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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: rizwanaq
waiting patiently for the next update

just read your note so hope its not too late

you said write a song

so make sure the next update is long

i want geet to find out that maan is munna quick

so we can progress with the love story and it should be slick...

ballay ballay shava shava

^^ thats the best I can do"

no it's not to late😆 loved it wah you even wrote in your song what you want to happen in the next update.

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#292

👏 This is for all the talented people who filled up the quote with there songs. I knew you guys could do it.

Part 4
Maan arrived in his house he thought about how he treated his innocent Angel in the name of revenge.

Past
G:WHY MAAN WHY WHAT DID I DO TO DESERVE SUCH A BEHAVIOR FROM YOU

Maan jerked geet hand away.

M:Don't touch me with your dirty hands.

Geet fell on her knees she couldn't take it anymore. She kept crying.

G:Wwwhhhyyy (She said between sobs)
M:You want to know why I will tell you why. Because your a bloody S***. You even deserve wost then this. Thx to you my little sister is fighting for her life she is in coma thx to you, you bloody bitch.
G:Whhaatt do you mean what happened to Anie I don't understand anything oh really. So you didn't now that Anie was married to Arjun
G:yes but what has that to do with anything

maan smirked

M:Oh how innocent you don't now

Geet shook her head indicating a no.

M:Oh then let me fresh your memory up you B****. Anie and arjun where happyly married but then you and anie got a tiff so you decided to get back at her. You tried to seduce Arjun but when he didn't fall for your trap. You tried another trick you made arjun drunk. You played anie's voice on your mobile and dressed like her so he thought you where anie. You made annie believe that arjun and you where having a affair. You S*** thx to you my sister tried to commit suicicde she is fighting for her life. She never came to know that Arjun is innocent. Both of them paid for you cheap trick but not only them even there litle daughter is now motherless and has a broken father. I will give you so much pain that you wish you could switch places with anie cause that would be less painfull I promise
G:Maan I did nothing I swear why do you think I would do something like that
M:Because arjun said your name and even Annie mutterd your name before slipping into a coma.
G:No maan and if you hated my so much why this act the first three months
M:And this act was to show you how it feels when someone snapps your happeniss away from you and trows you in a hell. It hurts more then doesn't it.

G:Maan I am innocent please give me own

M:Shut up In am not finished yet. In your place woh larhki ko maardethe hai na when she gets a divorce from her husband right or wrong kyunkin it's always the girls fault according to your family

Geet nodded.

M:Auro wo uski mom ko bhi maar dehthe hai na kyunki acorrding to them the mother failled in bringing her daughter up

Geet nodded again tears keep falling from her eyes

M:Geet do you want ke tumari mom ko kuch hoi
G:No maan please maan please trust me maihne
M:I said shut up just answer my dahm questions. Do you want ke tumari mom ko kuch hoi
G:nnnooo
M:good then you will do exactly as I say or else be ready for a divorce.
G:Yes maan
M:Stand up

Geet stood up

M:Go get my breakfast ready.
G:yes Maan

Geet didn't argue she did what he said cause she was scared for her mother. She would go through every pain just for her mommy.Geet made the breakfast she knocked on his door.

M:Come in

Geet walked in with the breakfast tray.Maan turned around.

M:come here

Geet walked towards him.

M:Come sit next to me

She did that

M:Now let me eat

Geet feaded him

M:No that was tasty

He gave a kiss on geet cheek

Geet was getting scared by his behaviour.

M:Now sweetheart have a nice day

he stood up and left. While geetv was still shaking by his behaviour. At one side he was a monster and at the other he would act all sweet. When maan left geet started crying again.
Maan came back from office.

M:Geet set the table for one.

She did as maan said. Maan walked over to geet. He handed her a packet.

M:Go where this now

Geet nodded and went to her room. When she opened the packet she got a shock. tears beamed from her eyes. The dress:

She wore it cause she knew she had no choice. She came out she was trembeling completly.

