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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
lovely ud rose,all confussion gone, nice easter treat. it will take some of the pain away from ending of eternal. but us human have such greedy nature can never have enough of a good thing!😃soon as stopped reading want the next chapter time to be here.😊well at least dutta listen to AS and marry N! even nakku going against her ayee. intresting scenario nakku offering herself... will be waiting eagerly for next ud.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
hi rose
wat a update dear👏
all my questions are cleared.thank u😊
waiting for the next update .👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
hi rose very nice ud story is more clear thanxs regards uvi😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
hi rose
thanks for the pm & reply to the comment ,can't thank u enough for starting a new ff . abt confusion its more of a suspense 😊poor dutta had to go through hell on his wedding day but sure of naku will heal the pain .my dear rose u still managed to keep the aura of confusion who was the guy in nakus life 😊naku falling for somebody other than dutta who could that guy be 😆waiting anxiously for the next ud tc 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45

1st chap- gr8 update rose...i guess u'll b writing in 1st person from dutta's POV...hmm so the girl was sups...i thrt it wud b naku cos it sed "ganpati's daughter" bt thn as the shopping scenes came abt i thrt mayb its naku's elder sis roopa (the 1 tht was neva shown agen in the shw) bt turns out its sups who's naku's sis...she seemed greedy like her dad, m hpin naku aint like tht...obv cnt b... seems she mus hav taken her sis place and married dutta n nw 6 months l8r wen evrything thinks things may hav settled down she has returned..probz 2 meet her sis (reminds me of the shw KS...Pia ran of with pushkar..so bani married mr walia...and thn Pia returned)...

2nd chap- nice update rose...i like the way u continued the story of tht day in 1st person bt this time from naku's POV...is this hw the story wil always b updated? wow naku has sum courage 2 put fwd the offer 2 step in2 her sis shoes i thrt mayb AS or sum1 else wud suggest it... oh god she loves sum1 else...lets hpe its nt baji or diggu...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
hi rose
loved the ud ...confusion cleared ...there r many layer to the story 😊we all r waiting it to unfold ...u write awesome luv reading it ...ud soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Hi Rose,
finally all doubts put to rest n cleared the air about supriya n naku's relation. So naku find herself in a luvles marriage, that's an understatement. Dutta fully justified in his rage n naku daring enuf to put conditions for the marriage 😉 She sacrifices her life to save the skin of her family but what? naku too in luv with someone, so is it her past or her present? Surely wil be revealed in the future updates, nevertheless naku still the quintessential sacrifial lamb 😃 Rose, looks like ur in an experimental mood with the options, good goin girl, plzz carry on n soon just like u did b4. Thank u!👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
hey rose

superb update

so this Ff of yours hold great suspense within it but love to read them😛

this part was from nakku's side poor nakku for honour of families and life of her sis she married dutta and lay two conditions and dutta guesses both😉

so supriya is back🤢( it seems me like a movie of jackie saroff , juhi chawla and one other heroine don't know)

