MGFF Sajna Tera Pyar Mein Note 114 dt 25/02 - Page 20

just read it amazing and suspenseful

it was just awesome

Awesum ff! Ad me in ur pm list, update sn

till part 7
wow so nice FF...
so twas Maan and Geet...
Geet was married to a 40 year old man?
and her dad is in coma...
Maan got engaged and married Supriti thinking that he spent the night with her and how the hell did Supriti get pregnant?
Sargam is whose daughter?
theres something fishy...
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...
and plz pm me...
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Originally posted by: spvd

till part 7
wow so nice FF...
so twas Maan and Geet...
Geet was married to a 40 year old man?
and her dad is in coma...
Maan got engaged and married Supriti thinking that he spent the night with her and how the hell did Supriti get pregnant?
Sargam is whose daughter?
theres something fishy...
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...
and plz pm me...
sent the buddy invite...

Thanks for comment

hi very thrilled update... waiting for next part

waiting for the update dear.

Originally posted by: dolly10

waiting for the update dear.

please update soon.

I complete half of update but not getting time to complete .But i tried my level best to update today if i get time to right left part , otherwise tomorrow sure..

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Part 8

Pari still engrossed in memories of her sister bitter past and continuously sobbing ,that she could not able do anything for her sister .who was not her only elder sister but friend , guide and mother .Vicky never even in nightmare thinks that anything liked happened to their geet and that to bcoz his brother .whose anger is biggest enemy of him which always create troubles in relationships but such low things .How can he ? Arjun and Annie who knows both side of story can't believe who these two people lived for others and if supriti live today , they definitely killed with their bare hands .

But some one is their who don't know what to do know he is Maan Singh Khurana , whom he blamed and gave punishment supriti to whom he believed and bcoz of her he lived in guilt of thing of mistake which he never done , fate who played with them or himself. Yes why he blamed others and fate he did not commit mistake 5 years ago but did sin .Yes it is sin not to believed on his heart , not on his love , to destroy the life of angel (geet).She is angel who faced everything from his betrayal not only as person whom she loved but as friend to .He never feel so helpless before today .He know what do when supriti told her so called truth about that night that his next step will be he have to marry with her whatever it may result in future .But today from whom he asked obliges Geet who was no more , their child is he have right to called their child No its her , only her who lost life before see this world ? whom damit .Is he any right to request for obligy ..NOoo I have no right on them even on their Maaafi ...Nooo

All came out from their thoughts with his scream ...Sacred with the scene from which is in their front .Blood is endlessly oozing out from maan hand his grip on that sharp of statute with every second .He want to end himself today but cann't responsibility of Dadi and his princess Sargam .He already killed two angels but not again to be reason misery of her princess. He have to live with the burden of this sin .This is his punishment live as murder and rapist .

Arjun tried to remove his hand from statute but today Maan (jaggy wonder when he is )not in mood to listen anyone who show mercy on him and smacked his hand left the store room without caring about his hand .He take out his bike and ride towards cliff . As reached the cliff he take out all his anger and frustration by shouting and look towards the sky like he is busying to find geet and her child in them so that he can request them to gave him punishment for his sins .He continuously hit his wounded hand on stones .After hours when he lost last tit 'bit of energy he sit on cliff and gave word to his SIN .

Main bewafa, main bekadar, maine tera dil toda

what pain Geet had bear when he announced his engagement with supriti is reflected in his mind . He remember her expression when she attend their engagement she masked with smile but it not reaches to her eyes .

Mera bhi dil toota magar, tujkho nahin iski khabar

Flashback of their marriage , when she gave words to her selfless may be unnoticed from everyone but not from him , tears roll down from eyes what that beautiful words they are :

Lelun Balayein Teri Sabhi, Dhedun Tujhe Main Apni Khushi,,
Maangu Dua Main Rab Se Yehi, Tu Khush Rahe,
Koi Chaahat Rahe Na Adhoori, Teri Saari Tamana Ho Puri,

Teri yaad mein dil thaamkar tadpoonga main saari umar Teri yaad mein dil thaamkar tadpoonga main saari umar

Yes this is only punishment he deserve to live without them with burden of sin on his soul.

