Happy birthday D3:do lafzoon main OS

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Posted: 12 years ago
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guys this is an OS i ve written just 4 the birthday of d3!!
em so much in love wid D3 tat i wanna wish ma fav kriyaansh on this...
kriya on the footloose eliminations performed n aftr the preformance rey ws worried y she z nt talkng 2 him?so he asked
r:tell me BC!wots bothering u??
k:nthng!y u keep following me??
r:cx i love u BC!
k:bt i dnt love u..i nvr loved u..i used u 2 get name n fame n nw i dnt need u anymore(tryng 2 avoid eyecontact)
r:BC u cnt do this 2 me.i knw u r lying...
k:no em nt
r:if nt then look into ma eyes n say u dnt love me?
k:leave me alone
r:no u cnt escape wid this lie tat easily..stop teasing me BC!!(cupped her face)i love u!!!
k:tried 2 go bt rey blocked her way.a tear escaped her eyes n rey s grip on her loosened n she left 4m thr...
rey ws confused so he followed her 2 her home n overheard the convo between kriya n smriti
s:pack ur bag kriya!!u ve choosed dosti over dance n dil..nw we need 2 go bck 2 dehradhun n u hav 2 forget dance n rey..
kriya had tears in her eyes..
rey got the rzn...
he came 4m the door n knocked
smriti opened the door
s:y r u here rey??
r:aunty i wanna ask u y u dng this 2 kriya??dance z her lyf n she wont b happy widout it ever
s:i knw wots better 4 ma daughtr.i care 4 her happiness more than u
r:if u did u d hav understood..btw y u hate her dance???
s:cx she z passionate abt it n passion kills smtymes
r:cmon aunty!i cn assure u tat it wont kill her..plx dnt take her away 4m me n her dance..i love her n i cn giv her every happiness ov life..plx dnt take ma love away 4m me..i beg ov u!!
n he bent down in her feet
s:stand up rey!dnt try 2 emotionally blackmail me!em just nt cnvnced
r:i cn die 4 ur daughter
s:u r just betrayng her..
r:wot if i just giv u a proof tat i love her truly??
s:hw??
r:come wid me
n he takes them 2 a mandir,swears b4 god n then fills her maang wid sindhoor...kriya n smriti both had tears in ther eyes...n both take her blessings
 s:nw ma daughtr ll b away 4m me
r:no we ll stay wid u cx i ve no parents..cn i call u mummy
s:4 sure betey!!!
n they lived happily ever aftr!!!😊
sorry guys if it ws boring n nonsense bt i just wnted a bday gift 2 kriyaansh wot i call were d3 4 me n em nt xprnced at writing OS..this is probably ma 1st or 2nd OS😭
link 2 ma ff:dil se rey
kriyaansh n swaron ss:dazzling dream
swaron ss:phir muhabbat karney chala
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tinatartari thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thnks at least 1 person liked ma ff..i knw its horrible bt phr b!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
tina thoda filmy tha but cute tha
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It ws a bit filmy...but nice one...it ws cute...
tinatartari thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ek epi main filmy e o skta tha..abhi em nt into writing OS na!!
ll do better nxt tym
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ur os was nyce...nd ya  as all said it was a bit  filmy
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice OS tina.
hmmm nice way to manofy sasuma.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome OS...loved it very much
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it wasss really nyc nd cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shonu..Im seriously Katti wid u...I never come to d posts..Indiaforums topics of d3..i check d pms n my posts...I read it after a long tym n u didnt pm me,,Im katti wid u!!😭