supriya ke jaane ke baad may be nakku ke lover ki entry ho jaye 😆 just kidding

lovely update

waiting to see how and who will be the first that feel for his\her other half😉

thanks for pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Baby! Look, I managed to be the last one to comment again *proud muh*😆
"Bikhari khwaashiyen"''hmmm, so it's nakusha's take on her fate! Great, and looks like that when you said that you try to give equal importance to dutta and naku, you were serious! lol
Anyways, coming to the update, none of us like dutta to get into his "self destructive" mode, which he does quite often, yet this habit of his is somewhere infatuating(to me), azeeb hain na. I liked the way naku wondered about dutta's reaction of sups come back, very subtly it underlined the fact, that naku is yet to understand (completely) that behind that stony strong body lies an ultra vulnerable and sensitive heart.
Thank you thank you thank you, for keeping naku educated this time! So she didn't knew that sups loved ravi, though his father knew, is this an indication that naku is not very close to sups. Okay something may be a little out of the way but still''Ganpat, the accountant.😆 Seriously😆
And, this naku. She's NOT AT ALL BHOLI, mauka dekha nahi ki started maroing chance pe dance, "Main karegi aapse shaadi", O hello madam shaadi hai koi halwaa nahi hai, that you said okay no body is eating so main kha leti hai😡. Upar se look at her, she's keeping conditions, fine the first one is understandable, but the second one, I mean, he out of the whole world, needs to be reminded about that, arey paagal ladki, you have no idea how nave your husband is, Hmm actually I doubt that naku intentionally brought up this topic, hinting dutta about their SR, chaalu kahin ki!😡 I feel so jealous, why can't I have a sister like sups.😆
No seriously it was great to see naku reminding that they can't have a "normal marital" relationship, although she had an idea that it's a least possibility, showed the actual status of trust in their relationship'almost nil! She calls him Saab, her signature habit, but an educated girl like her calling him Saab (leaving options like Sir etc.) Is it a liberty you have taken? Which of course is justified, (naku calling dutta anything but saab seems out of question)
Loved the wedding sequence, of course nostalgia factor being the prime reason, but other than that, the cruel yet surprisingly innocent attempt of dutta to make her feel the same humiliation that he's bearing, an attempt to vent out his ager! So, finally they got married!
It feels so nice to see naku slipping into her usual simple outfits, this was something that I even appreciated in the show as well, unlike the other show, where heroine no matter how much poor, decks in designer saari and jewelry, right after marriage
You know what, the whole scene where dutta destructs the SR decorations, and his room, is perfectly written and I quite liked the way it was stated from naku's pov, and the way she though finding all this extremely violent, still somewhere justifies his anger , but I don't know why this particular line " he looked around for new things to break" it cracked me😆
The end scene, I mean just before the end scene, the reaction of dutta hearing upon naku's voice as if he's completely oblivious of her existence, this is something caught my huge attention, I noticed in the previous part also, dutta mentioned that he looked blankly to her when she asked how did he hurt himself, is this means, that dutta after the marriage has hardly paid any attention towards her existence, unlike nakusha, who though not interested in him, seems quite attentive towards him. But, it was nice to see that dutta doesn't HATE naku for being sups' sister (at least until now), but dislikes her severely coz she's been pestered on him.
Once again, fantastic update, rose, this update established naku's character in a Bingo manner. Nakusha, who compromises with her happiness but principles, who can seeing silver lining in dark clouds, who has the spirit to turn scars into stars. And nakusha, who loves some one else, looking forward to have something interesting to read at this front.
Waiting for the next!❤️
Edited by aishwish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
@ sonee Rosieee hey sonee ...this was seriously unexpected ...thanks so much for taking out time from ur studies to read n comment
missing u sooo much😳 , ..do i need to say how much i do ..my status can tell u clearly ..finally clicked me dabba is still waiting for me :..yup one thing u didnt realize for the 1st time u have scored a hattrick ..yipeee ..congrats baby finally u made it ..D anyway.. i knw ur used to now😳😆.. But have to say yaar what an awesome update!!!👏

Specially DSP's tareef 😍...hayee bande ka ghussa toh hum jaante hi hai and his killer look.go on ..i can read about u praising him 24x7... and i knw ur biased wen it cums to D😉 so tareef pe tareef hun!!! but kya kare ab banda hai hi aisa☺️ ..exactly ..uppar wale ne bhi badi fursat se banaya hai usse.., AND his line " jahan dikhe wahin goli maar diyo." ahhhaa again punjab da puttar!!😛😆.lol ..not punjabi puttar but hard core gangster. i loved d update, dialogues , scene's der reaction ekdum spot on..thank u .perfectly written rosie..m so glad u read it finally .very gud!👍🏼

But wud luv to mention two scene's ..fine go on m listening .i loved it,one wer D asked "kyun apni behen ki tarah tujhe b hi kisi aur se pyar hai?" and ... he had a sarcastic smile on his face as if it made him happy to know that like him even I had lost my love today." ..yup i hope u imagined mishal smirking at her ..and after this.. "Slowly he began walking towards me, as a lion approaches his prey " 😍woohoo can imagine MR aka DSP in this scene very well !!..ohh grt ..yup our lion is deadly when he is furious 👏"as for the second time in the day I showed how shameless and outrageous I could be.this time a more bold version of nakku .." No wonder nakkuji it's DSP's magic.ofcourse she is not crazy like sups to leave this golden opportunity ..😳 👏 .. marriage sequence errm haan MS scene nice one and after that DN scene in room aww DSP 💔.difficult ?? i think its quite easy to see him like that although we dont want him to go through any heartbreak but still it makes him all the more lovable .. by god so difficult to see him like this!

but u knw was laughing wen babi sed, " yedi ho gayi hai kya? Apne behen ke hone wale pati se tu shaadi karegi..sharam nahin ayi tujhe ye sochne aur kehne se pehle."come on babi chill !! HONEWALA tha yaar, hua toh nahin naa.socho agar ho jaata toh ??? sonee would have killed me , i am sure u must have said ," kya yahi padne ke liye maine dabba res kiya tha ?".so kaisi sharam?? ...waise bhi "Meri Rose kehati hai, Jisne ki sharam uske phoote karam!"..yup so no sharam ..rofl ..leave the sharam for sonee ..it suits her 😆
And at last "bikhari khwaishein" ..sorry to correct u my love ..its not bikhari (beggar) its bhikhari (shattered) ..rofl ..tune toh nakku ko bikhari bana diya ..dont worry u r not alone even aish has done the same ..lol.. Lyk always loved it! but, wud luv to add one thing that at the end of the each update..it start again..and i hope this confusion continues ..lol.. so many storms in my mind.hey dont exert ur kness keep them for ur exams . so yeh dil maange more baby!!!