Duniya ke sab aashiqon ki todi hai sab maine rasme Duniya ke sab aashiqon ki todi hai sab maine rasme

He is like black spot on name of lovers , He never trust on his love never on person whom he claimed that he loved her .If he never trust on his love , if he then she will be with him .But he said hurtful words to her on believing some stupid papers and her(supriti)

Beche hai sab apne vaade, bechi hai sab apni kasme
Bechi hai sab apni kasme

He never fulfilled his promises being as lover not even as friend .He shutters all her dreams like every girl have of her age with her love , first kiss , first night ..

Main bewafa, main bekadar, maine tera dil toda
Mera bhi dil toota magar, tujkho nahin iski khabar
Teri yaad mein dil thaamkar tadpoonga main saari umar

Yeh pyaar ishq aur mohabbat kya hai yeh ab maine jaana
Vaapas magar kaise aaye guzra hua voh zamaana
Guzra hua voh zamaana

Today he gets to know true meaning of love no its not

Pyaar ke lafoza (words )ke do hi aarth hota hai

Dil aaye matlab Dil Gaaye

(Refer part 3)

His definition of pyaar is not true its sound like more business deal .Pyaar kae ek hi aarth hai sirf dena sirf dena bina koi umeed bina koi arooz

Main bewafa, main bekadar, maine tera dil toda
Mera bhi dil toota magar, tujkho nahin iski khabar
Teri yaad mein dil thaamkar tadpoonga main saari umar

He always come their when he feel restless and want to share his happiness and problem with geet .Yes he feel her presence and no one is their to disturb him .It is his little world only his little world .But today someone also present who witness all this and tried to read them reason of pain in his eyes .when he was in sub conscious mind she clear his wounds and bandaged and left from their for waiting the storm that will be happened after two days .

After two days In KM

DM : Arjun Vicky where is Maan ? Sargam missing him .

Arjun : DM , he is out Delhi for business project .

DM : Which project arjun ? From two days i am not listening this he is out Delhi .Be specific which place he is ? why he phone is off ?

Arjun : Even i don't know DM he just inform me that he is going out of delhi for some business project .

DM : Fine and left the place

Pari : Maan Singh khurana kuch bhi kar le apne gunah sae bhaag nhi sakte .

Arjun : Pari please ..

Pari : Ohh sorry Arjun Bhai how can say any word to your friend and BIL .Still you believe he is right after knowing whole truth .

Annie : Pari thats not whole truth

Vicky : Then Annie what is truth .You still believe that he is right after knowing what he had done with geet Kaho na he shout back

Arjun : Vicky and Pari first listen to us then you both decide who is wrong

Vicky : Shout

Arjun and Annie told them Maan not remember anything about that night bcoz of alchol and how Supriti call him in morning told to meet him once before going to pune and told that she was with him at night and request not discussed with anyone .Otherwise it result tiff between families .Bcoz of this only maan decided to married her even he is in love with geet going to propose after coming back from pune .How supriti show him pregnancy reports to him on bachelor party eve .

Arjun : Pari and Vicky they were only friends not share any relationship of husband 'wife .Its supriti who played game with them not maan .All mistake of supriti not Maan .He is just dice of game like geet .

Annie : Pari how can bro killed their own child when he does not know anything about geet pregnancy .Its their fate nothing more .Bro ki koi galti nhi hai pari bro ki koi galti nhi hai start crying .

Arjun support her .

Vicky and Pari shocked after listening Maan side story and doesn't believe how can supriti do this how can

Pari : Geet di believe is always right , that maan veerji doesn't remember anything about that night .If he is then he never think once to set aside his love (supriti as per geet ) over his friendship( geet )

But

Vicky : But kya pari ?

Pari : Thats mean sargam is not daughter of Maan veerji

Maan : Nooops She is mine daughter .Only daughter of Maan Singh Khurana .

Maan enters when pari questioned about sargam .Pari I know I commit sin and I am ready for any kind of punishment but dare you speak any word against my daughter .Dare you its first and last warning of mine

Pari : Maan veerji I doesn't mean that .

Maan : Glare her I warned you and left for sargam room .

Precap :

Maan : Adi I want to know everything about SSK associates and its CEO G .Gupta within two hours and offer her twice of market price.I want that house at any cost .Is that clear to you. How all are waiting for Maaneet first meeting? ..😉

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