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Posted: 13 years ago
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Swayam-Sharon ~ My first very own O.S

In the rehearsal hall…

Rey- Remember the other day I told u that u shud listen to your heart..??

Sharon - yYeah…but what about that?

Rey - See Sharon Agar tum Zindagi bhar logon ke kehne aur sochne par apna tym waste karti rahogi toh apni zindagi jee hi nahi paaogi….

Sharon listening with with a glum xpression n the abandoned corridor scene flashes thru her mind….She remembers the tym when Swayam tells her that she herself doesn't know what she wants…

Rey watches her wid a satisfied xpression n then continues….Sharon Zindagi me sachha pyaar har kissi ko nahi milta aur jabhi milta hai tabhi usse apna lena chaiye kyunki once u miss it….its gone foreva….ulta tumhe toh lucky feel karna chaiiye ki tumhare life me tumhe itna pyaar karne waala mila hai….n then Sharon realises Rey's talking bout Kriya….n then Rey's mind runs through his happiest moments wid Kriya….

Abhi mujhe toh yeh tumhe bataane ki zaroorat nahi ki Swayam tumhare liye kya feel karta hai n kahi na kahi ye tum bhi jaanti ho ki wat does hemean to u…

Sharon watches him wid tear streaked eyes…

Rey apologies for making her cry n interfering in their oersonal matter but also says that he had to say something before it is too late..

Just then Swayam enters the rehearsal hall….(drum roll)

Sharon quickly wipes off the tears n returns to her normal self….

Rey- I hope tum iss opportunity ka faaeda uthaogi…

Swayam checks out the files on one of the properties of the rehearsal hall. Meanwhile Sharon is lost in thoughts where she recalls all those happy moments with Swayam….the times when she got her gifts from her secret admirer and the joy and the pleasure on her face, the feeling of superiority which she felt at that moment..!! n then she remembers the moment whn she had to do a lift with Swayam completely blindfolded, n Swayam lifted her with absolute confidence and no hesitance…

Swayam jus stares at her and asks "Sharon! Are you ok!?!"

Sharon "Ha?" She is brought out of her reverie…n then says.." No! I m not okay!! How can I be okay with U constantly auguing with me n behaving cold and indifferent??

Swayam confused and then retorts says "Kyunki Sharon tum hamesha mujhse ek nobody ki tarah baat karti thii aur ho!! Aur tumhaare har baat me mere liye nafrat aur insult rehta hai!!"

Sharon Tum hi toh kehte ho na ki meri aankhein hi tumse baat hi karti hai?? Toh fir??

And then just when Swayam is about to retort Sharon steps forward and hugs him tightly with tears in her eyes… Swayam is shocked n says "Sharon!?!?"

Sharon-" Shh….let me talk today…plz…I've hurt you on every point of my life and have caused you a lot of pain..but today I want to acknowledge all those pains and tears…bcuz I no more can sidetrack n avoid what I feel for you.…I LOVE YOU….

Swayam takes in deep breath and hugs her back tighly and says "AS I LOVE YOU.."👏

N then Sharon "I m so sorry Swayam…I m so sorry for hurting you so much…" Swayam "Shh….dont ruin this moment by apologies…" kisses her forehead while Sharon closes her eyes contently n they hug again….

So guys aaj kal hume imagine karke hi pet bharna padta hai…

Please guys Views!!!😉 That was my first O,s n I m only 14... 😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing OS...luved it...do write more such OS n do pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#3
Beautifully written. You may have added more dialogues for Swayam and Sharon before the confession . But anyways awesome. Keep writing.👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnku guys!!...i wud surely write more...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well written 😊 pls continue writing more
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Posted: 13 years ago
#6
wow gal...u hv dun a hell lot of imagining...right? continue to do so...awesome thinking!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sahi... hai originality mai toh pata nhi kria ke jane ke bad kya hogaya... ab bas yahi hope hai... ki sharon and swayam swaron ban hi jaye...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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exactly!! but CVs are just ignorant bout Swaron!!!! 😡
Edited by gargicool - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#9
wow beautiful..do write more and do PM me when you do so...i really wished if it would have been a bit long...

- Sree
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
sahi hai yaar...hume aaj kal imagine karke hi khush rehna padta hai...and even im 14...chalo company toh mil gayi

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