Take care and don't miss me too much.IMPOSSIBLE.. i don't like hiccups hun!!😳
bye luv🤗
Sonee!

maana apani jeb se fakeer hain
phir bhi yaaron dil ke hum ameer hain
mite jo pyaar ke liye vo zindagi
jale bahaar ke liye vo zindagi
kisi ko ho na ho, hamen to aitabaar
jeena isi ka naam hai!!!



Note : Sorry for my blabbering .U know i hate it when u say sorry for my blabbering ..baby ur expressing ur views and that doesnt amount to blabbering ...actually randomly post my thoughts..in no particular order ..atleast u posted . :P hope it make some sense ..lol
adding after seeing my edited post : is it a sweet and short comment ?? :..absolutely ..lovely comments D ROFL
@ bluepal ..i am so happy that ur finding the story interesting ..thanks a lot
@ tammana ..yup nakku loves someone and married only to protect sups n family honor ..how things will change u shall know slowly n steadily
@ tahera ..good for u that a lot of confusion has cleared out and dear i cannot fill the void that bb have left , they are just perfect ..but glad u r liking this bold nakku who proposed to dutta , hope u enjoy the next updt as well and thanks for ur comments
@ sasiri ..hi dear , its grt to know that all ur questions have been answered and ur enjoying this ff
@ uwith ..thanks for liking the updt , with time story will become more clear
@ sinak ..hi sinak , thanks for loving the updt
@ nakusha ..hi nakusha , and plz no need to thank me dear , just like u enjoy reading even i enjoy writing , infact i am thankful that u appreciate my stories so much ..i am glad i could still keep the suspense intact ..yup still there are some questions left unanswered which will hopefully keep this ff going
@ mlshe ..thanks for the appreciation dear
@ yuvika ..hi dear , ok comg to the 1st ch , yup i shall be writing in 1st person , trying something different this time , hope to pull it off , well i could have used roopa instead of sups but since she was never shown in the show i thought of using sups as it would be easier for the readers to imagine that character and dislike it afterwards thus making my job a little easier. i knew u would pick out the similarity between this scene n KS ..lol..even i felt it after writing but hopefully the similarity shall end here itself but good observation as always
2nd ch : thanks for finding the updt good and ezpecially the continuation part, yup the story shall oscillate between dutta's pov and nakku's pov . this way it shall give u s deeper insight of what tasha are feeling . agree with u this nakku is gutsy and who she loves u shall know in future updts
@ sona ..hi sona , yeah the story has many layers which shall unfold with time , hopefully u shall enjoy knowing about them and thanks for ur views
@ bharti , hi dear ..so all ur doubts have been put to rest , so should i be happy for u?.lol..both tasha are in a loveless marriage but we all know that it wont be long when love shall creep in their relation secretly . me in experimental mood ? hmm dear u dont know in what mood i am while writing this story ..lol..but till so happy that ur liking this story
@ ranjana ..hi dear , thanks for finding the updt superb. yeah this ff is not so straightforward as my previous ones and i hope u like the suspense element . well nakku had no other option but to marry him and save her sis , ohh so u enjoyed her conditions ..good ..good ..yup sups is back but why n how that u will know as the story progresses . dear thought it reminds u of the movie "aaina" but i can assure u that its different .
@ aish ...
Baby! Look, I managed to be the last one to comment again *proud muh*😆but i am not happy to see u as the last one to comment. though i must admit that ur so smart, u knew i would be updtg on monday so just before that u sneaken in with ur much awaited comments..lol..
"Bikhari khwaashiyen"''...correction ...correction ..its not "bikhari but BHIKHRI ..lol..u and sonee have changed the whole meaning of the title ..hmmm, so it's nakusha's take on her fate! Great, and looks like that when you said that you try to give equal importance to dutta and naku, you were serious..dear though i look funny but m always serious ..! lol
Anyways, coming to the update, none of us like dutta to get into his "self destructive" mode,..i dont know why but i like it ..love to see him angry .. which he does quite often..if he doesnt then he is not dutta , he is an imposter ..lol.., yet this habit of his is somewhere infatuating(to me), azeeb hain na...not at all.. I liked the way naku wondered about dutta's reaction of sups come back, very subtly it underlined the fact, that naku is yet to understand (completely) that behind that stony strong body lies an ultra vulnerable and sensitive heart...what has happened in those six months of their marriage i shall not comment now ..read n find out ..
