FF Abhiya: In ur Arms Forever Chap15-Pg-120 - Page 74

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best of luck yar...keep update when u r free from ur examz
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All the very best for your exams...!!
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hello

how r u???

soz for read it late ,,, yaar...

i hav been soo buzy with all couse work exams .. i hav to resive 24/2 so busy ... i hav not had time to read it...🥱

but will try to catch up to ur ff coz it totally brill😊

u r totally awesome writer wat a an update n this is for chap 12 amazing .. good ... cant wait to read it more .. 😊 cant wait to see wat abi say to pia ..cant belive she said i love u to abi

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Hi I jst started reading it a day before and i mst say its luvly
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hey ... its ok .. if its a bit .. after all it has to be on a amazingg standed ...
wat an update ... so awesome .. totallly love .. cont wait to read it more .. finally when pia is happy some one else is her to make her life hell ... arrr ... awww abi m pia sooo cute togeather ... totally brill amazing ... awesome... cont soon n dont forget to update meee ok this is for chap 13...
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Chap 14

"Pain never last 4 long but same goes wid happiness.Whn one side of earth shine wid bright sun thn other sleep in darkness which is a horror,a shadow tht haunts & consume u completely in darkness but tht darkness is an addiction.The more u try 2 run frm it the more it consume u but darkness is synonym 2 light if not in real dictionary but definately it was synonym in Abhiya's life.Destiny have other plans 4 one & all but wht plan it have 4 her fav couple was unknown will this epic love saga of ABHAY+PIA will haunt lke a shivering voices tht get lost in dark night or blossom lke a fragrance of flower which spread happiness"
Morning(Raichand Mansion)
Pia's room
Haseena: Pia my child u seem happy
Pia: Yes mom finally my Abhay is back & I m on cloud nine.Its our 2 month anniversary & Abhay wnts 2 take me out.
Haseena(wid tilted eyes): Seems lke u'll b late & may b tired also😉
Pia(blushing): MOM
Door bell ring
Haseena:I guess ur Majnu is waiting outside
Pia:Mom plz na he is not only my majnu but also ur son.So stop it
Servant knock the door of Pia's room"Ma'am Abhi sir is waiting 4 u"
Pia:Ask him 2 sit I m coming
Downstair(In Raichand's hall)
Chand: Good Morning Abhi.Wht r u doing in this early hour?
Abhi(thinking): God Y my 1st encounter is always wid this hitler?Kya bigada inka maine?Who will believe Pia's is his daughter & haseena aunty is his wife😕.Lucky dude got a sexy wife & double sexy daughter.
Chand was listening his thoughts & was jst glaring at him sheepishly while Haseena who was coming down wid Pia was contolling her smile hearing the same thoughts of Abhi
Chand(now wid more narrow eyes):U not replied me Abhi
Abhi:Oh sir.I jst came 2 pick up Pia
Chand:Oh I c & Y?
Abhi:Sir jst 4 dinner purpose
Chand: Where will u bpth come?Whn will u come? &..Whn...\
Abhi:(thinking): No wonder he is Pia's father.A complete questionnaire
Haseena: Stop it chand.Dont scare the poor soul
Chand: But it seems he scare ppl more often
