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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys😊
WARNING:Sad Os alert.Buts thats life right?Kabhi Khushi😃 Kabhi Gam😭
Anyway hope you guys like this..
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She slowly pushed the door open and took a look at his room. Her eyes moved from one object to another. There was nothing so special about the contents of the room. Everything there was "his" and that was what she loved about them. She saw his guitar, dusty due to his ignorance. It was hung right next to his photo which was placed right above this bedstand. He was smiling at her from the photo, his eyes twinkling. It has been long since she had seen that twinkle in his eyes. It was all her fault. And she was determined to fix it. She took a few steps forward as if being near the photo will give her the feeling of being near him. But she knew that it was of no use. Experience had taught her that much. She shivered as she remembered the times when that was all she could do.

She was Maanvi Chaudary. Cancer surviver. And he was Virat Vadhera. Her soul. Her soul which she had somehow managed to lose while she was busy fighting for her life. She had lied to, threatened and hurt him. All for his good. She longed for him to leave her, go back to Maya and be happy. She had tried to ignore her treacherous heart, by telling him continuously that he was nothing to her. But somewhere inside she knew that these words would have no effect on his love for her. She could see the love in his eyes which was enough to make it extremely hard for her to keep her feelings under check. But she never let it show, literally screaming at him when he dared to talk to her. Those were the first few months of her treatment. Then she became too weak to scream, to lie. He never stopped visiting her, coming at least four times a week. He used to sit next to her, sometimes trying to hold her hand in his. She used to pull her hand back as if burned by his touch. The silent plea in his eyes had shook her to the core. She spent her sleepless nights thinking about about what he would do without her. How many times had she woken up hearing his sobs? She had closed her eyes immediately not wanting him to know that she saw.It was during one among such moments that she decided that she will fight this disease and win just so that she could tell him that she loves him. Now she was in his house, his room so that she can tell those 3 magical words to him.

She had talked to Jeevika di, Jiju and Virat's mother. She explained to them everything that happened between her and Virat. All three of them wanted Virat and her to be happy. They deserved the happiness, after almost one year of mental torture. Her's di's reaction was what had really made her happy. She had hugged Maanvi and told her that she had taken the right decision. Then after hastily wiping her tears she sent Maanvi to Virat's room and hurried off to call Virat and tell him that Maanvi was waiting for him.

Maanvi sat down on his bed, feeling a bit tired. She grabbed his pillow and hugged it to herself inhaling his scent. Suddenly she felt a disturbance in the atmosphere. It had become very hot.

Flash

Virat was sitting near her, his head bent down. His face was covered by his hands. His body was shivering due to sobs. "Maanvi", he whispered. Maanvi was in shock. How did he enter without her noticing? Was she hallucinating? Gently she kept a hand on Virat's shoulder. "Virat?" she asked. He showed no sign of hearing that.

Flash

Virat was standing near the mirror now. He was dressed in a completely different set of clothes. As she watched he took out a photo of her from a drawer. He watched it for a few minutes and then held it against his heart. He closed his eyes as if he was the happiest man in the world.

She realized that it was not just her who relied on photos at times.

Flash

He was sitting right behind her, his legs almost touching her. He leaned against the bedstand propped up with a pillow and was staring at his phone. She inched closer to him. He still showed no sign of knowing that she was near him. He was reading her previous messages with tear filled eyes. Maanvi felt herself tear up, something which she hated.

Suddenly the vision broke and she heard a phone ringing somewhere downstairs. Virat was no longer with her but the effect of the vision somehow still lingered. She didn't think it was her hallucination anymore. It seemed real. Things which had really happened.

The door burst open, distracting her. Jeevika di was standing there. She was looking as pale as a sheet of paper, her eyes were bloodshot and she gripped the door for support. Maanvi immediately rushed towards her to provide her with support. Jeevika pushed Maanvi's hands away and cupped her face with her hands.

"Maanvi..Virat.." she whispered ,struggling to draw breath.

Maanvi couldn't speak. She felt her breathing stop.

"had an accident.." Jeevika somehow managed to finish. She didn't now how Maanvi was going to cope up. It seemed like a serious accident. Her devar...

Maanvi's world was spinning. She could feel the change in her breathing pattern. This couldn't be happening to them. They had suffered too much to have their day of happiness smashed into bits. Suddenly her shock changed to anger and determination. She would not let fate come between him and her again. She had defeated fate once. Now it was his turn. And she knew that he would succeed. After all he was her partner.

"Which hospital?", she asked.

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I really tried not to make the ending sad.After thinking for somtine i realized that our mannu will not give up so soon..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this was extermely superb amazing marvellous...
i know virat and manvi's lovestory will overcome on anything even destiny...
you showed their love is eternal
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I was just preparing some rotten eggs,for you,as u wrote dis sad OS! .😈But now u hav survived!!😆 Thanx for not finishing it wid a tearful ending!! 🤗 Loved it!!! ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I absolutely love it...👍🏼 I was nearly in tears by the end of it...😭.you have portrayed the emotions so well...i have a request...is it possible for u 2 continue this??? i wanna c how mannu confesses her love to her partner...😊

And thnx 4 the pm :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ermmm... where's the 'love' button!!!
this is heartwrenching...
loved it a LOT...
Thanks for sharing with us :)

edited--
please do continue it..
would love to read Manvi's dialogues to an unconscious Viraat,her confession after he gains consciousness,and his reaction..
Edited by jz4amrit - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was very emotional...loved it...

Ps. Pm me if u can for your next work
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Posted: 13 years ago
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fabulous ..Pm me for the next part if there is one 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey
It was totally superbia. I loved it to core. Can u pls don't with this would love to read further. Plzzz it's a request and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww so touching!
if possible would you like to continue this?
and PM me then? :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
Fab 1... And specially the ending...!!!!!

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