FF: LOVE HAPPENS ONCE *Important Note Pg 103*

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Nikvi29

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Posted: 14 years ago

#111

Amazing update Nafisa
Sid is expert of stealing😆
good he got the diary.
Abhay n piya fight love it
love cute arrogant abhay and love this piya in ur FF
but Abhay is so mean.
waiting for the next update
precap eagerly waiting for .
please continue soon
thanks for the pm.

Edited by shivanipandit29 - 14 years ago

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#112

Nice update Nafisa... I love sadu arrogant Abhay 😎

I want to slap him and next minute I feel like drooling over him again 😛 😆 ☺️

anyways, i liked how you are writing the flashback from Pia's diary...nice...keep going one. and Sid's stealing was really good 😆

Thanks for the PM dear 😳

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Akshita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#113

Amazing dr... sid is a thief...
Loved abhay pia
When will d present start ...
Cont soin n thanks 4 d pm

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lamha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#114

flora!

update...

for pm!

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flora212

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Posted: 14 years ago

#115

Guys board exams chal raha hai! So update exams ki baad hi milega. SORRY!
-NAFISA

Edited by flora212 - 14 years ago

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flora212

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Posted: 14 years ago

#116

Chapter 4(1)

PIA P.O.V( continuing)

Abhay bought me in a tent and throws me on the bed harshly. I winced in pain. WHAT THE HELL?? He dont know how to behave, IDIOT!
My back is paining now badly!
A nurse came and asked me to sit straight but i could not ,my back pains!
The nurse asked me how I fell?
I couldnt say anything and looked at abhay who was glaring at me from 6 feet away. As the nurse turns towards abhay, he began to walk away!!
The nurse called him and he stoped but didnt turn...WHAT A ATITUDE, UFF!
The nurse asked- sir...umm...pls can u say mam ke saat kya hua hai?
Abhay turned this time and looked at me directly with smirk, then he looked at nurse with innocent smile and said' Oh what can i say! Madamji is blind...'
I was hell shocked at his coment!!
The nurse shocked- WHAT?? How? But she can see...
Abhay scrastly- oh pls dont say that! That is main problem...she seems to see but she blind!
The nurse- WHAT RUBBISH?? R U MAD!
Abhay cleverly- aha...I am saying the truth! Ok...I am telling u how many times she has fall down.
I got nervous...what he is going to tell now?
Abhay started' U know sister, when she fell down for first time in her life...when she was 3 years old!'
What?? I was hell shocked...what is he saying?
I tried to protest but he inturrepted me' And secondly she fell from her bike when she was 5 years old...and then when she fell I dont know! Cause I went to Italy. And now I came back and again she fell...and u know what yesterday she fell two times on floor, first she slipped by a banana skin and then she stepped on my foot and fell down...LOOK I TOLD U SHE IS BLIND!'
The nurse was looking all confused and was going to say something but I inturrepted.
I shouted- LIE!! He is mad, he is crazy! DONT LISTEN TO HIM...ACTUALLY...
I was about to say that abhay fell me down while shooting but before that he inturrepted again.
Abhay scrastly- sister...pls put a tape on her mouth otherwise she will eat ur head. And I am going, u take care of her!
I yelled- wait! What do u know about me ha? Kya samaj ti ho tum apne apko...mere bere me bakwas kar rahi ho!
I turned to the nurse- listen sister, he is a cyco. To hide his own fault he is making stories!
I again turned to abhay- And u RIACHAND! U bloody...r u my father that u r saying that i fell from my bike?? And the most importantly DO U KNOW ME? AND DO I KNOW U? U Bloody Riachand!
Abhay snapped back- shut up ugly!
I retorted angrily- u shut up! Making stories of ur own...huh!
The nurse shouted- Stop of u both!
I became quite at once...
Now the nurse turned towards abhay angrily' Dont u know how to behave with girls? Or sach sach batao kese giri hai yeh ladki! Warna panchi madam ko bulaungi...'
Hearing panchi name abhay mouth became dry. Abhay muttered under his breath' UFF...YEH MOTI'
The nurse asked' What did u say?'.
Abhay trickly' umm...nothing! Ok i am telling u she fell down while...while...while walking!'
I glared at abhay...
The nurse surprised- how??
Abhay thinkingly- how...how? Yeh, she was wearing high heals so triped off.
The nurse was confused and abhay grinned.
I could not take anymore, I was burning full of rage!!
Before I would speak one more wore, abhay said' Ok sister! U TAKE CARE OF HER I NEED TO GO NOW'.
He started leaving now but before exiting he turned looked at me and gave a cunning smile and left.