Pia who listened his thoughts was angrily staring at him
Haseena: Bid them god bye
Parking lawn
Pia(2 Abhi): So u think me questionnaire huh
Abhi(pretending): Wht?Who said tht?I never said tht(in mind) Isse kaise pta chala?God koi witch toh nhi hai?Bhoot k saath phus gya kya?
Pia was trying 2 control her smile
Pia: Bhoot nhi chudail k saath phas gaye
Abhi(shock): Baap re kuch locha zaroor hai tume.Koi bhatkti aatma toh nhi ho who is waiting 4 her pichle janam ka pyar
Pia: Sahi pechana but pichle janam ka nhi iss janam k pyar ka hi intezaar hai
Abhi(smiling): Acha kaun hai?
Pia: Tumhe usse kya?after all I m witch
Abhi: But u know I love all kind of scary women whether witch,bhootni,bhatakti aatma or vampire LOL😆
Pia: Acha thn god may fulfill ur wish.Kya pta main vampire hi hoon😉
Abhi(naughtily): Huh huh I wont mind if a hot sexy vampire GF lke u will suck my blood
Pia(wid fake ego): Ah forget it.U not seem so delicious tht I'll torture my taste bud by tasting ur blood
Abhi(Faking): Ooch u broke my heart.How can u say this without tasting me?I guess u shuld taste me 1st
Abhi come closer 2 Pia.Pia was going back until she hit car's bonnet & thn Abhi kiss her slowly on her lips & suddenly passion overtake thm & soft gentle kiss turn into one violent rememberful kiss(I suck in romantic scenes.I can read thm but cant right thm.Need 2 appoint an assistant 2 right romantic scenes 4 me)
Abhi(sparkingly): hmm but If I would have been a vampire thn I would have definately taste ur blood 1st bcoz u taste delicious
Pia hit him playfully & blush hard
Pia: If u r finish wid ur chessy dialogs thn where r v going?
Abhi: Thts a surprise my princess
Pia: Tell na.I really dont have patience 2 wait 4 ur surprise
Abhi: Patience=Sweet fruit.So chill & dont b stubborn
They sat on the car & thn Abhi zoomed the car straight 2 Dark paradise
In dark paradise
Abhi parked his car in parking lawn & lke a true gentleman opened the door 4 his beloved Pia
Abhi: Madam plz give me the honour 2 become the escort of the most beautiful lady
Pia(wid smile): As u r begging me & I empathise wid beggars so U r allowed 2 do the honours
Abhi: Ah HUh
Pia: Ah huh
Pia put her arms around Abhi & went straight 2 restaurant.
The restaurant was situated in mid of an ocean & was decorated in black & white theme.The whole hall was decorated wid black & white curtains,white lilies & black pansy.In mid of hall there was a table beautifully decorated wid chocolate cosmos flower spreading its vanilla & hot chocolate smell making the environment more romantic.Heart shape candles of black & white colour enlighten the whole surrounding.Pia jst kept staring everything & was so overwhelmed wid Abhi's effort tht cant stop herself frm crying.Abhi wiped her tears wid his thumbs & kissed her eyes one by one.He took Pia 2 their table.
Abhi: So how's it?
Pia: Abhi its amazing.Thnx 4 everything
Abhi: Hey I shuld b the one 2 thnk u 4 coming in my life & giving it a meaning
Pia: I waited 4 u 4 so long
Abhi: Really?But I was always there wid u in ur heart Pia.Ok now will u stop getting emotional.V came here 2 enjoy not 2 cry.Madhubala kahinki
Pia: Shut up
Abhi: Lets dance
Band of musician played a beautiful number & Abhiya swing 2 the music(Imagine their dance urself as I suck in explaining thm)

