kriyaansh n swaron ss:dazzling dream pt 3:pg 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi guys!u already knw me..4 those who dnt em tina😊
here i wanted sme break 4m the old ff routine n thot of a brilliant ide..just ma imagination abt kriya s grand entry in the show aftr taani has been introduced...
i knw n em definitely hurt like u all bt still lets assume tat news z true n nt an april fool then hw ll kriya come bck 2 the show aftr tat taani grl has made her entry?plx tell me shud i continue or nt???😭
ll start 4m whr kriya left n all tat happened n thr ll b swaron 2!!
part 1-pg 2
Part 2-pg 5
 
Part 3-pg 9
Part 4-pg
Part 5-pg
 
 
 
 
link 2 ma ff:dil se rey
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Posted: 12 years ago
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please do continue and please pm me when you will update
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ofcourse continue n do pm me
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superb concept tina. continue and offcourse pm me(yeh bhi batane ki baat hai kya)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Afcoz puchne ki kya baat hai.. Do continue
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of course continue...plzz do pm me..
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                                         PART 1
kriya made her last performance,broke up wid rey n went back 2 dehradhun..rey ws dejected,heart broken n had no urge 2 live..
he started living 4 his frnds..swaron came closer on rdx party n got a new grl taani in his life..taani grl enters his life like a stalker(tats all wot we saw uptil here.nw i ll continue ma story 4m her)
dilrey ws dancing in the audi on dil se rey imagining kriya wid him everywhere.bt it ws taani grl...rey ws in the middle of the dance just abt 2 extend his arms when he felt 4m his inner tat its nt kriya..he opens the blindfold n feels really bad..he leaves 4m thr angrily widout uttering even a single wrd...
he goes home n throws all his clothes,shirt,vest,shoes around n goes in his gym,breaks away many tiles n bricks 2 vent out his anger..swayam comes n brings him a glass of water..rey clutches it so hard tat it breaks into pieces n cut rey s hand..his hand z bleeding badly n he z nt giving even a damn 2 it..
sw:rey!ye tu kia kar raha e??
r:hw cud i??hw cud i do this wid her??i lived n died only 4 kriya..hw cn i imagine any othr grl in her place??
sw:rey!kriya left n she z nt cmng bck..man!u ve 2 move on!!
r:shouts loudly NOOO!!!y??y u did this wid me universe jee??
AFswayam turns on the news
rey hears in the news tat the bus 4m mumbai 2 dehradhun met wid an accident..many ov the passengers died n sme r srsly ill..
r:ohrey turns the news off
Aftr 2 days
rey gets a call 4m kria s cell..he ignores it..then anothr call comes 4m sme unknoen no
r:hi!reyansh singhaniya here.whoz this??
caller:its dr prateek shukla 4m city hospital mumbai
r:ya dr
dr:i want u 2 come 2 the hospital asap..we hav a srsly wounded grl who z in coma n she has nobody 2 attend..i saw ur no in her cell n called u
r:ok dr!i m cmng
 
he rushed  2 the hospital..his concious ws tellng him tat its his BC..
he goes thr n sees her BC lying unconcious n motionless on the bed..he z restless..the dr comes n hands him all her possessions n asks him 2 take care ov her
r:(very upset wid teary eyes)dr ll she gain conciousness or nt??
dr:i dnt knw...we cn just try n we r trying our best
rey sits close 2 her
r(thnkg) y did u do this wid me BC??i cnt believe u used me!nw i cnt even say its the result ov ur acts..pls gain conciousness soon...
rey 2 dr:whr z her mothr??
dr:the lady expired early morning...she has no relatives...rey feels sorry 4 her
rey opened her bag n looks into the thngs..
thr z the luion band he tied on her wrist,his gift,the dress,their pics n a letter..
r(thnkng)she ws sayng she dint love me n she just used me then y she kept all ma thngs n memoirs wid her??
he then reads open the letter...
PRECAP: the letter
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice...

loved it...

plz update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsoommee tina mann kepp it up whens next update and plz pm me
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Awesome!!!!
Omg kriya in coma
update the next part soon