Thank you thank you thank you, for keeping naku educated this time!...i am so GLAD ..that u appreciated an educated nakku .. So she didn't knew that sups loved ravi, though his father knew, is this an indication that naku is not very close to sups....again no comments ..but i like the way u raise questions , its good to see someone thinking along my lines .. Okay something may be a little out of the way but still''Ganpat, the accountant...i know its funny but i wanted to show nakku coming from an educated family ..ok u can laugh i will also join u 😆 Seriously😆
And, this naku. She's NOT AT ALL BHOLI,..lol..and i know why ..laying her eyes on ur so called SWEETHEART..lol.. mauka dekha nahi ki started maroing chance pe dance, "Main karegi aapse shaadi",but seriously i have to admit after posting the updt i found this dialogue "main karegi aapse shaadi ..main lautayegi apki izzat" damn funny ..u know its generally the heroes who come up with such dialogues .. O hello madam shaadi hai koi halwaa nahi hai, that you said okay no body is eating so main kha leti hai😡. Upar se look at her, she's keeping conditions, fine the first one is understandable, but the second one, ...rofl ..i am laughing my heart out reading ur reaction ..I mean, he out of the whole world, needs to be reminded about that, arey paagal ladki, you have no idea how nave your husband is...agree with u she doesnt know dutta as much we do .., Hmm actually I doubt that naku intentionally brought up this topic, hinting dutta about their SR, chaalu kahin ki!😡 I feel so jealous, why can't I have a sister like sups...wow sis like sups n jiju like ravi ..lol😆
No seriously it was great to see naku reminding that they can't have a "normal marital" relationship,..now this is like my aish ..first butcher nakku n her actions n then say all is fine ..wow ..lol..but thanks for liking this educated n bold nakku . although she had an idea that it's a least possibility, showed the actual status of trust in their relationship'almost nil!..i wouldnt agree here, she trusts him its just that she doesnt wish to give him false hopes so cleared the status of their relationship at the onset She calls him Saab, her signature habit, but an educated girl like her calling him Saab (leaving options like Sir etc.) Is it a liberty you have taken?..another wonderful question raised , this thing came to my mind as well but u shall find the answer to it in the later chapters dont worry. Which of course is justified, (naku calling dutta anything but saab seems out of question) exactly it doesnt suit her
Loved the wedding sequence, of course nostalgia factor being the prime reason,..aww i can understand .. but other than that, the cruel yet surprisingly innocent attempt of dutta to make her feel the same humiliation that he's bearing, an attempt to vent out his ager! So, finally they got married!
It feels so nice to see naku slipping into her usual simple outfits, this was something that I even appreciated in the show as well, unlike the other show, where heroine no matter how much poor, decks in designer saari and jewelry, right after marriage thanks for appreciating such small small things
You know what, the whole scene where dutta destructs the SR decorations, and his room, is perfectly written and I quite liked the way it was stated from naku's pov, and the way she though finding all this extremely violent, still somewhere justifies his anger , but I don't know why this particular line " he looked around for new things to break" it cracked me😆good nah ..the whole updt was intense atleast something brought a smile on ur face
The end scene, I mean just before the end scene, the reaction of dutta hearing upon naku's voice as if he's completely oblivious of her existence, this is something caught my huge attention, I noticed in the previous part also, dutta mentioned that he looked blankly to her when she asked how did he hurt himself, is this means, that dutta after the marriage has hardly paid any attention towards her existence,..my lips are sealed ..lol.. unlike nakusha, who though not interested in him, seems quite attentive towards him..nakku has always been the more caring one out of the two. But, it was nice to see that dutta doesn't HATE naku for being sups' sister (at least until now), but dislikes her severely coz she's been pestered on him....i hate to repeat myself but no comments here too ..
Once again, fantastic update, rose..ohh thanks so much ..and as always loved reading ur comments .., this update established naku's character in a Bingo manner. Nakusha, who compromises with her happiness but principles, who can seeing silver lining in dark clouds, who has the spirit to turn scars into stars...well well well ..u are defining nakku's character a little to early ..wait my dear .. And nakusha, who loves some one else, looking forward to have something interesting to read at this front.
Waiting for the next!❤️

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