I never understood before
I never knew what love was for
My heart was broke, my head was sore
What a feeling

Tied up in ancient history
I didnt believe in destiny
I look up you're standing next to me
What a feeling

What a feeling in my soul
Love burns brighter than sunshine
Brighter than sunshine
Let the rain fall, i don't care
I'm yours and suddenly you're mine
Suddenly you're mine
And it's brighter than sunshine

I never saw it happening
I'd given up and given in
I just couldn't take the hurt again
What a feeling

I didn't have the strength to fight
Suddenly you seemed so right
Me and you
What a feeling

What a feeling in my soul
Love burns brighter than sunshine
It's brighter than sunshine
Let the rain fall, I don't care
I'm yours and suddenly you're mine
Suddenly you're mine

It's brighter than the sun
It's brighter than the sun
It's brighter than the sun, sun, shine.

Love will remain a mystery
But give me your hand and you will see
Your heart is keeping time with me

What a feeling in my soul
Love burns brighter than sunshine
It's brighter than sunshine
Let the rain fall, I don't care
I'm yours and suddenly you're mine
Suddenly you're mine

I got a feeling in my soul ... [repeat chorus to end]
(Here is the video of the song):
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bpDNfwIrx1M[/YOUTUBE]


After dancing in romantic number both had their quiet meal.Abhi was enjoying every bite of his meal while Pia was gulping it wid lots of efforts.They both lead 2 beach 4 small walk,walking side by side in cool sand,holding each other hands & splashing water on each other.Pia's curly hair were flying in air causing problem 4 Abhi 2 get proper access of his gorgeous lady.So he gently put thm backed & kissed her forhead,thn caressed her cheek & softly kissed thm.Thn he rubbed his nose against Pia's white milky bare shoulder & at last kissed her rosy lips passionately.The beautiful sunset which was making sand looks lke a huge box of gold became the witness of the love of this epic couple.
Pia: I will never forget this day in my life Abhi
Abhi: Hey the day is not over yet
Pia: Wht do u mean?Wht now?
Abhi: Arey Gals fav thing?
Pia: Wht?
Abhi: Shopping & making their poor BF's kangal
Pia: Acha thn u forgot one more fav thing
Abhi: Wht?😕
Pia: Making their poor BF's coolie.I mean if I will buy thn u have 2 carry my bags na
Abhi: Ur wish my command madam..Afterall I m ur personal servant.I can give my life 4 u
Pia(keeps her finger on his lips): Abhi plz never say 2 end ur life
Abhi(in order 2 lighten the mood): Ok ok ok baba but wht will I get 4 my service?
Pia: Wht do u need?Ur my BF so its ur duty 2 pick my bags
Abhi: Nothing is free in this world.So this poor soul shuld get something 4 his services😉
Pia(naughtily): Ohhh wht u'll get as a payment of ur service will depend on quality of ur service.So please me wid ur service 1st
Abhi: Ab toh please karna hi padega
Both laugh & leave 4 mall
Star multiplex
Abhi was choosing clothes 4 Pia while Pia was busy changing thm in changing room.He chose some gowns,minis & a pearl saree of blue colour.He wnted 2 spread happiness in her life so he was very careful tht whtever clothes he choose 4 her shuld have bright colour which will make her look prettier.
Pia also selected some shirts 4 abhi which were mainly of grey,mauve,devil red colour.Both were roaming in mall,holding each other arms,laughing in their glory but 2 their dismal were caught red handed by 2 devils.
Tashi: Wht r u doing here bro?
Abhi(stammering): No..n.thi...ng
Misha: Pia wht is this?
Pia(nervous): Nothing mish
Tashi: Really nothing.Are v blinds?V caught u too red handed & still u both r lying
Mish: Yes I never expected this frm u.I used 2 consider my BFF,my soul sis but u😡
Pia: Sorry
Abhi: Ya sorry tashi.It was all Pia's mistake
Pia: Wht?😲My mistake😡.Look at u few minutes ago u were ready 2 give ur life 4 me & now whn u r caught red handed u r blaming me.I m not talking 2 u
Abhi: Pia I m sorry.Chudail sis dekha jst coz of u she is angry wid me
Tashi: Abey ghuchu y u always have 2 accuse other 4 ur own mistake?Its ur mistake.U calling me chudail.God u will get a vampire as ur wife
Abhi: A vampire wife is better thn a witch sis anyday
Mish: Stop it both of u
Pia: Ya I m leaving
Abhi: Sorry na.It was whole my mistake & u 2 devils let me tell u one thing I m dating Pia & I love her.
Tashi & mish(eagerly): Since whn?
Abhi: Since 2 months
Tashi & misha: Wht u both r dating 4 2 months & were not even bother 2 tell us.V r not talking to u 2
Abhiya: Sorry.Plzz sorry
Misha: Oh come on tashi inhe maaf kar dete hai.But only on 1 condition
Abhiya: Wht
Tashi:Tell us abt how it all started😉
Abhiya narrate their little venture 2 Tashi & misha
Tashi: Oh god Pia were u out of ur mind?I mean seriously ur men choice really sucks.Bro hi mila.U r gorgeous,intellegent.Koi aur nhi mila
Abhi: Hey chudail sis.Muh band rakh.Gals die 2 b wid me.Sis hai ki enemy.Itni mushkil se pataya & u r talking rubbish
Tashi: C I m frnd of mish & now of Pia also so I jst wnt 2 warn her
Abhi: Tu chup reh nhi toh I'll leave u in ur original place 4ever
Tashi: Where?
Abhi: Peepal ka tree coz bhootniya wahin latakti hain
Tashi: Toh tujhe mujhse pehle wahan pooch jana tha
Abhi: Tujhe jana chahiye
Tashi :Nhi tujhe
Abhi: Tujhe
Both were continuously fighting while mish & Pia were trying 2 stop these adults acting lke babies frm fighting but all in vain.Suddenly Pia's eyes caught something which left her speechless but she was unaware tht tht something or someone was more shocked thn she was...

"Never trust ur eyes but trust the eyes of ur beloved coz ur eyes can lie but the eyes of ur lover reflecting ur image can never lie.Ur face always look more clean,pristine,beautiful & perfect at day light so 2 know the real side of urs always trust dark night coz tht time mirror shows ur real image which can b very dreadful & unknown 2 u".
Kaha tha na darkness is synonym of light not only here but also in real life.So along wid light also hold on darkness wid urself so tht u can c ur real self.
NOTE:Ok I know I m very late & this update is also not well written.So I m sorry if u really dont lke it but u have 2 tolerate me & my writing skills.I know u all wnt 2 kill me but koi na.Enjoy

Edited by cuteshrishti - 13 years ago

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