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Satina

@Satina

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Great start!! This looks like its going to be good!!

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arshia

@ashvez

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Navin, this is very impressive.And I am so waiting to read the next update.

Congrats for a new story.

Although, Khushi has taken up life with an outward facade, yet she is deeply hurt and loves the Rakshas.

We did had a glimpse of how ASR feels about this news and how he was concerned about this affecting Khushi.It does mean he feels she was innocent and he would be shattered to know if she believes the news.

This is super exciting.Thanks for the PM.

Ash.

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pheonix24

@pheonix24

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

I loved the fact that you kept Khushi's character intact...She is he epitome of life and happiness..Despite all the crap she still manages to find a way to live her life with a sense of optimism.I feel so bad for her,though.Thanks for the PM.Loved both the prologue and the chapter..

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Sarina2012

@Sarina2012

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

I absolutely love ur writing, and this is no different. Awesome storyline and just beautifully depicted emotions. Plse continue. :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Woah! That was one powerful update.

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2934414The uneasy calmness and then the frank distant way Khushi's actions after the marriage was over was written very powerfully.

Great job. Do update soon and PM me.

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

awesome concept so he threw her out and insulted her and his family humiliated her poor khushi and he never found out the truth loved the prologue and the first chapter loved t glad you should he picking up her life and not expecting him to come save her can't wait for her reaction for his wedding thanks for the pm

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bikerider

@bikerider

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

aww i could only go of and on with your other FF
i would like to track this in better way, can you please pm me
thanks

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Your take on 'after arnav-kushi breakup' is quite interesting. I like the strong and smiling(even when she is broken inside) kushi. So whats up with Mr. Raizada. He does care for kushi and usse 'farak padtha hai' as to what kushi will think of him after hearing about the 'breaking news'. So why hasn't he gone after her?...Waiting eagerly for the update..

Thanks for the pm. Don't forget about updating 'perfection'..

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

so beautifully written. My heart goes to Khushi. You write so well, that i can literally see all scenes ... Please update soon. And i do wish for a happy ending.
I love the fact that Arnav is concerned about what Khushi will think, and I loved the fact that Khushi really thought about dying , but overcame the impulse. Sita has gone through her agnipariksha. !!

Is the newspaper article Shyam's idea?