I was burning like fire and this nurse add some fuel.
The nurse smiled- oh BOYFRIEND HA??
I yelled- what rubbish? NO WAY!!
The nurse smirked- no problem...ho jayga!
I got confused at her statement- what? Kaya hogayga!
Nurse gigled- hmm...LOVE! Payar hogayga...
I got mad at her and shouted' Shut up ok! Dont take the name of the sadu!'
The nurse laughed loudly.

...

It has been evening and i was ordered to take rest as my back had still some pain. This all due to that bloody idiot!!
I could not even shoot that day and panchi was angry at abhay...He literely ruin the first day of my shooting!
WHAT IS HIS PROBLEM???
He insulted me today two times. Firstly he thrown me infront of everyone and then saying those stupid rubbish words...phew...anyway I am sitting on the bed.
I was reading a magazine and suddenly it slipped from my hand and fell down.
Oh shit...I thought...now how i will pick it up!!
And most importantly i could not bend down as my back starts paining again.
WHAT SHOULD I WOULD DO NOW???

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Edited by flora212 - 14 years ago

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flora212

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Posted: 14 years ago

#117

Chapter 4(2)

After a lot of struggling I decided to pick it up myself. I bendend slightly and suddenly I felt my back tightens and suddenly felt a severe pain and lost my control. I was nearly fell down and closed my eyes in fear...
And then i could feel a pair of arms around my waist. I slowly opend my eyes and saw the deep sparking blue eyes!!
Abhay...he has saved me from falling!
I got lost in his eyes...It was so hypotenic!
And suddenly I could see a change in his expression...his eyes was telling a different emotion!
And i could not tell what was that??
I could feel his hot breaths on my face.
Suddenly he leaned towards me, and his eyes was on my lips!!!
I unknowingly closed my eyes and my heart was thumping like thunder...I didnt know what was happening to me!
His lips were just a inch away...and then I could feel his soft cold lips on mine!
My body was creating firewrks and I dont know when this soft kiss turned into a hot passonate kiss...he went...

(PIA P.O.V ends)

Suddenly sid mobile rang,
Sid cursed- oh shit! What the hell? Call ko abhi anatha! Kitni interesting point pe agayi thi! UFF...

Sid iritatedly picked the phone' Hello...'

He could hear a crying voice and he realised it was haseena.
Sid worried- momma r u alright?
Haseena crying- sid abhay...abhay! His condition becoming worse now!
Sid panicked- what? What happened to him now ?
Haseena sobbing- doctor said his heart beat is becoming low!! Last night he was breathing heavily and most of time he was panicking to breath...doctor said that it is long time he is in coma! And he could die in...
Sid inturrepted shouting- No mom...nothing will happen to abhay!
Haseena crying angrily- this is all due to that girl that my son is in this condition!!
Sid thinks' no mom,we cannot say right now anything...but I know that pia will bring abhay back!'
Sid to haseena- Dont worry mom...everything would be fine!
...