M:Oh drop the act geet walk with conffidence I know you must have wore even shorter dress then this to impress Arjun
G:Maan please belie
M:How dare you talk your not allowed to talk you are only allowed to answer my questions and do as I say get it or else I will make sure khe you and your mother iss dunyia ko chor ke joa ghe
G:sorry
M:Now why I will enjoy my dinner you will perform for me. maan hit the play button. Zara zara from race started playing. geet started crying and fell on her knees she couldn't take it anymore.

M:You stop your natak now and do as I say or else I will trow you out of my house right now.

Geet stood up and did as maan wanted. After her act the bell rang.

M:get lost to the guest room I don't want my gf to see you I said go

Geet left and started crying in her room. She calmed down and called her brother immidiatly she narrated the entire story but saying it is hapenning whit her friend she wanted to know what her family would do. he brother answered that of course whatever happening is sad but the society doesn't accept divorcies so if it was her he he would take his mom and her jaan. Maan heard the convo he smiled. When geet hung up. he walked into her room and carresed her hair. she looked up.

M:Come give me a hug

She hugged him

M:You must be broken after what you brother said. aww poor you

Maan pushed her away and laughed hystercially.

M:Well I am going to have a fun night oh and why don't you rehearse dance steps on sheela I am expecting a dance every night.

He gave her a huge packet.

M:This has a song list with which songs I want you to perform every night and the dresses. You where horrible today but it's okay you didn't prepare but from tomorrow on I want everything to be perfect. Or else

Geet nodded. maan left while geet fell on the ground and started sobbing again.

Next Update:😈 When 10 people will write a song by them self.

And guys check out Maan ki behti's new ff: MG FF-Aaiynaa.

Next:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2925491/link-to-thread-2-dirty-revenge-page-1?pn=71

Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago

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Ruchi

@ruchs

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#293

Yayyy Me FIRST…😆

Grrr Me hating Maan so much….😡

Me sure that this Arjun was up to no good…😡

Annie was the only one who could tell the truth…

Maybe annie wanted to protect Geet… That's why she was muttering her name before slipping into coma…😕

Guess Maan came to know about it later on…

Me hating this stupid custom..😡

How can they even think of killing the divorced girl and her poor mom…😡

But this is the truth… Some really stupid customs like this still prevail in the society…😭

That's sooo bad… Maan blackmailed her using her mom…

Geet must have got so scared and heart broken to hear the same reply from her brother….😭

Grr…. Maan made her feel like a s**t…😡

Poor Geet had no other option…😭

Me guessing you are gonna make me hate my dad much more… Right????😆

Awww Maan ki Beti's FF….😳

Thank you Mel for including my new FFs link….😳

Loved the update…👏

Me now thinking what to scribble for the song…

Love you...❤️

Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago

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Vinsh23

@Vinsh23

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#294

😊

thnx 4 the update

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sapna sharma

@kamiya

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#295

nice update

poor geet

continue soon

thnx for the pm

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kahkashansakina

@kahkashansakina

Sparkler

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#296

poor geet

maan you did to much.

very bad things with geet

loved it

Edited by kahkashansakina - 13 years ago

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#297

awesome update...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#298

who is lying...annie or arjun..?? or some1 else??

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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stuti

@maangeet_rocks

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#299

Nice update.mel...
I really really hate this maan...if he dares to sleep with someone other than geet during his marriage then I swear I will forcefully enter your ff and shoot him with a machine gun..I do swear it... 😡
Please show all the past at once so that we can enjoy the present...please na mel...baar baar past ko read karke sad sad feeling hone lagti hai..
Continue soon...
Thanks for the pm...
And make sure ki nisha maan ko torture kare 😉

Edited by icy_magma - 13 years ago

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princes939

@princes939

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Posted: 13 years ago

#300

Horible!!!lol update nahi!!!geet ke saat jo hoa wo!!!!
Update was gr8!!!!!!!
Oye mel the music girl kya hogaya aj kal kya condition hmme mil rhi hai!!lol u okay na!!hAha lol ❤️

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