers presence ...thats soo pleasing... pure eternal love ...!! Hayyeee... Monster , I already love that name , its so cute , Reyu is definately the world"S cutest monster <3

Awww I love the way Kria was ordering Rey ...like he is her own possesion (He surely is😆)
And Rey is a sweetheart ...awww woh maan gaya !!! Hayyee mera jaanu kria ko naa kaise kehta 😳

I loved the food court scene <3
Awww I just love Kriya"S innocence ... and Rey , hayee he is fida over her <3 ...loved the way Kria made him eat a bit , and than Kira ran away ...and hayyee Reyu laughed ...Shit these 2 are soo dreamy ... Love em ... 😍

Hayyeee Reyu admiring her dance...he so loves her ...jhalla...uske harr action se dikhta hai !!
OMG !!! Rey DANCED !!!! For Kria ...so that she doesn"T feels hurt ...he broke his bars and took a step to life...hayyee that was so heavenly... And Kria had teary eyes , tears of happiness for Reyu!! She soo loves her !! Unconditionally and endlessly...
OMG the hug !!! The most beautiful hug ever ... She didnt want Rey to go back to the life where he fought with himself and death ... My Kria and Reyaansh became KriYaansh *DREAMS*

Adi this was the cutest part ever !!
Loved the way you portrayed innocence in their love <3
I , somehow got my KriYaansh back through your FF <3
This part was absoulutely Nirvana !!
Muahz for this part !! ❤️
Love yaa always 🤗

Edited by kriyansh117 - 13 years ago

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Asha

@Zehnaseeb.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#843

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awwiiieee...Kriyaansh r in so much luv with each other... so cute..

their unspoken love was just majical oops megical...

loved it Aditi... n thnx for the pm🤗

Edited by Asha_ArSha - 13 years ago

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Aditi

@NxtRockstar..

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#844

@ SHONA: lolz..I logged out re...warna ye update na likha jata...lolz...you know m bad at multitasking..😆

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chsripriya

@chsripriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#845

awesome i dont know whwere u find the words and thoughts they r just so beautiful and wonderful loved it loved their relationship and rey dance finally he stopped fighting awesome awesome awesome👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 plz update soon and thnx for pm me

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chetna

@crazysky

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#846

it was just awesome gal really loved it
their unspoken love is really awesome

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#847

thanks for the pm and i loved the update :D

Nikki <3

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Preeti ArsHa

@preeti_kreya

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#848

Loved it finaly real n rockstar rey is back. M so happy. Realy lovly update. Please update nxt one fast.

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#849

WWWOOOWWW... 😍 😍 😍

Aditi... u dnt knw how much happy u've made me ryt now... 😍

m sooo hhhaaapppiiieee... 😃 😍

ur update was brilliant... it ws lyk... mind blowing... 👏 👏 👏

i loved it 2 d core... 😃 ❤️

"MONSTER... NYC NAME 4 ME" ... i loved dis part... hehehehe... 😆

& the pics of hotel... the streets... dey wer sooo beautiful... sooo fascinating... dey were... gorgeous... i would also love 2 go at such place... 😍 😉

rey taking spcl care of kria... aawww... 😳

nd kria now no more afraid of her Monster... hehehe... 😆

bt d last part of d story... 😳 in which rey also joined her... kria wid teary eyes...😳 nd hugged him... he also hugged her back... IT WAS MAGICAL... 😳 😍

totally... Megical... ❤️

i loved ur update aditi... 👏 i njoyed it 2 d fullest... 😃 whn ur update ended... jst 1 word cameout of my lips... "WOW" ... 👏 👏

eagerly waiting 4 ur next update... 😉

p.s. - PLZZZ... PLZZZ... PLZZZ...

is baar zyada late mat karna... 😒 plz next week tak update kar dena... plzzz plzzz plzzz aditi... 😭 tumhare updates padhne k liye zyada w8 nahi ho paata... 😭 😭plzzz... 😭 😭 😭