In the morning, Pia is lying on her stomach on the bed. She was crying as she was remembering her moments with abhay. And most importantly her beloved diary is missing.
Suddenly her mobile rang, it was kabir...
Pia rubbed her tears.
Pia in broken tone- hello!
Kabir excitedly- hello pia how r u?
Pia gloomly- fine.
Kabir worried- pia r u alright?? U sounds sad!
Pia strictly- yes i am alright...why did u call me?
Kabir was shocked at he question as she never talk to him like this.
Kabir hesitantly- pia...I was saying that if we go out fr dinner today...
Pia sternly- No...I AM BUSY!
Saying this pia cut the call, tears spill in her eyes again. She is missing abhay like hell since last evening when sid asked her about her love.
Suddenly pia thought' STOP IT PIA...HE HATES U! Then why r u crying fr him? He is someone else...he loved alina and may be married to her by now. FORGET HIM PIA!! He even may be doesnt remembers u...STOP CRYING FR HIM!'.
But her heart never listens to her mind. For few days she is feeling something is wrong. Her heart still loves abhay and will forever...but abhay never loved her. They were only good friends. But now may be they r not even friends and she knows well why??
...

At night,Sid is walking to and fro in his room. He is in deep thought about abhay. What he is going to do? How he will bring his funny sadu abhay?
But one thing he doesnt understand if abhay loves pia then what was alina?
Anyways, he need to find more about pia...thinking this sid ran to diary kept on the table.
Sid to himself' oh shit...i stopped at a very interesting point...let me read it!'
Saying this sid sit on the bed and opened the diary and began to read where he had stopped.

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Edited by flora212 - 14 years ago

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flora212

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Posted: 14 years ago

#118

Chapter 4(3)

Sid began to read.

PIA P.O.V (in the diary)

...I dont know when this soft kiss turned into hot pasonate kiss, he went near my neak and gave wet trails. I was getting dizzy under his touches. I totaly lost my control...I just only felt my desires!!!
As his arms were around my waist, he squeezed it...he rubbed his lips with mine...we rested our head with eachother breathing heavily.

Suddenly there was knock on the door and we both came to presence.
It was misha.We both were shocked and looked at eachother.
Misha jaw was dropped and was looking at us curously. I was totaly embrased while abhay was in shocked state.
Misha scrastily- hey dude! R u practising some hot romantic scenes with ur heroine? GOOD GOOD...VERY GOOD CAUSE BIRDIE IS PLANNING TO MAKE SOME HOT SCENES!!
Abhay was very much confused and got up from the bed without looking at me. I was just thinking what happened just now!!!

Abhay passed misha and was about to leave...but misha blocked his way...

Misha with smirk- wait dude...tell me for how long u were doing romance...I mean tougue twister compitition!!
Abhay gritted his teeth- SHUT UP AND GET LOST!!
Misha smiling- oh come on! Tell me...
Abhay angrily- miissha get away from my way!
Misha smirks- nope...first tell me what were u doing?
Abhay pushed misha and went away from there.

Now...misha was looking at me with questioning eyes.
Misha came and sat near me and said' So princess, how was ur prince kiss?'
I was blushing hard but also angry.
I snapped back' Shut up misha! Dont dare to talk about that...'
Misha scrastily' oho...so u enjoyed it...ha!'
I was annoyed ' What rubbish! Nothing like that...ok! Now pls leave me alone!'
Misha shurgged- ok as u wish...

Misha went from there. I was lost in my thoughts. I dont know what made me to let him kiss me??
But personally, i felt pleasure in that kiss...when I was in his arms I felt secured!! I just wanted in his arms like this forever...but I didnt undestand that time that I was actually falling for him.

But...u know sweetheart...the thing which i mostly love I never got it in my life...never!! And same thing happened this time also...I love abhay more then my life but I didnt know he belong to someone else...
Moreover, I lost his friendship...sigh...maybe fate never want us to be togather!!!!
...

PRECAPE:- PIA IS IN DANGER...

Note- guys dont confuse the precape...its from past not present...

Edited by flora212 - 14 years ago

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Romita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#119

Awesome update nafisa.
first part was hillarious. Loved it dear.
omg abhiya kissed. It was really hot.
I loved misha's comment.
Hope abhay recovers soon.
Beautiful update dear.
pls continue soon and thanks for the pm.

Edited by Rmuk - 14 years ago